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1专题限时集训(二十四)短文改错(Ⅰ)A(2018·福州市模拟)WhenaskingwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，Ithin

kofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledges，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewewilllovethebooks.Ontheotherhand，

Ithinkeveryonehavetherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportanttohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethemnotwisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillb

epleasuretoseethosechildren'ssmilefacesinthesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'stogivepres

entstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.【答案】WhenaskingaskedwhatIwouldliketosendtothepoorchildrenlivinginthemountainvillages，

Ithinkofbooks.Ontheonehand，thechildrenthereareeagertogainknowledgesknowledge，buttheyaretoopoortogotoschool.Forthisreason，Ihopewetheywilllo

vethebooks.Ontheotherhand，Ithinkeveryonehavehastherighttoeducationanditisofgreatimportantimportancetohelpthosepeoplewhoneedit.Mybookswillgivethe

mnot∧onlywisdombutalsohappiness.IbetthatIwillbepleasurepleasedtoseethosechildren'ssmilesmilingfacesin

thesunshineafteracceptingthepresents.Asaanoldsayinggoes，“Thereiskindnesstobefoundeverywhere.”Let'sto﹨givepresen

tstopeoplewhomweloveorwhoneedhelp.B(2018·牡丹江市模拟)I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatisbecomingpopularinChina.E-

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irmobilephonesareafairlycommonandexcitedactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgiveluckymoneytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongb

aoarein20s.It'sjustforafunorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.Inaword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.Therefore，I'mc

oncernedaboutthesafeofon-linepayment.Sorulesand2regulationsneededtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemto

guaranteeitsoperation.【答案】I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboute-hongbao，whatwhichisbecomingpopularinChina.E-hongbaoisactuallyakindofluckymoneyfr

omandtorelativesandfriendsduringfestivalsorinonspecialoccasions.Formanyyoungpeople，grabbinge-hongbaoont

heirmobilephonesareisafairlycommonandexcitedexcitingactivity.Unlikethetraditionofeldersgivegivingluckymo

neytochildren，overhalfofthepeoplesendinge-hongbaoarein∧their20s.It'sjustfora﹨funorgivingbestwishes，sothesumofmoneymatterslittle.In

aword，e-hongbaoisbringingnewcolortotheoldtradition.ThereforeHowever，I'mconcernedaboutthesafesafetyofon-linepayment.Sorulesandregulatio

nsneededneedtobeimprovedregardingthee-hongbaosystemtoguaranteeitsoperation.C(2018·泰安市模拟)Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedmegocampingtoseethesunrise.Ifel

tsoexcitingandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，heagreed.Wegottothemountaintopthatwewouldstayforawholenight.Weweresingingtogetherwhileoneo

fmyfriendswereplayingtheguitar.Thenextmorning，wewakeupataboutfiveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesuntocomeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightup

theskygradual.Itwassoamazingscenery.Thebeautyinnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.【答案】Lastweek，myfriendsinvitedme∧togocamping

toseethesunrise.Ifeltsoexcitingexcitedandaskedformyparents'permission.Luckily，hetheyagreed.Wegottoth

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iveo'clock.Wecouldnotwaittoseethesunto﹨comeup.Afterawhile，wesawtheredcolorlightuptheskygradualgradually.Itwassosuchamazingscenery.Thebeautyin

ofnatureimpressedmeatthatmoment.3D(2018·珠海市模拟)ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepmovedbywhatIsawoutsideabank.Anoldmanw

ascountinghismoneyinfrontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbad，hismoneywaslyinginalldirection.Atonc

ethepeoplearoundrushtopickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowwhattodo.Surprisingly，everyoneg

avebackthemoneytheyhadjustpicked.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissed.Tomygreat

joy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourlife.It'struewhathonestyismoreimportantthanmoney!【答案】ThismorningonmywaytoschoolIwasdeepdeeplymovedbywhatIsawo

utsideabank.Anoldmanwascountinghismoneyinthe﹨frontofthebank.Suddenlyayoungmancamerunningandknockedhimdown.Tomakethingsbadworse，hismon

eywaslyinginallany/directiondirections.Atoncethepeoplearoundrushrushedtopickthemoneyup，whiletheoldmanstoodthere，notknowknowingwhattodo

.Surprisingly，everyonegavebackthemoneytheyhadjustpicked∧up.Theoldmancountedthemoneyagainandfoundthatnotasinglebillwasmissedmissing/lost.Tomyg

reatjoy，therearenowalotofnicepeopleinyourourlife.It'struewhatthathonestyismoreimportantthanmoney!