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1专题限时集训(二十四)短文改错(Ⅰ)A(2018·福州市模拟)WhenaskingwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithink

ofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledges，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewewilllovetheb

ooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavetherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportanttohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnotwisdombut

alsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasuretoseethosechildren'ssmilefacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskin

dnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'stogivepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.【答案】WhenaskingaskedwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivi

nginthemountainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledgesknowledge，buttheyaretoopoo

rtogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewetheywilllovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavehastherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportantimportancet

ohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnot∧onlywisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasurepleasedtos

eethosechildren'ssmilesmilingfacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaanoldsayinggoes，“Thereisk

indnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'sto﹨givepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.B(2018·牡丹江市模拟)I'mwriti

ngtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduri

ngfestivalsorinspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-hongbaoontheirmobilephonesareafairlycommonande

xcitedactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgiveluckymoneytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein20s.It'sjustforafunorgivingbes

twishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.Therefore，I'mconcernedabou

tthesafeofon-linepayment.Sorulesand2regulationsneededtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemtoguarantee

itsoperation.【答案】I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatwhichisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbao

isactuallyakindofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinonspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-

hongbaoontheirmobilephonesareisafairlycommonandexcitedexcitingactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgivegivingluckym

oneytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein∧their20s.It'sjustfora﹨funorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.In

aword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.ThereforeHowever，I'mconcernedaboutthesafesafetyofon-linepayment.Sorulesandregulationsnee

dedneedtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.C(2018·泰安市模拟)Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedmegocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifeltsoe

xcitingandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，heagreed.Wegottothemountaintopthatwewouldstayforawholenight.Wewe

resingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendswereplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseeth

esuntocomeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradual.Itwassoamazingscenery.Thebeautyinnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.【答案】Last

week，myfriendsinvitedme∧togocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifeltsoexcitingexcitedandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，hetheyagre

ed.Wegottothemountaintopthatwherewewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendswere

wasplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakewokeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesunto﹨comeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorl

ightuptheskygradualgradually.Itwassosuchamazingscenery.Thebeautyinofnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.3D(2018·

珠海市模拟)ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepmovedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinfrontoftheban

k.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbad，hismoneywaslyinginalldirection.Atoncethepeoplearoundrushtop

ickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneytheyhadjustpicked.Theoldmanc

ountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissed.Tomygreatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourlife.It'struewhathonestyismor

eimportantthanmoney!【答案】ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepdeeplymovedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinthe﹨frontofthebank.

Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbadworse，hismoneywaslyinginallany/directiondirections.Atoncethepeople

aroundrushrushedtopickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowknowingwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthem

oneytheyhadjustpicked∧up.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissedmissing/lost.Tomygreatjoy，thereare

nowalotofnicepeopleinyourourlife.It'struewhatthathonestyismoreimportantthanmoney!