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原则5吃透八大应用文写作题型之道歉信&求助信&电子邮件专家说考情高考新考法学霸好声音全国卷3套卷3年来考查过道歉信、求助信和电子邮件;2020年全国卷Ⅲ考查求助信。2020年全国卷Ⅲ求助外教MissEvans帮忙指导改编一个短剧,体现对文艺的重视。1.会运用道歉信、求助信、电子邮件等的表达;2
.一定要言之有艺秀文采。◎学写考场满分作文◎[2020·全国卷Ⅲ]假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.
商定时间地点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua满分作文第一步:“五定”审题“三段”谋篇定体裁定人称定时态定要点、定结构第一段开篇点题点明写信目的——请求帮助根
据英语课文改编一个短剧第二段(3个要点缺一不可)1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间地点求助信第一人称一般现在时三段谋篇第三段(巧妙收尾)表达期待满分作文第二步:斟酌词句设计亮点1.我写信是想请您指导一部根据我们的一篇文章改编短剧。(高频词汇+定语从句+被动语态)_____________
______________________________________________________________________________________________2.它讲述了一个名叫黛西的女孩的故事,她和一些野生动物交谈,并下定决心帮助保
护环境。(非谓语动词作定语+定语从句)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'
mwritingtoaskforyourguidanceonashortplay,whichisadaptedfromoneofourtexts.IttellsastoryaboutagirlnamedDaisy,whota
lkswithsomewildanimalsandmakesuphermindtohelpprotecttheenvironment.3.如果您方便的话,我们可以在本周日早上8点在我们学校的艺术大厅见面吗?①高频词汇:Couldweme
etinourschoolarthallat8:00amthisSunday________________________②高级句式(if条件状语从句)Couldwemeetinourschoolarthallat8:00amt
hisSunday________________________4.我们真诚地希望你们能帮我们这个忙,帮助我们提高成绩。(词汇不重,彰显水准)Wesincerelyhopeyoucan____________________________________________
____atyourearliestconvenience?ifitisconvenientforyou?dousafavorandhelpimproveourperformance.满分作文第三步:巧妙过渡完美成篇_____________________
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________DearMi
ssEvans,I'mwritingtoaskforyourguidanceonashortplay,whichisadaptedfromoneofourtexts.Thetextwehavechosenist
itled“WildlifeProtection”.IttellsastoryaboutagirlnamedDaisy,whotalkswithsomewildanimalsandmakesuphermindtohelpprotecttheenvironme
nt.Weneedyoutogiveussomeexpertguidanceondialoguebetweencharacters,body-action,plot,setting,andsoon.Couldwemee
tinourschoolarthallat8:00amthisSundayifitisconvenientforyou?Wesincerelyhopeyoucandousthisfavorandhelpimproveourperf
ormance.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua3组不可不记的书信类万用句式道歉信一、写作架构要规范道歉信通常包括以下三个部分:1.向对方表示歉意;2.说明道歉的原因,对失误或错误进行解释(一般要求考生自由发挥);3.提出补救措施,请求原谅。其结构
通常为:二、亮点句式背一番1.吸引阅卷人开头句(1)I'mwritingtoapologizetoyoubecauseI'munabletogotothebookstorewithyouasplanned/attheappoi
ntedtime.我写信是为了向你道歉,因为我不能按约定/在约定时间和你一起去书店。(2)IreallywanttoacceptyourinvitationandtakethisopportunitytointroducethetraditionalChinesep
aintingtoforeignfriends,butI'msorrytotellyouthatIcan'tbecauseIamoccupiedpreparingaperformanceforthecomingNationalDa
y.我真的很想接受您的邀请,并借此机会向外国朋友介绍中国传统绘画,但我很遗憾地告诉您,我不能参加,因为我忙于为即将到来的国庆节准备表演节目。(3)Iwouldliketooffermyapologyf
ornotbeingabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.非常抱歉本周六不能教你制作中国结了。2.吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)ThereasonwhyIwon'tbeavailableatthattimeisthatmygrandfat
herfellillsuddenlyyesterdayandmyfamilyaretakingturnstotakecareofhiminthehospital.SoIhavetostaywithhimthatday.我那时没空的原因是我爷爷昨天突然生病了,我的家人正在医院轮流照顾
他。所以那天我不得不陪着他。(2)IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewil
lnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.我刚发现那天下午我要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这次更换不会给您带来太多麻烦。3.吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Sorryagainforanyinconveniencecausedbymyabsence.对于我的缺席给您带来的不便,我再次表示歉
意。(2)I'mawfullysorryforthesuddenchangeoftheplan.AndI'mwonderingwhetheritisOKifwegototheexhibitionnextSaturdaymorning.计划突然
改变,我感到非常抱歉。我想知道我们下周六上午去看展览是否可以。求助信一、写作架构要规范求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此整篇文章应用一般现在时,其结构通常为:二、亮点句式背一番1.吸引阅卷人开头句(1)ThereasonwhyIamwritingtoyouist
hatIquarreledwithmyfriendLucyandIneedyourhelpnow.我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友露西吵架了,我现在需要你的帮助。(2)Wouldyoupleasedomeafavou
r?你能帮我一个忙吗?2.吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)Ihavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.However,I'mnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatI'veused.I'mwonderingifyoucou
ldsparesomeprecioustimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.我刚刚完成了我的求职信和个人简历。然而,我不太确定我使用的语言和格式。我想知道你是否能抽出一些宝贵的时间来看看,并做出必要的修改。(2)Wouldyouplea
sepickupmyuncleattheairportandtakehimtohishotelsincethisishisfirstvisittotheUS?Thankyouinadvance.你能到机场接我叔叔并把他送到旅馆吗?因为这是他第一次来美
国。提前谢谢你。(3)I'mwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticaladviceasIknowyou'veorganizedsimilaractivities.我想知道你是否能给我一些实用的建议,因为我知道你也组织过
类似的活动。3.吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavourandsparesometimetopolishmyapplicationletterandresume.如
果您能帮我一个忙,抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历,我将不胜感激。(2)I'meagerforyourtimelyhelp./I'meagertogetyourtimelyhelp.我渴望得到你及时的帮助。电子邮件一、写作架构要规范英文电子
邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同,具体写作结构为:二、亮点句式背一番1.吸引阅卷人开头句(1)Iamverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwodaysago.
我很高兴收到你两天前寄给我的信。(2)I'mgladtohearfromyouandI'dliketosharemyexperienceofhelpingmyparentsdohousework.很高兴收到你的来信,我想和你分享我帮助父母做家务的经验。
2.吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)Ifnecessary,wecanarrangeaface-to-facediscussionsometimethisweek.如果有必要,本周我们可以找个时间安排一次面谈。(2)O
fallthecourses,IlikeChinesePaintingbestbecauseithelpsusexperiencetheinnerharmonyofmanandnatureandtastethebeautyofChineseculture.在所有的课程中,我
最喜欢国画,因为它让我们体会到人与自然的内在和谐,品味中国文化之美。3.吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)I'dappreciateitifyoucouldmakearesponseatyourearliestconvenienc
e.如果您能在方便时尽早回信,我将非常感激。(2)Lookingforwardtohearingfromyouassoonaspossible.盼望能尽快收到你的回信。◎考场练兵检验考试能力◎Writing1道歉信[2020·佛山市教学质量检测(二)]假定你
是李华,原定今年6月去纽约旅游并约定探访朋友Taylor,现因故推迟。请你给Taylor写信,包含以下要点:1.写信目的;2.推迟的原因;3.告知新计划。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。______________
__________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文:DearTaylor,Howarethi
ngsgoingwithyouthesedays?I'msorrytotellyouthatIcan'tmakeittoNewYorkandvisityouinJuneaspreviouslysche
duled.IsupposeeverybodyaroundtheworldhasbeensomehowaffectedbyCovid-19,andI'mnoexception.Thegreatestinfluen
ceonmeisthatthecollegeentranceexamthisyearinChinahasbeenpostponedtoJuly.Asaresult,mysummervacationwon'tbegin
untilmid-JulyandIhavetoreschedulemytriptoyourcity.Ifthevirusisundercontrolsoon,IwillgoandseeyouinJanuary,duringmyfirstcollegewintervocation.Iwis
hitwouldbeconvenientforyoutomeetmethen.Pleasestaysafeandstayincontact.Yours,LiHuaWriting2求助信[2020·江淮十校高三第三次联考]假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问
题以至学习低效。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Charlie写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下:1.写信意图;2.存在问题;3.希望得到帮助。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文:DearCharlie,IamL
iHua,aSenior3student.Lately,I'vebeenbusypreparingformyCollegeEntranceExam,butunluckilyIfinditquitehardtobeconce
ntrated.SoI'mwritingtoyouforguidance.I'mfacedwithsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetim
etotakesports.Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon'twanttoletthemdown,Whattroublesm
emostisthatit'sdifficultformetoenjoyasoundsleepeverynight.Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththosedifficulties.Yourpreciousadvi
cewillbemuchappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHuaWriting3电子邮件[2020·河北衡水中学模拟]假定你是李华,你市将举办留学生汉语演讲比赛,主题为“我眼中的中国”(C
hinainmyeyes)。请给在你校留学的Jonah写一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.演讲主题;2.比赛时间和地点;3.邀请他代表你校参加。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________参考范文:DearJonah,KnowingthatyoushowinterestinChineseculture,Iamgladtosharewithyouapieceo
fgoodnews,whichisrelatedtoaChinesespeechcontestdesignedforexchangestudentsinourcity.Thecontest,whosethemeis“Chinainmyeyes”,willbebeldintheCit
yLibraryonMay18th,2020.What'sknowntousisthatyouhavemadegreatprogressinlearningChinese,socouldyoutakepartinthisactivityasarepre-sentativeofour
school?NotonlywillyoulearnmoreaboutChinaanditsculturefromthecontest,butyoucanmakeyourlifemoreinterestingandcolorful.Looking
forwardtoyourearlyreply!Yours,LiHua