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SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建议信本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel

10September，2018DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouar

eanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.Irecommendthatyout

alktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandthe

onlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.Somestudentsevenbec

omeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemt

ogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①recommendvt.建议②unhealthyadj.不健

康的③encouragevt.鼓励④usefuladj.有用的⑤advicevt.忠告，建议⑥inone’ssparetime闲暇⑦lookforwardto盼望，期望⑧beworriedabout对……担心⑨beattractedto喜爱⑩beaddictedto对……上瘾⑪concent

rateon集中精力于⑫begoodfor/dogoodto对……有益处⑬makefriends交朋友⑭hearfrom收到……的来信⑮enjoyoneself/havefun玩得愉快Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李

华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph

1：thepurposeoftheletterParagraph2：thesuggestionsthatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’shopeStep2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①tip/advi

ce/suggestionn.建议②situationn.情况③makefriends交朋友④havetrouble/difficultyindoing...做……有困难⑤takeone’sadvice接受某人的建议⑥sharehappiness

andsorrowwith...和……同甘共苦⑦callfor需要⑧putone’sheartinto全心全意2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)Iamsorrytoknowthaty

ouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.③要交朋友为什么不先做一

个朋友呢？(whynot)Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titb

eagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Step3Dra

ftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2019DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouare

havingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwit

h，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayingg

oes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfort

imeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHuaⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpa

yattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruse

properexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasy

toread?篇章结构Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropini

onandhope)oftheletterThethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter亮点表达1.建议信开头常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoum

ayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。③Herear

esometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。2.表达建议常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参加

一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。③Third(

ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。④Lastb

utnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看

来，你们应该互相帮助。3.建议信结尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubet

terandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucanfollowtheaboveadvice.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。③Ibe

lievethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’llgetalongwellwithyourclassmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。写作技巧连句成篇，行文连贯句子是由词汇组成的，而文章是由句子组成的，遣词造句要按语法和习惯表达，组句成篇也要按

照篇章结构。选择能够恰当表示并列、递进、因果、转折、条件等意义的连词，把要点句子连接成文，使句与句，段与段之间意思连贯，衔接自然，从而生动、准确地表达考题内容。同时要根据表达的需要注意变换句式，避免句子结构的单调性。如：使用不同结构、不

同长度的句子，尽量使句型多样化；多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，使行文更加流畅有力；改变句子开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再在句末加上一个状语。增加书面表达的表现力。