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第三讲怎样跳出“大众分”——词汇要“美”,妙语要“多”在高考阅卷时,一份作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳,如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇,老师的给分也绝不会吝
啬![写作技法指导]高考英语书面表达评分标准对第五档的要求有这样一段话:语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致。由此可以看出,高考英语书面表达要求考生尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇。何为较高级词汇?众所周知,词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分
,但某个词一旦得到使用,放在了具体语境中,使用得极为得当,体现了该词的美妙价值,为句子增色,让文章添彩,它就是较高级词汇;相反,使用时体现的价值平平,没有创意,它就是较低级词汇。巧用4招,实现由低级向高级的转化1.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想
不到的词汇或表达,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。①Ifyouwanttoapplyformembership,youareaskedtofillintheapplicationformandsendanemailtopingpong123.com.→Ifyouwantt
oapplyformembershipyouarerequiredtofillintheapplicationformandsendanemailtopingpong123.com(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)②TheapplicationtimeisfromOct
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incerelyhopeyoucanhelpmecorrectthem.→MyapplicationandresumehavebeenpreparedandIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishthem.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)④
SoIhavetobotheryoutocorrectmymistakesinthematerialIattachtotheletter.→SoIhavenochoicebuttobotheryoutocorrectmymistakesinthematerialIatta
chtotheletter.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)⑤Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.→Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.(2
016·全国卷Ⅲ)⑥IwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltinspaceandwhetherspacetravelissointerestingasIhaveread.→Iwouldalsoliketoknowhowhefeltins
paceandwhetherspacetravelissuchgreatfunasIhaveread.(2015·安徽卷)⑦Successfully,IhavehelpedherinseveralEnglis
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ghandtoherinseveralEnglishactivitiesofmyclass,whichhavebeenappreciatedbybothteachersandclassmates.2.更新换代,避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语
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nbehalfofourschool.→Apartfromregulartraining,ourteamwilljoininavarietyofactivities,suchasparticipatinginsomenationalcompetitionsonbehalfofo
urschool.(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)②What’smore,inordertoknowmuchaboutChineseculture,itisimportantforyoutoknowthecontent,Ta
ngPoetry.→What’smore,inordertohavemuchknowledgeofChineseculture,itisofgreatimportanceforyoutobeawareofthecontent,TangPoetry.
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ayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.(2015·浙江卷
)3.单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先,应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动,可以“一词传神”。①Consequently,someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas,causingaslowergrowth.→Asa
consequence,someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas,leadingtoaslowergrowth.(2017·江苏卷)②Iwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesumm
ervacationandI’dlikeyoutohelpme.→IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI’dlikeyoutodomeafavor.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)③Ithinkeveryonehereisam
emberofourbigfamilyandwelearnalotfromeachother.→AsfarasI’mconcerned,everyonehereisamemberofourbigfamilyandwelea
rnalotfromeachother.(2016·天津卷)④Weshouldtrytoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandprepareforthefuture.→W
eshouldtakepainstoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandgetpreparedforthefuture.(2015·福建卷)⑤Isincerelyhopethaty
ouwillconsidermysuggestions.→Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.(浙江卷)4.尽量用高级阶段学到的词代替低级阶段学到的词①Fir
stly,whatIwanttostressisthatweareabouttostartournextlessoninclassroom8oftheTeachingBuildingat10amnextFriday
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orkingexperienceandmeetmorenewfriends.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)③Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeeff
ectsonpeopleandsociety.→Inmyopinion,Internetvotinghasbeguntoshowitsnegativeimpactsonpeopleandsociety.(2016·江苏卷)④What’swor
se,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitimportanttoobeytrafficrules.→What’sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsa
ndpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015·江苏卷)[应用落实体验]A(2017·银川质检)假定你是一名高三学生,名叫李华。在母亲节来临之际,请你用英文给你的妈妈写一封信表示感
恩,并借此机会和妈妈说说知心话,具体内容应包括:1.表示感恩;2.你的现状(生活、学习情况):(1)你的高考奋斗目标;(2)你对自己的信心。参考词汇:高考theCollegeEntranceExamination注意:1.词数100左右;2.可根据内容适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和
结尾已给出,不记入总词数。DearMom,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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__Mum,happyMother’sDay!Iloveyou.Yourslovely,LiHua[考生作文]Dear__Mom,Mother’sDayiscoming.I’mwritingtoyoutothankyoufor
bringingmeupandshowingmeunselfishhelp,careandlove.I’lltellyousomethingaboutmypresentlife.Asyouknow,itwillbeaboutonemonthbeforeItaketheColl
egeEntranceExamination,whichmakesmylifealittlebusyandtiring.Luckily,myhardworkispayingoff.Ihavebeenmakinggreatprogressinmystudies,especiallyinEnglish
.PerhapsthereisstillalotformetodobeforeIrealizemydreamgoingtoPekingUniversity.IfirmlybelieveIcansucceed
.Pleasedon’tworryaboutme.I’llneverletyoufeeldisappointed.Mum,happy__Mother’s__Day!I__love__you.Yours__l
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of→come__up__with__2.standup→get__to__one’s__feet____3.beusedto→be__accustomed__to__4.besureto→be__bound
__to____5.beboredwith→be__fed__up__with____6.bebusyin(with)→be__occupied__in__(with)/be__buried__in/be__eng
aged__in__7.try/doone’sbesttodosth.→spare__no__effort__to__do__sth.8.asksb.forhelp→turn__to__sb.for__help____9.alotof
→a__large__quantity/amount__of/endless____10.allkindsof→a__wide__range__ofB(2017·太原五中模拟)假设你是李红,你的一位美国笔友R
obert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排。请根据以下要点,写一封E-mail回复他。1.学开车;2.参加英语培训课程;3.游览各地名胜。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearRobert,Howtime
flies!___________________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________Yours,LiHong[考生作文]Dear__Robert,How__time__flies!MyCollegeEntranceExaminationiscomingsoon,which
willannouncetheendofthisstressfullife.Therefore,Iwanttohaveacolorfulandmeaningfulsummervacation.First,Iwilllear
nhowtodrivetogetadrivinglicense,becauseIlikedrivingverymuch.Second,IwilltakesomeEnglishcoursestoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Afterthat
,IwillvisitsometouristattractionsthroughoutChinatowidenmyhorizon.Surely,IwilltakesomephotostosendtoyouviatheInternet
.Finally,Iwillhaveagoodrestandenjoymyhobbies.Thisistheplanformyvacation.Iameagerlylookingforwardtoit.Yours,Li__Hong[我来提升]将文中加
黑词汇升级1.comingsoon→approaching/around__the__corner____2.want→intend3.First→To__begin__with/To__start__with__4.l
ike→am__fond__of5.Second→In__addition/What’s__more__6.visit→pay__a__visit__to7.Finally→At__last/Eventually[积累练习]将下列动词进行升级1.meet→come__across____2.fa
ce→be__faced__with____3.bear→put__up__with__4.solve→deal__with/cope__with____5.decide→make__up__one’s__mind____6.consider→take...into__account/co
nsideration__7.understand→make__sense__of/figure__out8.use→employ/make__use__of/take__advantage__of9.apolog
ize→make__an__apology____10.happen→occur/come__about