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SectionⅦReadingforWriting——概要写作[题型解读]概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。[评分标准]《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷

时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。[写作方法]1.定位——查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单

词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3

.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。写作技巧如何写概要写作？一、题型特点概要写作的阅读材料词数一般为300左右。写作要求考生在对原文阅读后根据其内容写出一篇约60词的内

容概要。概要所用语句既要用词准确，结构合理，语义连贯，不得抄写原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。二、注意事项1.词数要限制在60词左右，上下不得超过10个单词。2.要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3.

人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可变换成第三人称。4.写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。[典例示范]阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内

容概要。We’vereachedastrange—somewouldsayunusual—point.Whilefightingworldhungercontinuestobethematterofvitalimportanceac

cordingtoarecentreportfromtheWorldHealthOrganization(WHO)，morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingunderweigh

t.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Worse，nearly18millionchildrenundertheageoffivearoundtheworldareestimatedtobeoverweigh

t.What’sgoingon?Wereallydon’thavemanyexcusesforourweightproblems.Thedangersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintous

bypublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthemessageisgettingthrough—uptoapoint.Inthe1970s，Finland，forexample，hadthehighestrateofheartdiseaseinth

eworldandbeingoverweightwasitsmaincause.Notanymore.Apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentover

thepastthreedecades.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005，and

doctorsevenoffersurgeryofremovingfatinsideandchangetheshapeofthebody.Nowonderitranksastheworld’smostbody-consciouscountry.Weknowwhatweshould

bedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Byfarthemostpopularexcuseisnottakingenoughexercise.Moretha

nhalfofusadmitwelackwillpower.Othersblamegoodfood.Theysay：it’sjusttooinvitinganditmakesthemovereat.Somealsoblametheirparents—their

genes.Butunfortunately，theparentsarewrongedbecausethey’renormalinshape，orratherslim.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerel

ativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.Parentsareeagertoseetheirkidsshapeup.DoasIsay—notasIdo.[解题思路]第一步：定位Part1：1.Morepeopl

enowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingunderweight.2.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Part2：3.Theda

ngersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaignssince2001.4.InFinland，apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyre

ducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.Part3：5.Maybethatexplainswhythe

percentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005.6.Weknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisan

othermatter.Part4：7.Othersblamegoodfood.8.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelativelyunlikelyto

havetriedtoloseweight.第二步：改写1.要点1和2合并：Goodlifeismorelikelytokillusandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.改写：Goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhealthan

dmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.2.要点3和4合并：Peoplehavegraduallyrealizedthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignssinc

e2001andthenumberofheartdiseasedeathshasbeengreatlyreducedinFinland.改写：Since2001peoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweig

htthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeopledyingofheartdiseasehasdroppedinFinland.3.要点5和6合并：Manypeopletookdietpillstolosewe

ightthoughweknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight.改写：Manypeopletooksomenegativemeasurestoloseweightthoughtheyknewwhatth

eyshouldbedoing.4.要点7和8合并：Peopleshouldstopmakingexcusesandtakepositiveactiontolostweight.改写：Althoughtherearesomeexcuses，peopleshoul

dactpositivelytolostweight.第三步：核查Nowadays，goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhealthandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.(要点1)Since2001p

eoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeopledyingofhea

rtdiseasehasdropped.(要点2)Regrettably，manypeopletooksomenegativemeasurestoloseweightthoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.(要点3)Althoughthereares

omeexcuses，peopleshouldactpositivelytolostweight.(要点4)