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1专题限时集训(二十四)短文改错(Ⅰ)A(2018·福州市模拟)WhenaskingwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，t

hechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledges，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewewilllovet

hebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavetherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportanttohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgi

vethemnotwisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasuretoseethosechildren'ssmilefacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaoldsayinggoe

s，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'stogivepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.【答案】WhenaskingaskedwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoo

rchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledgesknowledge，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.F

orthisreason，Ihopewetheywilllovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavehastherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportantimportancetohel

pthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnot∧onlywisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasurepleasedtoseethosechildren'ssmilesmilingf

acesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaanoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'sto﹨gi

vepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.B(2018·牡丹江市模拟)I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，wh

atisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeopl

e，grabbinge-hongbaoontheirmobilephonesareafairlycommonandexcitedactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgiveluckymone

ytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein20s.It'sjustforafunorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword

，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.Therefore，I'mconcernedaboutthesafeofon-linepayment.Sorulesand2regulationsneededtobeimprovedregarding

thee-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.【答案】I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatwhichisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyaki

ndofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinonspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-hongbaoontheirmobilephones

areisafairlycommonandexcitedexcitingactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgivegivingluckymoneytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein∧the

ir20s.It'sjustfora﹨funorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.ThereforeHowever

，I'mconcernedaboutthesafesafetyofon-linepayment.Sorulesandregulationsneededneedtobeimprovedregardingthee

-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.C(2018·泰安市模拟)Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedmegocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifelts

oexcitingandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，heagreed.Wegottothemountaintopthatwewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofm

yfriendswereplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesuntocomeup.Af

terawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradual.Itwassoamazingscenery.Thebeautyinnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.【答案】Las

tweek，myfriendsinvitedme∧togocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifeltsoexcitingexcitedandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，hetheyagreed.Wegottothemountaintopt

hatwherewewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendswerewasplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，w

ewakewokeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesunto﹨comeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradualgradually.Itwassosuc

hamazingscenery.Thebeautyinofnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.3D(2018·珠海市模拟)ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepmove

dbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinfrontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandkno

ckedhimdown.Tomakethingsbad，hismoneywaslyinginalldirection.Atoncethepeoplearoundrushtopickthemoneyup，while

theoldmanstoodthere，notknowwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneytheyhadjustpicked.Theoldmancou

ntedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissed.Tomygreatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourlife.It'struewhathonestyismoreimportan

tthanmoney!【答案】ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepdeeplymovedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinthe﹨frontofthebank.Suddenlyayou

ngmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbadworse，hismoneywaslyinginallany/directiondirections.Atoncethepeoplearoundrushrushedtopickthem

oneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowknowingwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneytheyhadjustpick

ed∧up.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissedmissing/lost.Tomygreatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyo

urourlife.It'struewhatthathonestyismoreimportantthanmoney!