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1基础·自主学习核心·互动探究SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建议信本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信,了解建议信的结构和语言特征,然后再写一封建议信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September,2018
DearWorriedFriend,Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfee
lterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.2基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehavi
our.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisu
nhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilyli
fe.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest,Su
sanLuo3基础·自主学习核心·互动探究(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①____________vt.建议②____________adj.不健康的③____________vt.鼓励④____________adj.有用的⑤__
__________vt.忠告,建议⑥________________闲暇⑦____________盼望,期望⑧________________对……担心⑨____________喜爱⑩____________对……上瘾⑪_______
_____集中精力于⑫___________________对……有益处⑬____________交朋友⑭____________收到……的来信⑮___________________玩得愉快recommendunhealthyencourageusefula
dviceinone’ssparetimelookforwardtobeworriedaboutbeattractedtobeaddictedtoconcentrateonbegoodfor/dogoodtomakefriendshearfromenjoyoneself/havef
un4基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华,你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难,请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友;2.要和朋友同甘共苦;患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友;3.友谊需要
时间和投入(effort)。5基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1:the____________oftheletterPar
agraph2:the____________thatyougiveParagraph3:thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshope6基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step
2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建议②_____________________________n.情况③________________________
_____交朋友④_____________________________做……有困难⑤_____________________________接受某人的建议⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦________________________
_____需要⑧_____________________________全心全意tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvic
esharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartinto7基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦,我很抱歉。(havetroubl
ein...)________________________________________________________________________②如果你采纳我的建议,改变这种情况是很容易的。(be+adj.+todo)_______________________
_________________________________________________③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢?(whynot)____________________________________________________________
____________④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗?(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...?)______________________________________________________________________
__⑤正如一句谚语说的,患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)________________________________________________________________________Iams
orrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotb
eafriendfirst,ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayin
ggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.8基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.howe
ver,tobeginwith,inaddition,lastbutnotleast15Sept,2019DearSuRu,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,th
esituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.9基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Tobeginwith,whynotbeafriendifyouwanttom
akefriends?Inaddition,wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendin
deed.Lastbutnotleast,wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandef
fort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours,LiHua10基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner,
andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsforthead
vice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytore
ad?11基础·自主学习核心·互动探究篇章结构Thefirstpart:thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart:thebody(fact-stating,youropinionan
dhope)oftheletterThethirdpart:theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter12基础·自主学习核心·互动探究亮点表达1.建议信开头常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatin
gwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦,你也可能经常感到孤独。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadv
iceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。13基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.表达建议常用句式①First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis,youca
nmakefriends.首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部?如果你这样做的话,就会交到朋友。②Second(ly),youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,
youwillfeelbetter.其次,你应该尽力与人交谈。这样,你会感觉好点。③Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三,如果你看书或
听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。④Lastbutnotleast,youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最后但同等重要的是,你应该先和她谈一谈。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,yous
houldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮助。14基础·自主学习核心·互动探究3.建议信结尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。②A
stimegoeson,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和
你交朋友的。③Ibelievethatifyoufollowmyadvice,you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会和同学们相处好的。15基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作
技巧连句成篇,行文连贯句子是由词汇组成的,而文章是由句子组成的,遣词造句要按语法和习惯表达,组句成篇也要按照篇章结构。选择能够恰当表示并列、递进、因果、转折、条件等意义的连词,把要点句子连接成文,使句与句,段与段之间意思连贯,衔接自然,从而生动、准确地表达考题内容。同时要根据表达的需要注意
变换句式,避免句子结构的单调性。如:使用不同结构、不同长度的句子,尽量使句型多样化;多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句,使行文更加流畅有力;改变句子开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再在句末加上一个状语。增加书面表
达的表现力。16本节内容结束