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短文续写一1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Weallcouldsaythatwehavebaddaystoendureaswegothroughlife,butwhatdoesittaketohaveareallygoodday?Somewouldsugg

estthatadaywouldbegreatifeverythingtheydidturnedoutwell,ortheygotexactlywhattheyneeded.Ontheotherhand,haveyoueverth

oughtthatwhatyoumaygivesomeoneelsemaybethebestdayyoueverhadespeciallywhenyouputsomeoneelse’swell-beingorhappinessfirstonyourlist

?Thereisspecialwarmthavailabletoyouandthatwarmthcancomefromahelpinghand,doingasmallfavorforatotalstranger,orevenasmile.Irecalladayrece

ntlywhenIhadtogotothehospitalforanappointmentbecauseIwasn’tfeelingwellandmydoctorsentmetoaspecialisttotryanddeter

minethecause.AsIdrovetothehospital,Iadmittedlywasfeelinggloomyandcertainlywasn’tontopofmygame.AsIapproachedthehospital,Ib

eganmysearchforaparkingspot,aspotthatwashardtocomewitheveryoneelsetryingtodothesamething.Ifinallyfoundaspotnottoofarfromthee

ntrancetothehospital.AsIgotoutandbroughtmychangeoutofmypocket,Inoticedamanlookingsomewhatupsetstandi

nginfrontofaparkingmetertwocarsaway.HeseemedtobesearchinghispocketsforwhatIsupposedwaschangeforthemeter.Although,Ireallydidn’tfe

elthatgreat,IthoughtthatIshouldatleastgoovertohimandfindoutifIcouldhelphim.AsIapproachedhim,heturnedtolookatme,fee

lingatalossnotknowingwhattodo.IaskedhimifhehadaproblemIcouldhelpwith,andhesaid,withouthesitation,thathehadnochangeatallbecauseheleftit

inhishouseonlythinkingaboutvisitinghissickwife.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后

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2、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Haveyoueverhadtoovercomeanextremechallengeinyourlife?Myteenageyearshadbeeninsane.Fromschoolworktoathleti

cs,Ihadalwaysbeenrunningaround.Everythingwassodifficult.ThroughoutmyhecticteenageyearsIhavebeenfacedwithmanyextremechallengesthathaverequir

edextremefocusandhardworktoovercome.Ifithadn’tbeenforhardwork,noneofthesechallengesthatIfacedwouldhavebeenconquered.Twoyearsago,whenIwasafreshmani

nhighschool,Idealtwithanextremelysignificantinjury.ThistookplaceinmytennistournamentinJanuaty.Intheclimaxofmymatch,Ijoltedmybac

ktotheleftandsoonafterfeltasharp,painfulshockrunthroughmyspine.IknewatthatdifficultmomentIseriouslyinjuredmyback.Iwa

srushedoffthecourtandmyparentsmadeanappointmentwithanorthopedist(矫形外科医生)forthenextmorning.Iwalkedintotheoffic

eextremelynervousandsufferingfromexcruciatingpain.MytennisseasonforschoolstartedinthreemonthsandIabsolutelyne

ededtobuildupthestrength.Afterabouttwentyminutesofwaitingintheoffice,whichfeltlikeaneternity,thedoctorwalkedintoexaminemyX-rays.Withasorr

owfulface,thedoctorlookedintomineandmymother'seyesandsaid,Thereisa50/50chancethatLucaswillbeabletopar

ticipateinthisyearnstennisseason.LucasbrokehisL5vertebraeinhislowerback."MyheartdroppedandIfeltasadnesscomeoverme.Thedoctorsai

dthatIwouldbesittingoutofphysicalactivityfortwoandahalftothreemonths.Thosethreemonthswerethelongestthreemonthsofmylife.

Iwassoeagertogetbacktopracticesfortheseason.Everyday,IwouldthinkabouthowitwasgoingtobewhenIwasfullyhealth

y.Iaskedmyself,"AmIgoingtobeoutofshape?ShouldIevenplaythisyear?Iprobablywon'thaveasuccessfulseason."Fromthatdread

fuldayon,IdecidedthatIwasgoingtoputintheworktobebackintopformandhaveasuccessfulseason.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5

个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AfterIgotthe"allclear"frommyorthopedistlwasgoingtogettowork.______

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________3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。IamSadie.Iloveoceans,especiallytheonenearmygrandma'shousewithbeautifulshells.Why?That'swhatIamabouttotellyo

u.Itallstartedwhenmyparentsdivorcedafewweeksago.Ihadremainedsilentsincethen.SomymotherdecidedtosendmetoFloridatolivewithmygrandma.Onthewa

ytomygrandma’shouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,IknowwearenotthebestfamilyyoucanhaveandItrulyapologize.Ijustdonotknowhowtobeamother.Butremem

ber,Sadie,whateverhappened,Idoloveyou."Thesewordsmademesadder.Whenwearrived,Grandmatoldmetogoupstairsandunpackmythingswhileshespoketomymother.When

Isawablueandgreenpaintedroomwithahugewindowandacomfortablebed,Ithought,MovingtoFloridamightnotbethatbad."Icomfortedmy-selfasIwalkedtow

ardsthewindow.Iopenedthecurtainsandsawsky-bluewavesslowlywashingawaythesandonthebeachandseabirdsflyingintheclearsky.Theocean

wasonlyafewhundredmetersawayfromhere.Aftermymotherleft,Grandmasoftlytouchedmyshoulder,“IwanttotakeyoutotheplaceIcalled'theBigB

lue’.AndIthinkyoumightlikeit."(Iguessyoucouldknowwhereitis.)BeforeIsteppedonthesandIcouldsmelltheocean.Togetherweenjoyedthesunsetwithaw

holelotofyellowandorange.SuddenlyshepickedoutthemostbeautifulshellIhadeverseeninmylife.Itwasalmostgold,s

hininginthesunlight.Icouldn’tmovemyeyesoffit.注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开

头语已为你好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语Paragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?"Grandmaasked._____________________________

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,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jamieranoutofhishousealongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Theabandonedbuildingstherewerehisplaygr

ound.Jamiemovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawledinside.Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdown

thestairstothebasement.Itwasevendarkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartheriver.Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingaliveuntilhefoun

dSharon.“Sharon,I’mhere!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'mgoingtolightitsoIcanseeyoubetter."Jamietookouta

matchandlitthecandle.Asoftcircleoflightlitupthedarkness.“ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleasedon’tbeafraid.I’mnotafraid.

Itoldyouthat.”Thecreatureslithered(滑行)intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie’ssize.Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(鱗片).Inthelightofthec

andle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature’seyesglowedred,suddenly,likehotcoals.Itsnostrils(鼻孔)flared,givin

goffheat.Jamiestared.Hethoughthehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That’swhyhe’ddecidedtocallthecreatureSharon.Hewant

edtogiveabeautifulnametohisnewpet.“Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon’tknowifyouunderstandmeornot.AndI,dreallylikeyouto

tellmehowyougothere.Thecreaturedidn’tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopenedslightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.Jamiethoughtitwassmiling.“Well,”s

aidJamie,"Ihopeyou’rehungry.Ibroughtyouachickensandwich.”Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomethingelse,butmadenomovetoeatit.“I'lljust

leavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“IwishIcouldstay.ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I’dhelpher.I’llcomebacktomorrowafterschool.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为15

0左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.__

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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________5、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之

构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwastenIwassuddenlyverysad,forIhadtomovefromtheonlyhomeIhadeverknown.Mywholelifehadbeenspentinthatbigoldhousewhichsawthelaughterandtear

soffourgenerations.Whenthefinaldaycame,Irantothefrontofthehouseandsatalone,crying.SuddenlyIfeltahandrestonmyshoulder.Ilooked

uptoseemygrandfather.“Itisn’teasy,isit,Billy?"hesaidsoftly,sittingdownonthestepsbesideme.“Grandpa,”Ireplie

dhowcanIeversaygoodbyetoyouandallmyfriends?”“Goodbyeissuchasadword,"hesaid."Itseemstoofinal,toocool,whichhasonethingincommon:sa

dness.”Hegentlytookmyhandinhis.“Comewithme,myfriend,”hewhispered.Wewalked,handinhand,tohisfavoriteplaceinthefrontyard,wheretherewa

sahugeredrosebush—hisbelovedrosebush."Whatdoyouseehere,Billy?”heasked.Ilookedattheflowers,notknowingwhattosay,"I

seesomethingbeautiful,Grandpa."“Itisn’tjusttherosesthatarebeautiful,Billy.It’sthatspecialplaceinyourheartthatmakesthemso.”Hiseyesmetmineagain.“B

illy,Iplantedtheserosesalongtimeago—beforeyourmotherwasevenadream.Iputthemintothesoilthedaymyfirstsonwasbom.Itw

asmywayofsayingthankyoutoGod.Thatboy'snamewasBilly.Iusedtowatchhimpickrosesforhismother.Isawmygrandfather’stears.Ihadneverseenhim

crybefore.Hisvoicebecamehoarse(嘶哑的)."Onedayaterriblewarcame,andmyson,likesomanysons,wentawaytofightagreatevil.HeandIwalkedtothetrainstationtoget

her...Threemonthslateratelegramcame.MysonhaddiedinItaly.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatthelastthingIsaytohiminhislifewasgoodbye."注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少使用

5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup.___________________________________

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6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。TommyandMicklewalkedalongthebeach,lookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfish

oramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaywasdifferentthough.Theboysfeltexcited.Sea

crabsscamperedontherocks,uponesideanddowntheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn'tseemtoeverwashthem

away.ThenTommysawafish.Itwastrappedonthebeach,justfloppingaround."Canittalk?''Mickleasked.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Tommysaid.Hepi

ckeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywishes?"Micklelaughed.Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewate

r.“No.Maybenexttime”,Tommygrinned.Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Doesit

haveamaporagenieinside?”Micklejoked.Micklereacheddownandpickedupthebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.H

eshookit.Nothinghappened.“Trythecorkagain.Ibetthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe'llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,Tommy

exclaimed.Mickletuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggleditbackandforth.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Mickleshookthebottle

.Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldn,tseeanything.Tommylookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It’sjustanoldwinebottle,”Tommycomplained.He

grabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:

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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一

个完整的故事。Everyyearonmybirthday,fromthetime1turned12,awhitegardeniawasdeliveredtomyhouseinBethesda,Maryland.Nocardornotecamewithit.Callstothefloristwer

ealwaysinvain—itwasacashpurchase.AfterawhileIstoppedtryingtodiscoverthesendersidentityandwasjustdelightedinthebeautyandfragranceoftha

tmagical,perfectwhiteflowerplacedinsoftpinktissuepaper.However,Ineverstoppedimaginingwhotheanonymousgivermightbe.Mymothercontributedtotheseimag

inings.Andatthattime,she’daskmeiftherewassomeoneforwhomIhaddoneaspecialkindnessshowingappreciation.Asateenager,Ihadmorefunimaginingthatit

mightbeaboyIfellinloveoronewhohiidnoticedmeeventhoughIdidn’tknowhim.WhenIwas17,aboybrokemyheart.Thenighthecalledforthelasttime,Icriedmyselftosleep.

WhenIawokeinthemorning,therewasalineofwordsonmymirrorinredlipstick.IthoughtaboutthatquotationfromEmers

onforalongtime,anduntilmyhearthealedandwenttogettheglasscleaned,mymotherkneweverythingwasallrightagain.Onemont

hbeforemyhighschoolgraduation,myfatherdiedofaheartattack.Myfeelingsrangedfromgrieftoabandonment,fearandoverwhelminganger;mydadwasmissi

ngsomeofthemostimportanteventsinmylife.Ibecamecompletelyuninterestedinmycominggraduation,theplayandtheprom.Butmymother,inthem

idstofherowngrief,wouldnothearofmyskippinganyofthosethings.Thedaybeforemyfatherdied,mymotherandIhadgone

shoppingforapromdress.We'dfoundaspectacular,andimpressiveone,withyardsandyardsofdottedSwissinred,whiteandblue.注意:1.所续写

短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,buti

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_______________________________________________________________________8、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Alexstaredthroughthecabinwindowatt

hedarkness.Soonhisdadwouldcallhim.“We’reready,”Dadsaidashecameinfromtheporch.“Grabyourrod.”Alexturnedawayfromthewindowandslowlypicke

duphisfishingrod.“Weshouldhavedonethisbefore,’’Dadsaid.‘‘Let’sgocatchingabigone!Maybewecanseesomerareinsectsandanimals

,suchasfirefliesandwhippoorwills!’’Dadpickeduphistacklebox,rod,andbaitcanfromtheporch.Theywalkeddownthehilltowardthelake.Theonl

ythingAlexcouldseewasthecircleofweedsandrocksattheirfeet.Insectvoicesfilledhisears.Hundredsofbugswaitedinthedarktoattack.“Mosqu

itoes,’’Dadsaid.“Ibroughtsomespraytokeepthemoff.”SuddenlysomethingrushedpastAlex’shead.Hegasped.“Whatwasthat?”“Probablyabat,”Dadsaid

.“Willbatsbeflyingaroundourheadsthewholetime?”“Thisistheirtimetobeoutcatchinginsects,’’Dadexplained.“Theywon’thurtyou."Hep

ushedtheboatoffthegravelandjumpedin.Dadrowedtothemiddleofthelakeandstopped.“We’lljustlettheboatdriftforawhile.Keepthef

lashlightinthebottomoftheboat.Thefishwon'tbiteiftheyseelightflashingaround.WhenweVedonebaitingourhoo

ks,we'llturnthelightoff.”Leaningdowntogetclosertothelight,Alextriedtothreadawormonhishook,buthecouldn’tseemtoworkhisfing

ersright.Sowhatifthewormwasonlypartlyonthehook?Hedidn’twanttofishanyway.Hedidn’tevenwanttobehere.Dadswitchedofftheflashlight,andthenightfel

loverthemlikeaheavycape.“Ican’tseeanything,”Alexsaidweakly.“Themoon’shalffull.Itgivesussomelight,"Dadsaid.Alexlookedup.Surelyenoug

h,therewasthemoon.Andhecouldseetheshorelineandthedarkformsoftrees.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部

分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere._________

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______________答案1答案：Paragraph1:Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.SoonIpulledoutsomechangean

dgaveittohim,withouthesitationandsavingasingleword,Iwentontowardscompletingmyownbusiness.Asyouknow,Iha

danappointment,foraresponse,IturnedonmvheelandsaidtohimasIwaswalkingaway,"Haveagoodday."Paragraph2:ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andas

mallsmilecametomyface.AndIseemedtowalkjustalittlequicker.Iwaswalkingawaywhenhecalledout"thankyousomuch"farbehind.Honestly,Ididn’tev

enexpecthimtosayanything.ItwassatisfyingenoughtoknowthatIhadmadeasimplegesturetohelpsomeoneelsewhoneededalittlehand,alittlehelp.However,it

broughttomyfaceasmile.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtolendthoseinneedahelpinghand;abigpayoffiswhatyougetinreturn.Moreimportantly,

withsuchwarmthcatchingon,oursocietywillbecomemoreandmoreharmoniousandcomfortable.(164words)2答案：Paragr

aph1:AfterIgotthe"allclear''frommyorthopedistIwasgoingtogettowork.PracticesweregoingtostartintwoweeksandI

wasdeterminedtogetbackonthecourt.Myhungerforsuccessmademeplayandworkoutfortwohoursevendaybeforetheseason.Throughpractices,Iwo

uldhitthegymandtrytobuildupthestrengththatIhadbeforetheinjury.Paragraph2:Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.Ihadthemostsuccessfulseas

onofmycareer.Imadeittothefinals.AlthoughItrulywantedtowin,Iknewthatitwasagreataccomplishmentformetobeinthatpositionevennot

inthefirstplace.TheinjurywasalmostagoodthingbecauseIprovedtomyselfthatIamcapableofachievinggoalsthatIstrivefor,throughhardworkofcour

se.Thatseasonwasbyfarthemostrewardingseasonofmycareer.Ifeltsoaccomplishedattheendoftheseason.Hardworkalwayspays

off.(154words)3答案：Paragraph1:“WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents’divorce?”Grandmaasked.Shesmiledtomeandcontinued,"Inthosedays,Ifeltver

ysorrowfulbecauseneitherofmyparentscaredaboutme,whichmademewanttoendmylife.Butfinally,Ididn'tdolikethat.In

ordertokilltime,Ialwayswenttothebeach(Icalledit'theBigBlue’).Muchtomysurprise,Ifoundthatthereweresuchbeautifulshellsonthebeach”.Par

agraph2:"Thebeaulifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,"Grandmasaid."Honey,youarestillhappy.Althoughyourparentsdivorced,thevbothloveyou.Yourmo

therrangmethismorning,tellingmethatyouloveoceans.Therefore,Ibroughtyouhere.AlsoIhopeyoucangetinspirationandcourage."Hearingth

isIlookedupattheblueskyandthevastsea.Suddenly,Ifeltalittlerelaxedandnatural,andheldthefirmbeliefthatImustc

heerup,justlikethemostbeautifulshell,fullofcolor.(150words)标准范文Paragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?”Grandmaasked.Seeing

menoddingcuriously,shecontinued,“Ifeltextremelypainfulasyoumightbenow.Idon'tknowwhytheyseparatedfromeachother.Iaskedm

ymotherthereasonsfordivorceoverandoveragain.Butshewouldn'ttellme,whichmademefeelevenmoredepressed.ThenIthoughtof‘theBigBlue’.AtthatmomentI

wantedtoendmylifehere.ButIdidn’t."Paragraph2:Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveont"Grandmasaid."Justnow,your

mothertoldmethatyoulikeoceans.SoIbroughtyouhere.AndIhopeyoucanseethecouragetoo."Ilookedcarefullyatthemostbeautifulshellinmygrandma’shand,

thenthevastoceanandthebluesky.OnlythendidIunderstandthebeautyandmeaningoflife.MovingtoFloridawasnotbadatall!(156words)

4答案：高分范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtoso.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.Thecreatureraiseditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully.anditsmouthopenedslightlya

ndaseriesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedasifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedisappearedinthedistance,thecreatureslitheredbacki

ntoitscorner.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Shegrabbedhim,andasked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’reallrig

ht.Wherehavevoubeen?Youmademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedonhiswayhomefromschool."However,hereal

lydidn'tlisten,insteadheseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,soIranout.”Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyher

self."Okay,okay,I’llthinkaboutitseriously,butyouhavetopromisetotakegoodcareofyourpel.Youdoneedaplaymate.”Jamiehuggedhismoth

erhappily."Oh,thanks.Mom.I'lltellSharonthegoodnewsimmediately!"Jamierushedout.(170words)标准范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.Thecreaturewatchedhim,a

nditsmouthopenedslightly.Itlookedlikesmiling.Thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscomer.Hemadehiswaycarefullyacrosstheslipperyba

sementfloor.Jamiehurriedalongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry."Wherehaveyoubeen,

youngman?Now,getintothatroomofyoursandcleanitup.’’ButJamiewasn’treallylistening.Heseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethin

gelse."Well,therearenokidsofmyageinthisbuilding.That’swhyIgooutsomuch.IfIhadapettoplaywith,I'dtakecareofit,too.CanIhaveapet,please?”Jamie’

smotherlaughedinspiteofherself.‘‘Okay,okay,"shesaidsmiling.“Iguessyoudoneedaplaymate.Ijusthopeitisn’t

toodirty.”Jamiehuggedhismotheraroundthewaist."Oh,thanks,Mom.I'llgogetSharonrightnow.Iknowyou’lllikeher!”Jamiedisappearedagain.(158words)5

答案：高分范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup.Hesaid,"Myfriend,pleaseneversay,goodbyeforever,andnevergiveintovoursadnessandloneline

ss.Insteadlifeisuncertain,andonlywhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriendareyourjoyandhappinessofthosetimesworthcherishing.Pleaseleavethatspe

cialhelloinyourheart."Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Threemonthslater,doctorsfinallyannouncedthathislifewasabouttoend.4Hischild

rentookturnstotakecareofhimandsaygoodbye.Heaskedhiskidstomovehisbednexttothewindow,throughwhichhecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Eventu

ally,I,ashisoldestgrandchild,wasassignedtosaygoodbyetohim."Hello,Grandpa,"Isniffed.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,Billy,don'tsob."Hesm

iled.ButIwasoutofcontrol,cryingoutside.Anunclecametotellmethatmygrandfatherhadpassedaway.However,hisdeepwordswillnevergoaway.(151words

)标准范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup."Don'teversaygoodbye,Billy.Don'tevergiveintothesadnessandtheloneliness

.InsteadIwantyoutorememberthejoyandthehappinessofthosetimeswhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriend.Takethatspecialhelloandlockitinyourheart.”Parag

raph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Whenhereturnedfromthehospitalthreemonthslaterhewantedhisbednexttothewindow

,fromwherehecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Thenthefamilywascalledhome.Itwasdecidedthathisgrandchildrenwouldbeallowedtosaytheirgood

byestohimonebyone."Hello,Grandpa,"Iwhispered.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,myfriend,”hesaid,withasmile.Eventuallymygrandfath

erdied.RememberingGrandpa’swords,Ikeptinmyinnerheartthosespecialfeelingsthathadmadeupourfriendship.Su

ddenlyandtruly,Iknewwhathehadmeantaboutneversayinggoodbye—justrefusingtogiveintothesadness.(155words)6答案：Paragraph1:Thebottle

hitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.BothTommyandMicklegaspedastheysawalong,silverkeyonthegroundintheglasspieces.Thent

heylookedateachother.Whydidn'titmakenoisewhentheyshookthebottle?Whydidn'ttheyseeit?Micklebentovertopickupthekey.

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eofit.Theyfeltexcited.Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewasmuchtreasurelikediamondsandstones.“Youcantakeasm

uchaspossible,”avoicecamefromthecoastwhereatalkingfishwasswimming.ItwasthetrappedfishthatTommysavedandputbackintot

hewater.(149words)7答案：Paragraph1:Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize.AlthoughIlikeditverymuch,Ifeltqu

itesorryforitswrongsize.Thenextday,myfatherdied,andIhadnotimetodealwiththedress,soIthrewitatrandom.However,untilthedaybeforeth

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healwayslovedherchildrenalltheway.Shenotonlywouldcomeupwithavarietyofwaystomeetherchildren'sneeds,butalsowouldbeverya

rtistictoshowherlovetoherchildren.Forexample,deliveringawhitegardeniatomyhouseeveryyearonmybirthdaywasamagicalandmysterious

incidenttomeallthetime.ButIdidn'tknowthetruthuntilmymotherdiedbecausethegardeniastoppedcoiningafterthatyear.Andatthattime,Icouldnotstopmy

tearsofgratituderollingdown.(158words)8答案：Paragraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflightt

winklingthere.Thelongerhelooked,themoreflasheshesawinthedark.Theylookedlikestarsthatcamedownfromthes

ky."Look,Dad,fireflies!”“Perfect!’’Dadnodded.Aloudwhistlingsounderuptedfromthewoods.“Listen!”saidDad.“It’sthewhippoorwill.We’rereallyluckytoheart

hewhippoorwill!"Alexhadneverheardsuchanodd,excitingcall一sadbutquick.Itblockedouteventhingelse.Indeed,theotherniehtcreaturesseemedtostayquietforawhil

etolistentothewhippoorwill.Paragraph2:DadtookasandwichfromhisjacketpocketandhandedittoAlex."Wemightgethungry."Alexunwrappeditand

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ackintothelake.Buttheyhadagoodtime.Theytieduptheboatandwalkedbacktothecabinthroughthelightofthefirefl

ies.(147words)