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1专题限时集训(二十四)短文改错(Ⅰ)A(2018·福州市模拟)WhenaskingwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechild

renthereareeagertogainknowledges，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewewilllovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavetherightto

educationanditisofgreatimportanttohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnotwisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasur

etoseethosechildren'ssmilefacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefou

ndeverywhere.”Let'stogivepresentstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.【答案】WhenaskingaskedwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemoun

tainvillages，Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledgesknowledge，buttheyaretoopoortogotos

chool.Forthisreason，Ihopewetheywilllovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavehastherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportantimportanc

etohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnot∧onlywisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasurepleasedtoseethosechildren'ssmil

esmilingfacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaanoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'sto﹨givepresentstopeo

plewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.B(2018·牡丹江市模拟)I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatisbecomingpopularinChina.E-h

ongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymoneyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，g

rabbinge-hongbaoontheirmobilephonesareafairlycommonandexcitedactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgiveluckymoneytochildren，overhalfof

thepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein20s.It'sjustforafunorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtra

dition.Therefore，I'mconcernedaboutthesafeofon-linepayment.Sorulesand2regulationsneededtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosyste

mtoguaranteeitsoperation.【答案】I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatwhichisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymon

eyfromandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinonspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-hongbaoont

heirmobilephonesareisafairlycommonandexcitedexcitingactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgivegivingluckymoneyt

ochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein∧their20s.It'sjustfora﹨funorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaois

bringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.ThereforeHowever，I'mconcernedaboutthesafesafetyofon-linepayment.Sorulesandreg

ulationsneededneedtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.C(2018·泰安市模拟)Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedmegocampingtoseethesu

nrise.Ifeltsoexcitingandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，heagreed.Wegottothemountaintopthatwewouldstayforawho

lenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendswereplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesuntocomeup.

Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradual.Itwassoamazingscenery.Thebeautyinnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.【答案】Lastw

eek，myfriendsinvitedme∧togocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifeltsoexcitingexcitedandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，hetheyagreed.Wegottoth

emountaintopthatwherewewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneofmyfriendswerewasplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakewoke

upataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesunto﹨comeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradualgradually.Itwassosuc

hamazingscenery.Thebeautyinofnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.3D(2018·珠海市模拟)ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepmovedbywhatIsawoutsideab

ank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinfrontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbad，hismoneywaslyinginalldirection.Aton

cethepeoplearoundrushtopickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneytheyhadjust

picked.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissed.Tomygreatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourlife.It'struewhathonestyism

oreimportantthanmoney!【答案】ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepdeeplymovedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoney

inthe﹨frontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbadworse，hismoneywaslyinginallany/directiondirections.Atoncethepeople

aroundrushrushedtopickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowknowingwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyoneg

avebackthemoneytheyhadjustpicked∧up.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissed

missing/lost.Tomygreatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourourlife.It'struewhatthathonestyismoreimportantthanmoney!