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1基础·自主学习核心·互动探究SectionⅦReadingforWriting——概要写作[题型解读]概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。[评分标准]《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷

时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。2基础·自主学习核心·互动探究[写作方法]

1.定位——查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程

中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。3基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作技巧如何写概要写作

？一、题型特点概要写作的阅读材料词数一般为300左右。写作要求考生在对原文阅读后根据其内容写出一篇约60词的内容概要。概要所用语句既要用词准确，结构合理，语义连贯，不得抄写原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。4基础·自主学习核心·互动探究二、注意事项1.词数要限制在60词左右，上下不得超过

10个单词。2.要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3.人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可变换成第三人称。4.写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。5基础·自主学习核心·互动探究[典例示范]阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容

概要。We’vereachedastrange—somewouldsayunusual—point.Whilefightingworldhungercontinuestobethematterofvitalimportanceaccording

toarecentreportfromtheWorldHealthOrganization(WHO)，morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingun

derweight.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Worse，nearly18millionchildrenundertheageoffivearoundthewor

ldareestimatedtobeoverweight.What’sgoingon?Wereallydon’thavemanyexcusesforourweightproblems.Thedangersoftheproblemhaveb

eendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthemessageisgettingthrough—uptoapoint.6基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Inthe1970s，Finla

nd，forexample，hadthehighestrateofheartdiseaseintheworldandbeingoverweightwasitsmaincause.Notanymore.Apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumbero

fheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsd

oubledbetween2001and2005，anddoctorsevenoffersurgeryofremovingfatinsideandchangetheshapeofthebody.Nowonderitranksastheworld’smostbo

dy-consciouscountry.Weknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Byfarthemostpopularexcuseisnottakingenough

exercise.Morethanhalfofusadmitwelackwillpower.7基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Othersblamegoodfood.Theysay：it’sjusttooi

nvitinganditmakesthemovereat.Somealsoblametheirparents—theirgenes.Butunfortunately，theparentsarewrongedbecausethey’renormalinshape，orrathersl

im.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.Parentsareeagertoseetheirkidsshapeup

.DoasIsay—notasIdo.8基础·自主学习核心·互动探究[解题思路]第一步：定位Part1：1.Morepeoplenow________________________thanfrombeingunderweight.2.It’sthe______

__________that’smorelikelyto________________thesedays.Part2：3.The______oftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousby_____________________________.4.InFinland，a

public-healthcampaignhasgreatly____________thenumberof________________deathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.diefrombeing

overweightgoodlifekillusdangerspublic-healthcampaignssince2001reducedheartdisease9基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Part3：5.Maybeth

atexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinland________________doubledbetween2001and2005.6.Weknow___________________________________—butactuallydoin

gitisanothermatter.Part4：7.Others____________goodfood.8.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelatively____________________________

___.takingdietpillswhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweightblameunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight10基础·自主学习核心·互动探究第二步：改写1.要点1和2合并：Goodlifeismorelike

lytokillusandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.改写：Goodlifebecomes_______________________________________andmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.2.要点

3和4合并：Peoplehavegraduallyrealizedthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthenu

mberofheartdiseasedeathshasbeengreatlyreducedinFinland.改写：Since2001peoplehavegradually____________________________

thedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeople________________heartdiseasehasdroppedinFinland.thekillerofourhealthbecomeawareofdyi

ngof11基础·自主学习核心·互动探究3.要点5和6合并：Manypeopletookdietpillstoloseweightthoughweknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight.改写：Manypeop

le____________________________toloseweightthoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.4.要点7和8合并：Peopleshoulds

topmakingexcusesandtakepositiveactiontolostweight.改写：Althoughtherearesomeexcuses，peopleshould____________________tolo

stweight.tooksomenegativemeasuresactpositively12基础·自主学习核心·互动探究第三步：核查Nowadays，goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhe

althandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.(要点1)Since2001peoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweightthroug

hpublic-healthcampaignsandpeopledyingofheartdiseasehasdropped.(要点2)Regrettably，manypeopletooksomenegativemeasurestoloseweight

thoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.(要点3)Althoughtherearesomeexcuses，peopleshouldactpositivelytolostweight.(要点4)13本节内容结束