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短文续写一1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Weallcouldsaythatwehavebaddaystoendureaswegothroughlife,butwhatdoes

ittaketohaveareallygoodday?Somewouldsuggestthatadaywouldbegreatifeverythingtheydidturnedoutwell,ortheygotexactlywhattheyneeded.Ontheotherhand,hav

eyoueverthoughtthatwhatyoumaygivesomeoneelsemaybethebestdayyoueverhadespeciallywhenyouputsomeoneelse’swell-beingorhappinessfi

rstonyourlist?Thereisspecialwarmthavailabletoyouandthatwarmthcancomefromahelpinghand,doingasmallfavorforatotalstranger,orevenasmile.Irecalladayre

centlywhenIhadtogotothehospitalforanappointmentbecauseIwasn’tfeelingwellandmydoctorsentmetoaspecialisttotr

yanddeterminethecause.AsIdrovetothehospital,Iadmittedlywasfeelinggloomyandcertainlywasn’tontopofmygame.AsIapproachedthehospital,Ibeganmysearchfo

raparkingspot,aspotthatwashardtocomewitheveryoneelsetryingtodothesamething.Ifinallyfoundaspotnottoofarfromtheentrancetothehospital.AsIgoto

utandbroughtmychangeoutofmypocket,Inoticedamanlookingsomewhatupsetstandinginfrontofaparkingmetertwocarsaway.

HeseemedtobesearchinghispocketsforwhatIsupposedwaschangeforthemeter.Although,Ireallydidn’tfeelthatgreat,IthoughtthatIshouldatleastgoovertohimandfi

ndoutifIcouldhelphim.AsIapproachedhim,heturnedtolookatme,feelingatalossnotknowingwhattodo.IaskedhimifhehadaproblemIcouldhelpwith,andhesaid,

withouthesitation,thathehadnochangeatallbecauseheleftitinhishouseonlythinkingaboutvisitinghissickwife.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150

左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.__________________

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所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Haveyoueverhadtoovercomeanextremechallengeinyourlife?Myteenageyearshadbeeninsane.Fromschoolworktoathletics,Ihadalwaysbeenrunnin

garound.Everythingwassodifficult.ThroughoutmyhecticteenageyearsIhavebeenfacedwithmanyextremechallengesthathavereq

uiredextremefocusandhardworktoovercome.Ifithadn’tbeenforhardwork,noneofthesechallengesthatIfacedwouldhavebeenconquered.Twoyearsag

o,whenIwasafreshmaninhighschool,Idealtwithanextremelysignificantinjury.ThistookplaceinmytennistournamentinJanuaty.Intheclimaxofmymatch,Ijoltedmyb

acktotheleftandsoonafterfeltasharp,painfulshockrunthroughmyspine.IknewatthatdifficultmomentIseriouslyinjuredmyback.Iwasrushedoffthecou

rtandmyparentsmadeanappointmentwithanorthopedist(矫形外科医生)forthenextmorning.Iwalkedintotheofficeextremelynervousandsufferingfromexcruciatingpain.My

tennisseasonforschoolstartedinthreemonthsandIabsolutelyneededtobuildupthestrength.Afterabouttwentyminutesofwaitingintheoffice,whichfeltl

ikeaneternity,thedoctorwalkedintoexaminemyX-rays.Withasorrowfulface,thedoctorlookedintomineandmymother'seyesandsaid,The

reisa50/50chancethatLucaswillbeabletoparticipateinthisyearnstennisseason.LucasbrokehisL5vertebraeinhislowerback."MyheartdroppedandIfeltasa

dnesscomeoverme.ThedoctorsaidthatIwouldbesittingoutofphysicalactivityfortwoandahalftothreemonths.Thosethreemonth

swerethelongestthreemonthsofmylife.Iwassoeagertogetbacktopracticesfortheseason.Everyday,IwouldthinkabouthowitwasgoingtobewhenIwasfullyhealthy.Ias

kedmyself,"AmIgoingtobeoutofshape?ShouldIevenplaythisyear?Iprobablywon'thaveasuccessfulseason."Fromthatdreadfuldayon,IdecidedthatIwasgoingtop

utintheworktobebackintopformandhaveasuccessfulseason.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完

成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AfterIgotthe"allclear"frommyorthopedistlwasgoingtogettowork._____________________________________________

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____________________________________________________3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。IamSadie.Iloveoceans,especiallytheonenearm

ygrandma'shousewithbeautifulshells.Why?That'swhatIamabouttotellyou.Itallstartedwhenmyparentsdivorcedafewweeksago.Ihadremained

silentsincethen.SomymotherdecidedtosendmetoFloridatolivewithmygrandma.Onthewaytomygrandma’shouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,Iknowwearenotthebest

familyyoucanhaveandItrulyapologize.Ijustdonotknowhowtobeamother.Butremember,Sadie,whateverhappened,Idoloveyou.

"Thesewordsmademesadder.Whenwearrived,Grandmatoldmetogoupstairsandunpackmythingswhileshespoketomymother.WhenIsawabluean

dgreenpaintedroomwithahugewindowandacomfortablebed,Ithought,MovingtoFloridamightnotbethatbad."Icomfortedmy-selfa

sIwalkedtowardsthewindow.Iopenedthecurtainsandsawsky-bluewavesslowlywashingawaythesandonthebeachandseabirdsflyingintheclearsky.Theoceanwasonl

yafewhundredmetersawayfromhere.Aftermymotherleft,Grandmasoftlytouchedmyshoulder,“IwanttotakeyoutotheplaceIcalled'theBigBlue’.AndIthin

kyoumightlikeit."(Iguessyoucouldknowwhereitis.)BeforeIsteppedonthesandIcouldsmelltheocean.Togetherweenjoyedthesunsetwithawholelotofyellowa

ndorange.SuddenlyshepickedoutthemostbeautifulshellIhadeverseeninmylife.Itwasalmostgold,shininginthesunlight.

Icouldn’tmovemyeyesoffit.注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语P

aragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?"Grandmaasked.____________________________________________________________________________

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_________________________________________________________________________________________4、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个

完整的故事。Jamieranoutofhishousealongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Theabandonedbuildingstherewerehisplayground.Jamiem

ovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawledinside.Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdownthestairstothebasement.Itwasevenda

rkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartheriver.Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingaliveunt

ilhefoundSharon.“Sharon,I’mhere!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'mgoingtolightitsoIcanseeyoubetter."Jamietoo

koutamatchandlitthecandle.Asoftcircleoflightlitupthedarkness.“ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleasedon’tbeafraid.I’mnotafraid.Itoldyout

hat.”Thecreatureslithered(滑行)intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie’ssize.Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(鱗片).Inthelightofthe

candle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature’seyesglowedred,suddenly,likehotcoals.Itsnostrils(鼻孔)flared,givingoffheat.Jami

estared.Hethoughthehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That’swhyhe’ddecidedtocallthecreatureSharon.Hewantedtogiveabeautifulnametohisne

wpet.“Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon’tknowifyouunderstandmeornot.AndI,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougothere.Thecrea

turedidn’tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopenedslightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.Jamiethoughtitwas

smiling.“Well,”saidJamie,"Ihopeyou’rehungry.Ibroughtyouachickensandwich.”Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomethingel

se,butmadenomovetoeatit.“I'lljustleavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“IwishIcouldstay.ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I’dhelpher.

I’llcomebacktomorrowafterschool.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4

.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.________________________________________________________________________

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_____________________________________5、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwastenIwassuddenlyverysad,forIhadtomovefrom

theonlyhomeIhadeverknown.Mywholelifehadbeenspentinthatbigoldhousewhichsawthelaughterandtearsoffourgene

rations.Whenthefinaldaycame,Irantothefrontofthehouseandsatalone,crying.SuddenlyIfeltahandrestonmyshoulder.Ilookeduptose

emygrandfather.“Itisn’teasy,isit,Billy?"hesaidsoftly,sittingdownonthestepsbesideme.“Grandpa,”IrepliedhowcanI

eversaygoodbyetoyouandallmyfriends?”“Goodbyeissuchasadword,"hesaid."Itseemstoofinal,toocool,whichhasonethingincommon:sadness.”Hegent

lytookmyhandinhis.“Comewithme,myfriend,”hewhispered.Wewalked,handinhand,tohisfavoriteplaceinthefrontyard,whereth

erewasahugeredrosebush—hisbelovedrosebush."Whatdoyouseehere,Billy?”heasked.Ilookedattheflowers,notknowingwhattosay,"Iseesom

ethingbeautiful,Grandpa."“Itisn’tjusttherosesthatarebeautiful,Billy.It’sthatspecialplaceinyourheartthatmakesthemso.”Hiseyesmetm

ineagain.“Billy,Iplantedtheserosesalongtimeago—beforeyourmotherwasevenadream.Iputthemintothesoilthedaymyfirstsonwa

sbom.ItwasmywayofsayingthankyoutoGod.Thatboy'snamewasBilly.Iusedtowatchhimpickrosesforhismother.Isawmygrandfather’stears.Ihadn

everseenhimcrybefore.Hisvoicebecamehoarse(嘶哑的)."Onedayaterriblewarcame,andmyson,likesomanysons,wentawaytofightagreate

vil.HeandIwalkedtothetrainstationtogether...Threemonthslateratelegramcame.MysonhaddiedinItaly.AllIcouldthinkofwas

thatthelastthingIsaytohiminhislifewasgoodbye."注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好

;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup._______________________________________________________________________________

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_____________________________________________________________________6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。TommyandMicklewalkedalongth

ebeach,lookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshells

androcksandseaweed.Todaywasdifferentthough.Theboysfeltexcited.Seacrabsscamperedontherocks,uponesideanddowntheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetid

edidn'tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenTommysawafish.Itwastrappedonthebeach,justfloppingaround."Canittalk?''Mickleask

ed.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Tommysaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywishes?"Micklelaughed.Theboysw

atchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime”,Tommygrinned.Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.Itwa

sgreenwithacorkinthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamaporagenieinside?”Micklejoked.Micklereacheddownandpickedupth

ebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.“Trythecorkag

ain.Ibetthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe'llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,Tommyexclaimed.Mickletuggedagainonthecork

.Hewiggleditbackandforth.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Mickleshookthebottle.Nothingcame

out.Lookinginsidehecouldn,tseeanything.Tommylookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It’sjustanoldwinebottle,”Tommycomplained.Hegrabbedtheb

ottleandtosseditbackontothesand.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thebottl

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______________________________________________________________________________7、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Everyyearonmybirthday,f

romthetime1turned12,awhitegardeniawasdeliveredtomyhouseinBethesda,Maryland.Nocardornotecamewithit.Callstothefloristwerealwaysi

nvain—itwasacashpurchase.AfterawhileIstoppedtryingtodiscoverthesendersidentityandwasjustdelightedinthebeautyandfragran

ceofthatmagical,perfectwhiteflowerplacedinsoftpinktissuepaper.However,Ineverstoppedimaginingwhotheanonymousgivermightbe.Mymothercontributedtothes

eimaginings.Andatthattime,she’daskmeiftherewassomeoneforwhomIhaddoneaspecialkindnessshowingappreciat

ion.Asateenager,IhadmorefunimaginingthatitmightbeaboyIfellinloveoronewhohiidnoticedmeeventhoughIdidn’tknowhim.WhenIwas17,aboybro

kemyheart.Thenighthecalledforthelasttime,Icriedmyselftosleep.WhenIawokeinthemorning,therewasalineofwordsonmymir

rorinredlipstick.IthoughtaboutthatquotationfromEmersonforalongtime,anduntilmyhearthealedandwenttogettheglasscleaned,mymotherkneweveryt

hingwasallrightagain.Onemonthbeforemyhighschoolgraduation,myfatherdiedofaheartattack.Myfeelingsrangedfromgrieftoabandonment,fearandoverwhelmingange

r;mydadwasmissingsomeofthemostimportanteventsinmylife.Ibecamecompletelyuninterestedinmycominggraduation,theplayandtheprom.Butmymother,inthemidsto

fherowngrief,wouldnothearofmyskippinganyofthosethings.Thedaybeforemyfatherdied,mymotherandIhadgoneshoppingforapromdress.We'dfounda

spectacular,andimpressiveone,withyardsandyardsofdottedSwissinred,whiteandblue.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3

.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize.___________________________________________

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________________________________________________8、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Alexstaredthroughthecabinwindowatthedarkness.So

onhisdadwouldcallhim.“We’reready,”Dadsaidashecameinfromtheporch.“Grabyourrod.”Alexturnedawayfromthewindowandslowlypickeduphisfishin

grod.“Weshouldhavedonethisbefore,’’Dadsaid.‘‘Let’sgocatchingabigone!Maybewecanseesomerareinsectsandanimals,suchasfirefliesan

dwhippoorwills!’’Dadpickeduphistacklebox,rod,andbaitcanfromtheporch.Theywalkeddownthehilltowardthelake.TheonlythingAlexcouldseewasthecircleofweeds

androcksattheirfeet.Insectvoicesfilledhisears.Hundredsofbugswaitedinthedarktoattack.“Mosquitoes,’’Dadsaid.“Ibroughtsomespraytokeepthemoff.”Sudd

enlysomethingrushedpastAlex’shead.Hegasped.“Whatwasthat?”“Probablyabat,”Dadsaid.“Willbatsbeflyingaroundourhea

dsthewholetime?”“Thisistheirtimetobeoutcatchinginsects,’’Dadexplained.“Theywon’thurtyou."Hepushedtheboatoffthegravelandjumpedin.Dadrowedtothemiddle

ofthelakeandstopped.“We’lljustlettheboatdriftforawhile.Keeptheflashlightinthebottomoftheboat.Thefishwon'tbiteiftheyseelight

flashingaround.WhenweVedonebaitingourhooks,we'llturnthelightoff.”Leaningdowntogetclosertothelight,Alextriedtothreadawormonhishook,buthecouldn’tseemt

oworkhisfingersright.Sowhatifthewormwasonlypartlyonthehook?Hedidn’twanttofishanyway.Hedidn’tevenwanttobehere.Dadswitchedofftheflashlig

ht,andthenightfelloverthemlikeaheavycape.“Ican’tseeanything,”Alexsaidweakly.“Themoon’shalffull.Itgivesussomelight,"Dadsaid.Alexlookedup.Surelyenough

,therewasthemoon.Andhecouldseetheshorelineandthedarkformsoftrees.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.

续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingt

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______________________________________________________答案1答案：Paragraph1:Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireached

intomypocket.SoonIpulledoutsomechangeandgaveittohim,withouthesitationandsavingasingleword,Iwentontowardscompletingm

yownbusiness.Asyouknow,Ihadanappointment,foraresponse,IturnedonmvheelandsaidtohimasIwaswalkingaway,"Haveagoodday."Paragraph2:ThefunnythingwasthatIfe

ltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecametomyface.AndIseemedtowalkjustalittlequicker.Iwaswalkingawaywhenhecalledou

t"thankyousomuch"farbehind.Honestly,Ididn’tevenexpecthimtosayanything.ItwassatisfyingenoughtoknowthatIhadmadeasimplegestu

retohelpsomeoneelsewhoneededalittlehand,alittlehelp.However,itbroughttomyfaceasmile.Itdoesn'ttakemuchto

lendthoseinneedahelpinghand;abigpayoffiswhatyougetinreturn.Moreimportantly,withsuchwarmthcatchingon,oursocietywillbecomemoreandm

oreharmoniousandcomfortable.(164words)2答案：Paragraph1:AfterIgotthe"allclear''frommyorthopedistIwasgoingtogettowork.Practicesweregoingtosta

rtintwoweeksandIwasdeterminedtogetbackonthecourt.Myhungerforsuccessmademeplayandworkoutfortwohoursevendaybeforetheseason.Thro

ughpractices,IwouldhitthegymandtrytobuildupthestrengththatIhadbeforetheinjury.Paragraph2:Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.Ihadt

hemostsuccessfulseasonofmycareer.Imadeittothefinals.AlthoughItrulywantedtowin,Iknewthatitwasagreataccomplishmentformetobeinthatpositioneven

notinthefirstplace.TheinjurywasalmostagoodthingbecauseIprovedtomyselfthatIamcapableofachievinggoalsthatIstrivefor,throughhardworkofcour

se.Thatseasonwasbyfarthemostrewardingseasonofmycareer.Ifeltsoaccomplishedattheendoftheseason.Hardworkalwayspaysoff.(154words)3答案：Paragraph1:“Wantto

knowhowIgetthroughmyparents’divorce?”Grandmaasked.Shesmiledtomeandcontinued,"Inthosedays,Ifeltverysorrowfu

lbecauseneitherofmyparentscaredaboutme,whichmademewanttoendmylife.Butfinally,Ididn'tdolikethat.Inordertokilltime,Ialwayswenttothebeach(Icalledit'

theBigBlue’).Muchtomysurprise,Ifoundthatthereweresuchbeautifulshellsonthebeach”.Paragraph2:"Thebeaulifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon

,"Grandmasaid."Honey,youarestillhappy.Althoughyourparentsdivorced,thevbothloveyou.Yourmotherrangmethismorning,

tellingmethatyouloveoceans.Therefore,Ibroughtyouhere.AlsoIhopeyoucangetinspirationandcourage."HearingthisIl

ookedupattheblueskyandthevastsea.Suddenly,Ifeltalittlerelaxedandnatural,andheldthefirmbeliefthatImustcheerup,justli

kethemostbeautifulshell,fullofcolor.(150words)标准范文Paragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?”Grandmaasked.Seeingmenodd

ingcuriously,shecontinued,“Ifeltextremelypainfulasyoumightbenow.Idon'tknowwhytheyseparatedfromeachother.Iaske

dmymotherthereasonsfordivorceoverandoveragain.Butshewouldn'ttellme,whichmademefeelevenmoredepressed.ThenIthoughtof‘theBigBlue’.Atthatmome

ntIwantedtoendmylifehere.ButIdidn’t."Paragraph2:Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveont"Grandmasaid."Justnow,yourm

othertoldmethatyoulikeoceans.SoIbroughtyouhere.AndIhopeyoucanseethecouragetoo."Ilookedcarefullyatthemostbeautifulshellinmygrandma’shand,the

nthevastoceanandthebluesky.OnlythendidIunderstandthebeautyandmeaningoflife.MovingtoFloridawasnotbadatall!(156words)4

答案：高分范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtoso.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.Thecreatureraiseditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully

.anditsmouthopenedslightlyandaseriesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedasifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedis

appearedinthedistance,thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscorner.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.She

grabbedhim,andasked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’reallright.Wherehavevoubeen?Youmademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappear

edonhiswayhomefromschool."However,hereallydidn'tlisten,insteadheseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely

,soIranout.”Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyherself."Okay,okay,I’llthinkaboutitseriously,butyouhavetopromisetot

akegoodcareofyourpel.Youdoneedaplaymate.”Jamiehuggedhismotherhappily."Oh,thanks.Mom.I'lltellSharonthegoodnewsimmediately!"Jamierushe

dout.(170words)标准范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.Thecreaturewatchedhim,anditsmouthopenedslightly.Itlookedlikesmil

ing.Thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscomer.Hemadehiswaycarefullyacrosstheslipperybasementfloor.Jamiehurriedalongth

estreettowardhisbuilding.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry."Wherehaveyoubeen,youngman?No

w,getintothatroomofyoursandcleanitup.’’ButJamiewasn’treallylistening.Heseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse."We

ll,therearenokidsofmyageinthisbuilding.That’swhyIgooutsomuch.IfIhadapettoplaywith,I'dtakecareofit,too.CanIhaveapet,please?”Jamie’smotherlaughedi

nspiteofherself.‘‘Okay,okay,"shesaidsmiling.“Iguessyoudoneedaplaymate.Ijusthopeitisn’ttoodirty.”Jamiehuggedhismotherarou

ndthewaist."Oh,thanks,Mom.I'llgogetSharonrightnow.Iknowyou’lllikeher!”Jamiedisappearedagain.(158words)5答案：高分范文Parag

raph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup.Hesaid,"Myfriend,pleaseneversay,goodbyeforever,andnevergiveintovoursadnessandloneliness.Insteadl

ifeisuncertain,andonlywhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriendareyourjoyandhappinessofthosetimesworthcherishing.Pleaseleavethatspecialhelloi

nyourheart."Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Threemonthslater,doctorsfinallyannouncedthathislifewasabo

uttoend.4Hischildrentookturnstotakecareofhimandsaygoodbye.Heaskedhiskidstomovehisbednexttothewindow,throughwhichhecouldseehi

sbelovedrosebush.Eventually,I,ashisoldestgrandchild,wasassignedtosaygoodbyetohim."Hello,Grandpa,"Isniffed.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hel

lo,Billy,don'tsob."Hesmiled.ButIwasoutofcontrol,cryingoutside.Anunclecametotellmethatmygrandfatherhadpassedawa

y.However,hisdeepwordswillnevergoaway.(151words)标准范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup."Don'teversaygoodbye,Billy.Don'tevergiveintothesadnessandthelon

eliness.InsteadIwantyoutorememberthejoyandthehappinessofthosetimeswhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriend.Takethatspecialhe

lloandlockitinyourheart.”Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Whenhereturnedfromthehospitalthreemonthslaterhewantedhisbed

nexttothewindow,fromwherehecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Thenthefamilywascalledhome.Itwasdecidedthathisgra

ndchildrenwouldbeallowedtosaytheirgoodbyestohimonebyone."Hello,Grandpa,"Iwhispered.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,myfriend,”hesaid,wit

hasmile.Eventuallymygrandfatherdied.RememberingGrandpa’swords,Ikeptinmyinnerheartthosespecialfeelingsthathadmadeup

ourfriendship.Suddenlyandtruly,Iknewwhathehadmeantaboutneversayinggoodbye—justrefusingtogiveintothesadness.(155words)6答案：Paragraph1:Thebottlehitaroc

kandshatteredintomanypieces.BothTommyandMicklegaspedastheysawalong,silverkeyonthegroundintheglasspieces.Thentheylookedateachother.Whydidn

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h2:Thetwoboysranafterit.Whentheyenteredthesea,astonishinglytheydidn'tsinkintothewaterbutfloatedonthesurfaceofi

t.Theyfeltexcited.Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewasmuchtreasurelikediamondsandstones.“Youcantakeasmuchaspossib

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rchildrenalltheway.Shenotonlywouldcomeupwithavarietyofwaystomeetherchildren'sneeds,butalsowouldbeveryartistictoshowherlovetoherchildren.Fore

xample,deliveringawhitegardeniatomyhouseeveryyearonmybirthdaywasamagicalandmysteriousincidenttomeallthetime.ButIdidn'tknowthetruthuntilmymother

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hetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere.Thelongerhelooked,themoreflasheshesawinthedark.Theylookedlikestar

sthatcamedownfromthesky."Look,Dad,fireflies!”“Perfect!’’Dadnodded.Aloudwhistlingsounderuptedfromthewoods.“Listen!”saidDad.“It’sthewhippoorwi

ll.We’rereallyluckytohearthewhippoorwill!"Alexhadneverheardsuchanodd,excitingcall一sadbutquick.Itblocked

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hfromhisjacketpocketandhandedittoAlex."Wemightgethungry."Alexunwrappeditandtookabigbite."Myfavorite!"AfterawhileDadrowedintotheshore.The

ydidnotcaughtabigone一onlythreesmallfishandtheyputthembackintothelake.Buttheyhadagoodtime.Theytieduptheboatandwalkedbacktothecabinthroughthelig

htofthefireflies.(147words)