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短文续写一1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Weallcouldsaythatwehavebaddaystoendureaswegothroughlife,butwhatdoesittaketohav

eareallygoodday?Somewouldsuggestthatadaywouldbegreatifeverythingtheydidturnedoutwell,ortheygotexactlywhat

theyneeded.Ontheotherhand,haveyoueverthoughtthatwhatyoumaygivesomeoneelsemaybethebestdayyoueverhadespeciallywhenyouputsomeoneelse’swell-b

eingorhappinessfirstonyourlist?Thereisspecialwarmthavailabletoyouandthatwarmthcancomefromahelpinghand,doin

gasmallfavorforatotalstranger,orevenasmile.IrecalladayrecentlywhenIhadtogotothehospitalforanappointmentbecauseIwas

n’tfeelingwellandmydoctorsentmetoaspecialisttotryanddeterminethecause.AsIdrovetothehospital,Iadmittedlywasfeelingglo

omyandcertainlywasn’tontopofmygame.AsIapproachedthehospital,Ibeganmysearchforaparkingspot,aspotthatwashardtocomewitheveryoneelset

ryingtodothesamething.Ifinallyfoundaspotnottoofarfromtheentrancetothehospital.AsIgotoutandbroughtmychangeoutofmypocket,Inoticed

amanlookingsomewhatupsetstandinginfrontofaparkingmetertwocarsaway.HeseemedtobesearchinghispocketsforwhatIsupposedwaschangeforthemeter.Alth

ough,Ireallydidn’tfeelthatgreat,IthoughtthatIshouldatleastgoovertohimandfindoutifIcouldhelphim.AsIappro

achedhim,heturnedtolookatme,feelingatalossnotknowingwhattodo.IaskedhimifhehadaproblemIcouldhelpwith,andhesaid,withouthesitation,tha

thehadnochangeatallbecauseheleftitinhishouseonlythinkingaboutvisitinghissickwife.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的

开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.________________________________

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__________________________________________________________________2、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Haveyoueverhadtoovercomeanex

tremechallengeinyourlife?Myteenageyearshadbeeninsane.Fromschoolworktoathletics,Ihadalwaysbeenrunningaround.Everythingwassodifficult.Throug

houtmyhecticteenageyearsIhavebeenfacedwithmanyextremechallengesthathaverequiredextremefocusandhardworktoovercome.Ifithadn’tbeen

forhardwork,noneofthesechallengesthatIfacedwouldhavebeenconquered.Twoyearsago,whenIwasafreshmaninhighscho

ol,Idealtwithanextremelysignificantinjury.ThistookplaceinmytennistournamentinJanuaty.Intheclimaxofmymatch,Ijoltedmybacktothe

leftandsoonafterfeltasharp,painfulshockrunthroughmyspine.IknewatthatdifficultmomentIseriouslyinjuredmyback

.Iwasrushedoffthecourtandmyparentsmadeanappointmentwithanorthopedist(矫形外科医生)forthenextmorning.Iwalkedintotheofficeextremelynervousan

dsufferingfromexcruciatingpain.MytennisseasonforschoolstartedinthreemonthsandIabsolutelyneededtobuildupthestrength.Afterabou

ttwentyminutesofwaitingintheoffice,whichfeltlikeaneternity,thedoctorwalkedintoexaminemyX-rays.Withasorrowfulface,thedoct

orlookedintomineandmymother'seyesandsaid,Thereisa50/50chancethatLucaswillbeabletoparticipateinthisyearnstennisseason.Luc

asbrokehisL5vertebraeinhislowerback."MyheartdroppedandIfeltasadnesscomeoverme.ThedoctorsaidthatIwouldbesittingoutofphysica

lactivityfortwoandahalftothreemonths.Thosethreemonthswerethelongestthreemonthsofmylife.Iwassoeagertogetbacktoprac

ticesfortheseason.Everyday,IwouldthinkabouthowitwasgoingtobewhenIwasfullyhealthy.Iaskedmyself,"AmIgoingtobeoutofsh

ape?ShouldIevenplaythisyear?Iprobablywon'thaveasuccessfulseason."Fromthatdreadfuldayon,IdecidedthatIwasgoingtoputintheworktobeba

ckintopformandhaveasuccessfulseason.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph

1:AfterIgotthe"allclear"frommyorthopedistlwasgoingtogettowork.____________________________________________________________

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__________________________________________________________3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。IamSadie.Iloveoceans,espe

ciallytheonenearmygrandma'shousewithbeautifulshells.Why?That'swhatIamabouttotellyou.Itallstartedwhenmyparentsdivorcedafew

weeksago.Ihadremainedsilentsincethen.SomymotherdecidedtosendmetoFloridatolivewithmygrandma.Onthewaytomygrandma’shouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,Ikn

owwearenotthebestfamilyyoucanhaveandItrulyapologize.Ijustdonotknowhowtobeamother.Butremember,Sadie,whateverhappened,Idoloveyou."The

sewordsmademesadder.Whenwearrived,Grandmatoldmetogoupstairsandunpackmythingswhileshespoketomymother.

WhenIsawablueandgreenpaintedroomwithahugewindowandacomfortablebed,Ithought,MovingtoFloridamightnotbethatbad."Icomfortedmy-selfasIwalkedtowardsthewind

ow.Iopenedthecurtainsandsawsky-bluewavesslowlywashingawaythesandonthebeachandseabirdsflyingintheclearsky.Theoceanwasonl

yafewhundredmetersawayfromhere.Aftermymotherleft,Grandmasoftlytouchedmyshoulder,“IwanttotakeyoutotheplaceIcal

led'theBigBlue’.AndIthinkyoumightlikeit."(Iguessyoucouldknowwhereitis.)BeforeIsteppedonthesandIcouldsmelltheocean.Togetherw

eenjoyedthesunsetwithawholelotofyellowandorange.SuddenlyshepickedoutthemostbeautifulshellIhadeverseeninmylife.Itwasalmostgol

d,shininginthesunlight.Icouldn’tmovemyeyesoffit.注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语Pa

ragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?"Grandmaasked.______________________________________________________________________

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_________4、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jamieranoutofhishousealongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Theabandonedbuildingstherewerehisplayground.Jamiemove

dawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawledinside.Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdownthestairstothebasement.Itwase

vendarkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartheriver.Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingaliveuntilhefoundSharon.“Sharon,I’m

here!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'mgoingtolightitsoIcanseeyoubetter."Jamietookoutamatchandlitthecandle.Asoftcir

cleoflightlitupthedarkness.“ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleasedon’tbeafraid.I’mnotafraid.Itoldyouthat.”Thecre

atureslithered(滑行)intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie’ssize.Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(鱗片).Inthe

lightofthecandle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature’seyesglowedred,suddenly,likehotcoals.Itsnostrils(

鼻孔)flared,givingoffheat.Jamiestared.Hethoughthehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That’swhyhe’ddecidedtocallthecreatureSharon.Hewantedt

ogiveabeautifulnametohisnewpet.“Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon’tknowifyouunderstandmeornot

.AndI,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougothere.Thecreaturedidn’tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopenedslightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.J

amiethoughtitwassmiling.“Well,”saidJamie,"Ihopeyou’rehungry.Ibroughtyouachickensandwich.”Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingabout

somethingelse,butmadenomovetoeatit.“I'lljustleavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“IwishIcouldstay.ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I’dhelphe

r.I’llcomebacktomorrowafterschool.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.

续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.___________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________5、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwastenIw

assuddenlyverysad,forIhadtomovefromtheonlyhomeIhadeverknown.Mywholelifehadbeenspentinthatbigoldhousewhichsawthelaughterandtearso

ffourgenerations.Whenthefinaldaycame,Irantothefrontofthehouseandsatalone,crying.SuddenlyIfeltahandrestonmyshoulder.Ilookeduptoseem

ygrandfather.“Itisn’teasy,isit,Billy?"hesaidsoftly,sittingdownonthestepsbesideme.“Grandpa,”IrepliedhowcanIeversaygoodbyetoyouandall

myfriends?”“Goodbyeissuchasadword,"hesaid."Itseemstoofinal,toocool,whichhasonethingincommon:sadness.”Hegentlytookmyhandinhis.“Comewithme,myf

riend,”hewhispered.Wewalked,handinhand,tohisfavoriteplaceinthefrontyard,wheretherewasahugeredrosebush—hisbelovedrosebush."Whatdoyo

useehere,Billy?”heasked.Ilookedattheflowers,notknowingwhattosay,"Iseesomethingbeautiful,Grandpa."“Itisn’tjusttherosesthatarebeauti

ful,Billy.It’sthatspecialplaceinyourheartthatmakesthemso.”Hiseyesmetmineagain.“Billy,Iplantedtheserosesalongtimeago—beforeyourmo

therwasevenadream.Iputthemintothesoilthedaymyfirstsonwasbom.ItwasmywayofsayingthankyoutoGod.Thatboy'snamewasBilly.Iusedtowatchhimpickrosesforhi

smother.Isawmygrandfather’stears.Ihadneverseenhimcrybefore.Hisvoicebecamehoarse(嘶哑的)."Onedayaterriblewar

came,andmyson,likesomanysons,wentawaytofightagreatevil.HeandIwalkedtothetrainstationtogether...Threemonthslater

atelegramcame.MysonhaddiedinItaly.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatthelastthingIsaytohiminhislifewasgoodbye."注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少

使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup.________________________________________________

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_______________________________________________________________6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。TommyandMicklewalkedalongthebeach,lookingforanad

venture.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.Sofarthe

yhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaywasdifferentthough.Theboysfeltexcited.Seacrabsscamperedontherocks,uponesideanddowntheoth

er.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn'tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenTommysawafish.Itwastrappedonthebeach,justfloppingaround."Canittalk

?''Mickleasked.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Tommysaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywi

shes?"Micklelaughed.Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime”,Tommygrinned.Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachthe

ycameuponabottle.Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamaporagenieinside?”Micklejoked.Micklereacheddownandpickeduptheb

ottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.“Trythecorkagain.Ibe

tthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe'llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,Tommyexclaimed.Mickletuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggleditbackandfor

th.Hetwisteditaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Mickleshookthebottle.Nothingcameout.Lookinginside

hecouldn,tseeanything.Tommylookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It’sjustanoldwinebottle,”Tommycomplained.H

egrabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关

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根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Everyyearonmybirthday,fromthetime1turned12,awhitegardeniawasdeliveredtomyhouseinBethes

da,Maryland.Nocardornotecamewithit.Callstothefloristwerealwaysinvain—itwasacashpurchase.AfterawhileIstoppedtryingtodiscoverthesendersidentityandwasju

stdelightedinthebeautyandfragranceofthatmagical,perfectwhiteflowerplacedinsoftpinktissuepaper.However,Ineverstoppedimaginingwhot

heanonymousgivermightbe.Mymothercontributedtotheseimaginings.Andatthattime,she’daskmeiftherewassomeon

eforwhomIhaddoneaspecialkindnessshowingappreciation.Asateenager,IhadmorefunimaginingthatitmightbeaboyIfellinloveoronewhohiidno

ticedmeeventhoughIdidn’tknowhim.WhenIwas17,aboybrokemyheart.Thenighthecalledforthelasttime,Icriedmyselftosleep.WhenIawokeinthem

orning,therewasalineofwordsonmymirrorinredlipstick.IthoughtaboutthatquotationfromEmersonforalongtime,anduntilmyhearthealedandwenttogetthegla

sscleaned,mymotherkneweverythingwasallrightagain.Onemonthbeforemyhighschoolgraduation,myfatherdiedofaheartattack.My

feelingsrangedfromgrieftoabandonment,fearandoverwhelminganger;mydadwasmissingsomeofthemostimportanteventsinmylife.Ibecamecom

pletelyuninterestedinmycominggraduation,theplayandtheprom.Butmymother,inthemidstofherowngrief,wouldnothearofmyskippinganyofthosethings.Theday

beforemyfatherdied,mymotherandIhadgoneshoppingforapromdress.We'dfoundaspectacular,andimpressiveone,withyardsandyardsofdottedSwissinred,whiteandb

lue.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragra

ph1:Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize.________________________________________________________________

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_______________________________________________________8、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Alexstaredthroughthecabinwindowatthedark

ness.Soonhisdadwouldcallhim.“We’reready,”Dadsaidashecameinfromtheporch.“Grabyourrod.”Alexturnedawayfromthewindowandslowlypickeduphisfishingr

od.“Weshouldhavedonethisbefore,’’Dadsaid.‘‘Let’sgocatchingabigone!Maybewecanseesomerareinsectsandanimals,suchasf

irefliesandwhippoorwills!’’Dadpickeduphistacklebox,rod,andbaitcanfromtheporch.Theywalkeddownthehilltowardthelake.Theonlythi

ngAlexcouldseewasthecircleofweedsandrocksattheirfeet.Insectvoicesfilledhisears.Hundredsofbugswaitedinthedarktoattack.“Mosquitoes,’’Dadsaid.“Ibrou

ghtsomespraytokeepthemoff.”SuddenlysomethingrushedpastAlex’shead.Hegasped.“Whatwasthat?”“Probablyabat,”Dadsaid.“Willbatsbefl

yingaroundourheadsthewholetime?”“Thisistheirtimetobeoutcatchinginsects,’’Dadexplained.“Theywon’thurtyou."Hepushedtheboatoffthegravelandjum

pedin.Dadrowedtothemiddleofthelakeandstopped.“We’lljustlettheboatdriftforawhile.Keeptheflashlightinthebottomo

ftheboat.Thefishwon'tbiteiftheyseelightflashingaround.WhenweVedonebaitingourhooks,we'llturnthelightoff.”Leaningdowntogetclosertothelight,Alextriedt

othreadawormonhishook,buthecouldn’tseemtoworkhisfingersright.Sowhatifthewormwasonlypartlyonthehook?Hed

idn’twanttofishanyway.Hedidn’tevenwanttobehere.Dadswitchedofftheflashlight,andthenightfelloverthemli

keaheavycape.“Ican’tseeanything,”Alexsaidweakly.“Themoon’shalffull.Itgivesussomelight,"Dadsaid.Alexlookedup.Surelyen

ough,therewasthemoon.Andhecouldseetheshorelineandthedarkformsoftrees.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere.__________

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___________________________________________________答案1答案：Paragraph1:Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.So

onIpulledoutsomechangeandgaveittohim,withouthesitationandsavingasingleword,Iwentontowardscompletingmyown

business.Asyouknow,Ihadanappointment,foraresponse,IturnedonmvheelandsaidtohimasIwaswalkingaway,"Haveagoodday."

Paragraph2:ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecametomyface.AndIseemedtowalkjustalittlequicke

r.Iwaswalkingawaywhenhecalledout"thankyousomuch"farbehind.Honestly,Ididn’tevenexpecthimtosayanything.Itwassatisf

yingenoughtoknowthatIhadmadeasimplegesturetohelpsomeoneelsewhoneededalittlehand,alittlehelp.However,itbroughtto

myfaceasmile.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtolendthoseinneedahelpinghand;abigpayoffiswhatyougetinreturn.Moreimportantly,withsuchwarmthcatchingon,oursocietywill

becomemoreandmoreharmoniousandcomfortable.(164words)2答案：Paragraph1:AfterIgotthe"allclear''frommyorthopedistIwasgoingtogettowork.Practiceswerego

ingtostartintwoweeksandIwasdeterminedtogetbackonthecourt.Myhungerforsuccessmademeplayandworkoutfortwohoursevendaybeforetheseason.Throughpractices,I

wouldhitthegymandtrytobuildupthestrengththatIhadbeforetheinjury.Paragraph2:Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.Ihadthemostsuccessfulsea

sonofmycareer.Imadeittothefinals.AlthoughItrulywantedtowin,Iknewthatitwasagreataccomplishmentformetobeinthatpositionevennotinthefirstplace.Theinjur

ywasalmostagoodthingbecauseIprovedtomyselfthatIamcapableofachievinggoalsthatIstrivefor,throughhardworkofcourse.Thatseasonwasbyfarthemostrewardingseas

onofmycareer.Ifeltsoaccomplishedattheendoftheseason.Hardworkalwayspaysoff.(154words)3答案：Paragraph1:“WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparent

s’divorce?”Grandmaasked.Shesmiledtomeandcontinued,"Inthosedays,Ifeltverysorrowfulbecauseneitherofmyparentscaredaboutme,whichmademewanttoendmylife

.Butfinally,Ididn'tdolikethat.Inordertokilltime,Ialwayswenttothebeach(Icalledit'theBigBlue’).Muchtomys

urprise,Ifoundthatthereweresuchbeautifulshellsonthebeach”.Paragraph2:"Thebeaulifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,"Grandmasaid."

Honey,youarestillhappy.Althoughyourparentsdivorced,thevbothloveyou.Yourmotherrangmethismorning,tellingmethatyoul

oveoceans.Therefore,Ibroughtyouhere.AlsoIhopeyoucangetinspirationandcourage."HearingthisIlookedupattheblueskyandthevas

tsea.Suddenly,Ifeltalittlerelaxedandnatural,andheldthefirmbeliefthatImustcheerup,justlikethemostbeautifulshell,fullofcolor.(150wor

ds)标准范文Paragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?”Grandmaasked.Seeingmenoddingcuriously,shecontinued,

“Ifeltextremelypainfulasyoumightbenow.Idon'tknowwhytheyseparatedfromeachother.Iaskedmymotherthereasons

fordivorceoverandoveragain.Butshewouldn'ttellme,whichmademefeelevenmoredepressed.ThenIthoughtof‘theBigBlue’.Atthatmo

mentIwantedtoendmylifehere.ButIdidn’t."Paragraph2:Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveont"Grandmas

aid."Justnow,yourmothertoldmethatyoulikeoceans.SoIbroughtyouhere.AndIhopeyoucanseethecouragetoo."Ilookedcarefullyatthemostbeautifulshe

llinmygrandma’shand,thenthevastoceanandthebluesky.OnlythendidIunderstandthebeautyandmeaningoflife.MovingtoFlor

idawasnotbadatall!(156words)4答案：高分范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtoso.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.Thecreatureraiseditsheadandw

atchedhimcarefully.anditsmouthopenedslightlyandaseriesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedasifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedisappearedinthedista

nce,thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscorner.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Shegrabbedhim,anda

sked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’reallright.Wherehavevoubeen?Youmademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedon

hiswayhomefromschool."However,hereallydidn'tlisten,insteadheseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,so

Iranout.”Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyherself."Okay,okay,I’llthinkaboutitseriously,butyouhavetopromisetotakegoodcareofyou

rpel.Youdoneedaplaymate.”Jamiehuggedhismotherhappily."Oh,thanks.Mom.I'lltellSharonthegoodnewsimmediately!"Jamie

rushedout.(170words)标准范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.Thecreaturewatchedhim,anditsmouthopenedslightly.Itlookedlikesmiling.Thecreatureslitheredbacki

ntoitscomer.Hemadehiswaycarefullyacrosstheslipperybasementfloor.Jamiehurriedalongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Paragraph2:WhenJamieg

othome,hismotherlookedangry."Wherehaveyoubeen,youngman?Now,getintothatroomofyoursandcleanitup.’’ButJamiewasn’treallylistening.Heseemedtob

ethinkingaboutsomethingelse."Well,therearenokidsofmyageinthisbuilding.That’swhyIgooutsomuch.IfIhadapettoplaywith,I'

dtakecareofit,too.CanIhaveapet,please?”Jamie’smotherlaughedinspiteofherself.‘‘Okay,okay,"shesaidsmiling.“Igu

essyoudoneedaplaymate.Ijusthopeitisn’ttoodirty.”Jamiehuggedhismotheraroundthewaist."Oh,thanks,Mom.I'l

lgogetSharonrightnow.Iknowyou’lllikeher!”Jamiedisappearedagain.(158words)5答案：高分范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup.Hesaid,"Myfriend,pleasen

eversay,goodbyeforever,andnevergiveintovoursadnessandloneliness.Insteadlifeisuncertain,andonlywhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriendareyourjoyandhap

pinessofthosetimesworthcherishing.Pleaseleavethatspecialhelloinyourheart."Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Thre

emonthslater,doctorsfinallyannouncedthathislifewasabouttoend.4Hischildrentookturnstotakecareofhimandsaygo

odbye.Heaskedhiskidstomovehisbednexttothewindow,throughwhichhecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Eventually,I,a

shisoldestgrandchild,wasassignedtosaygoodbyetohim."Hello,Grandpa,"Isniffed.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,Billy,don'tsob."Hesmiled.ButIwasouto

fcontrol,cryingoutside.Anunclecametotellmethatmygrandfatherhadpassedaway.However,hisdeepwordswillnevergoaway.(151words)

标准范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup."Don'teversaygoodbye,Billy.Don'tevergiveintothesadnessandtheloneliness.Ins

teadIwantyoutorememberthejoyandthehappinessofthosetimeswhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriend.Takethatspecialhelloand

lockitinyourheart.”Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Whenhereturnedfromthehospitalthreemonthslaterhewantedhisbedn

exttothewindow,fromwherehecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Thenthefamilywascalledhome.Itwasdecidedthathisgrandchildrenwouldbeallowedtosaytheirgoodbye

stohimonebyone."Hello,Grandpa,"Iwhispered.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,myfriend,”hesaid,withasmile.Eventuallymygrandfatherdied.RememberingGrandpa’swo

rds,Ikeptinmyinnerheartthosespecialfeelingsthathadmadeupourfriendship.Suddenlyandtruly,Iknewwhathehadmeantabou

tneversayinggoodbye—justrefusingtogiveintothesadness.(155words)6答案：Paragraph1:Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.BothT

ommyandMicklegaspedastheysawalong,silverkeyonthegroundintheglasspieces.Thentheylookedateachother.Whydi

dn'titmakenoisewhentheyshookthebottle?Whydidn'ttheyseeit?Micklebentovertopickupthekey.Suddenlytheglasspiecescametogethertoformabottleagain.T

hekeywasmysteriouslybackinside!Andthebottlebeganrollingslowlytowardthesea.Paragraph2:Thetwoboysranaf

terit.Whentheyenteredthesea,astonishinglytheydidn'tsinkintothewaterbutfloatedonthesurfaceofit.Theyfelt

excited.Theyfollowedthebottleandthenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewasmuchtreasurelikediamondsandstones.“Youcantakeasmuchaspossible,”

avoicecamefromthecoastwhereatalkingfishwasswimming.ItwasthetrappedfishthatTommysavedandputbackintothewater.(149words)7答案：Paragraph1:

Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize.AlthoughIlikeditverymuch,Ifeltquitesorryforitswrongsize.Thenextday,myfatherdied,andIhadnotimeto

dealwiththedress,soIthrewitatrandom.However,untilthedaybeforetheprom,Ifoundanewdresswashunginthelivingroomitwastherightsize!Mymotherdidit

.Reliefandgratitudefilledmyheart.Paragraph2:Shealwayslovedherchildrenalltheway.Shenotonlywouldcomeup

withavarietyofwaystomeetherchildren'sneeds,butalsowouldbeveryartistictoshowherlovetoherchildren.Forexample,deliveringawhitegardeniatomyhou

seeveryyearonmybirthdaywasamagicalandmysteriousincidenttomeallthetime.ButIdidn'tknowthetruthuntilmymotherdiedbecausethegarde

niastoppedcoiningafterthatyear.Andatthattime,Icouldnotstopmytearsofgratituderollingdown.(158words)8答案：Par

agraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere.Thelongerhelooked,themoreflasheshesawinthedark.

Theylookedlikestarsthatcamedownfromthesky."Look,Dad,fireflies!”“Perfect!’’Dadnodded.Aloudwhistlingsounderuptedfromthewoods.“Listen!”saidDad.“It’sth

ewhippoorwill.We’rereallyluckytohearthewhippoorwill!"Alexhadneverheardsuchanodd,excitingcall一sadbutquick.Itbl

ockedouteventhingelse.Indeed,theotherniehtcreaturesseemedtostayquietforawhiletolistentothewhippoorwill.Paragraph2:Dadtookasa

ndwichfromhisjacketpocketandhandedittoAlex."Wemightgethungry."Alexunwrappeditandtookabigbite."Myfavorite!"AfterawhileDa

drowedintotheshore.Theydidnotcaughtabigone一onlythreesmallfishandtheyputthembackintothelake.Buttheyhadagoodtim

e.Theytieduptheboatandwalkedbacktothecabinthroughthelightofthefireflies.(147words)