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SectionⅦReadingforWriting——概要写作[题型解读]概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再

现。[评分标准]《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了

语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。[写作方法]1.定位——查找核心信息通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息在核心信息的基础上进行语言表

达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。写作技

巧如何写概要写作？一、题型特点概要写作的阅读材料词数一般为300左右。写作要求考生在对原文阅读后根据其内容写出一篇约60词的内容概要。概要所用语句既要用词准确，结构合理，语义连贯，不得抄写原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中

心大意。二、注意事项1.词数要限制在60词左右，上下不得超过10个单词。2.要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3.人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可变换成第三人称。4.写作时尽可能地使用复合句

，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。[典例示范]阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。We’vereachedastrange—somewouldsayunusual—point.

WhilefightingworldhungercontinuestobethematterofvitalimportanceaccordingtoarecentreportfromtheWorldHealthOrganizati

on(WHO)，morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombeingunderweight.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Worse，nearly18mill

ionchildrenundertheageoffivearoundtheworldareestimatedtobeoverweight.What’sgoingon?Wereallydon’thavemanyexcusesf

orourweightproblems.Thedangersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthemessageisgettingthroug

h—uptoapoint.Inthe1970s，Finland，forexample，hadthehighestrateofheartdiseaseintheworldandbeingoverweightwasitsmaincause.Notanymore

.Apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.Maybethatexplainswhythepercent

ageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005，anddoctorsevenoffersurgeryofremovingfatinsideandchangetheshapeofthebody.Nowond

eritranksastheworld’smostbody-consciouscountry.Weknowwhatweshouldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisan

othermatter.Byfarthemostpopularexcuseisnottakingenoughexercise.Morethanhalfofusadmitwelackwillpower.Othersblamegoodfood.Theysay：it’sjusttooi

nvitinganditmakesthemovereat.Somealsoblametheirparents—theirgenes.Butunfortunately，theparentsarewrongedbecausethey’renormalinshape，orrathe

rslim.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerelativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.Parentsareeagertoseet

heirkidsshapeup.DoasIsay—notasIdo.[解题思路]第一步：定位Part1：1.Morepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweightthanfrombei

ngunderweight.2.It’sthegoodlifethat’smorelikelytokillusthesedays.Part2：3.Thedangersoftheproblemhavebeendrilledintousbypublic-healthcampaigns

since2001.4.InFinland，apublic-healthcampaignhasgreatlyreducedthenumberofheartdiseasedeathsby80percentoverthepastthreedecades.

Part3：5.MaybethatexplainswhythepercentageofpeopleinFinlandtakingdietpillsdoubledbetween2001and2005.6.Weknowwhatweshou

ldbedoingtoloseweight—butactuallydoingitisanothermatter.Part4：7.Othersblamegoodfood.8.It’sasimilarstoryaroundtheworld，althoughpeoplearerel

ativelyunlikelytohavetriedtoloseweight.第二步：改写1.要点1和2合并：Goodlifeismorelikelytokillusandmorepeoplenowdiefrombein

goverweight.改写：Goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhealthandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.2.要点3和4合并：Peoplehavegraduallyrealized

thedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignssince2001andthenumberofheartdiseasedeathshasbeengreatlyreducedinFinlan

d.改写：Since2001peoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeop

ledyingofheartdiseasehasdroppedinFinland.3.要点5和6合并：Manypeopletookdietpillstoloseweightthoughweknowwha

tweshouldbedoingtoloseweight.改写：Manypeopletooksomenegativemeasurestoloseweightthoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.4.要点7和8合并：Peoples

houldstopmakingexcusesandtakepositiveactiontolostweight.改写：Althoughtherearesomeexcuses，peopleshouldactpositivelyto

lostweight.第三步：核查Nowadays，goodlifebecomesthekillerofourhealthandmorepeoplenowdiefrombeingoverweight.(要点1

)Since2001peoplehavegraduallybecomeawareofthedangersofbeingoverweightthroughpublic-healthcampaignsandpeopledyingofheartd

iseasehasdropped.(要点2)Regrettably，manypeopletooksomenegativemeasurestoloseweightthoughtheyknewwhattheyshouldbedoing.(要点3)Althoughtherearesomee

xcuses，peopleshouldactpositivelytolostweight.(要点4)