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一、题型特点：书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越

来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大二、考查形式（体裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。2010年河

南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英

语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准影响作文分数的因素：1题目要求、内容要点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清晰；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整洁度；2010年河南中考评分标准：四、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人

称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、

人称；三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开

3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。满分作文标准：第一档：（15~13分）•完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。•句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻

辑性。•卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。•最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）六、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述

）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,share…with…;Last,expr

essviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime——affectstudy;Ontheot

herhand,notsafe——stolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.七、如何列提纲：例2：计划安排型作文——谈假期安排Para1:（综述）grad

uatefrom…,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;Secondly,visittouristattract

ions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtotheco

mingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervocation.)八、常见的作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…----------------

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---Bestwishes!Yours,Lucya书信开头常用语•Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter(hearformyou).•Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?…/Howiseverythinggoing(on)

?•I’mwritingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…•I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...•Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.•Than

kyouforinvitingmeto….b书信结尾常用语•Bestwishes(to/foryou).•Wishyougoodluck.•(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.•二、口头通知常见写作模板：•呼语及开场白部分：•Ladiesandgentleme

n,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.•正文部分：•Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoa

ttendit.•Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes.•Pleaselistencarefullyandwe’llhaveadiscussioningroups.•Pl

easecomeontimeanddon’tbelate.•结束语部分：•Pleasecomeandjoininit.•Everybodyiswelcometoattendit.•Ihopeyou’llhaveanicetimehere.•That’sa

ll.Thankyou.八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：2图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）Most

studentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto…3说明利弊型

Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences

.Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…Inmyopinion,个人观点…4不同观点型Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Some

believe…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…Asforme,个人观点…5解决问题型Recently,the…p

roblemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…Iamsureifeveryonecanm

akeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.九、常用过渡性词语叙事文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…unt

il…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToone’ssurprise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortu

nately…inaword/inall议论文常用连接词表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示递进的：besides;what’smore;what’sworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because

;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;(forthereasonthat…);表示结果的：so;asaresult;so…that…;therefore;表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat

…;(inorder)to…;for…;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;议论文常用连接词表示转折的

：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/total;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badfo

rsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectons

b.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;议论文常用连接词

表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：in

general;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyo

pinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth

;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydreamcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoned

ay.Ittakessb.+时间+todo…Sb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.It’simportant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb.)tov…I

t’snice/kindofsb.tov..It’stimeforsb.todosth.It’sawasteoftimeto…It’s…years/dayssincesb.+vedIt’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoin

gIt’sapitythat…It’sanhonorto…十、作文万能句式I’m/We’renotallowedto…I’mafraidofmakingmistakes…Therebe…doing…Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…sthis/are

wellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthat…Itseems(im)possibletov…Itissaidthat…Asthesayinggoes,……and….aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv

.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetween…and…十、作文万能句式Ihavemadeupmymindto…Iamsurethat…Iamnotsurewhether/if…Iwouldrath

er….than…Itdoesn’tmatterif…Thankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/nature/society,ourlifewi

llbebetterandbetter.十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learn…from…beproudof/takepr

idein…playanimportant/activepart/rolein…agreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelp(反义：withoutone’shelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be/getreadyfo

rsth.payattentionto…takegoodcareof…makefriendswith…geton/alongwellwith…十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successasti

megoesby…graduatefrom…lookingbacktothepastthreeyears,…（用现在完成时态）passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeupone’smi

ndtodosth.(onsth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将

来）/infuture（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguph

avetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth.have(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followone’sadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasic…skillsberequiredtodoasksb.f

orhelpcan’twaittodo十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowith…workout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsof…ath

omeandabroadoneof…befullof…learnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov…十一

、作文万能短语keep(on)tryingworryabout…/beworriedabout…inone’sspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpothe

rssaythankyouto…havefun/enjoyoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelpbepopularwith…sha

resth.withsb.knowlittle/muchabout…十一、作文万能短语do/tryone’sbesttov…be/feelsorryfor…helpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.in/du

ringclassbefore/afterclassteachsb.todosth.*•词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于100词。•不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。四、Languageerrorsinwriting纠错１.b

e多余或缺少•I’menjoystudyingEnglish.•Itbadforourhealth.IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.2.时态错误•Atthattime,theyalwayshe

lpmewithmyEnglish.•IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim.Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.•Myfa

voritesportisrun.•Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisv

eryimportantforus.3.非谓语动词错误•Ilikedosports.•IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGamesw

henIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports.4.副词位置错误•Iverythankher.•Iverylikefootball.Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.5.代词错误•Theyaregoodfo

rusbody.•Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.Theyaregoodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.6.缺

介词或介词错误•IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.•Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.He

evencametomyhometohelpme.•Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.•IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Il

ikeitbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其他错误•It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecomet

aller.•Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,b

utalsomakesmebecometaller.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsenten

cesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesom

ebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdayt

ogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.re

member7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesa

ndcorrectthem.Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfath

er’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveit

upFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldl

adylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenhe

rwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsb

yourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSunday

morning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.

Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmy

lifehavemanythingshappened.Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmesh

oppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sow

estartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthe

winterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofth

ingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so1.是否有大小写错误(capitallettersorlowercaseletters)2.

是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)3.是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)•主谓是否一致•动词的时态•语态的使用是否正确•词组的搭配是否合乎习惯…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting五、整洁

性1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。4

规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；六、实战训练Pre-writ

ing1.审：2.定：“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价befashionablelovestudents,andcareaboutthestudentsbelivelyan

dinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列1.打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎MyEnglishTeacherMi

ssSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herless

onsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writing4.连：连词成

句，连句成篇复写Rewriting：5、美——润色丰富要点；6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。WritingMyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65

meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopu

lar.Weallloveherandherteaching!请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内容要点如下：1．谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大

学毕业后，2．在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3．对学生要求严格，4．深爱学生。5．谭老师英雄事迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。6．你的感受及愿望。参考词语：1.graduatefromauniversity,大学毕业2.bes

trictwith…,对……严格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.collapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹三段式：首段：正文：结尾：谭老师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望列出7

个内容要点：1）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。Helooksserious.He’sstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgi

vinglessonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbuildingcallapsed,heprotectedfourstudentswithhisbody.Ifeeldeeplymoved.I’lllearnfromhim.连句成文：Tan

Qianqiuwasbornin1957inHunanprovince.HegraduatedfromHunanUniversity.HetaughtpoliticsinamiddleschoolinDeyangcity,Sichuanprovince.He

hadtaughttherefor27years.Helookedserious.Hewasverystrictwithhisstudents.Helovedthemdeeply.WhentheWenchuanearthqua

kehappened,hewasgivingalesson.Theschoolbuildingcollapsed.heprotectedhisfourstudentswithhisbody.Thestudentswere

saved.MrTanlosthislife.Iamdeeplymovedbyhisdeeds.MrTanisanordinaryteacherandagreathero.Iwilllearnfromhim.HomeworkFinishrewritingthecompositionafte

rclass，usingthetechniqueslearnedinthislesson.TanQianqiuwasbornin1957inHunanprovince.AftergraduatingfromHunanUniversity,hetaugh

tpoliticsinamiddleschoolinDeyangcity,Sichuanprovince.Hehadtaughttherefor27years.Thoughhelookedseriousandwasverystrictwith

hisstudents,helovedthemdeeply.WhentheWenchuanearthquakehappened,hewasgivingalesson.Atthemomenttheschoolbuil

dingcollapsed,heprotectedhisfourstudentswithhisbody.Thestudentsweresaved,butMrTanlosthislife.Iamdeeplymovedbyhisdeeds.MrTani

snotonlyanordinaryteacher,butalsoagreathero.Iwilllearnfromhim.IwillstudyharderandbeapersonlikehimwhenIgrowup.温馨提示:后期复习应以阅读为中心，坚持“全面、系统、扎实、灵

活”的基本指导思想，立足语言基础知识，进行系统地梳理、归纳、总结和拓展，突出语言应用，注重能力培养。Thankyou!Goodbye!•Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/end•1.第一眼看到你会被那抢眼、近乎

妖艳的色彩震撼，更会迷醉于她独特的，蕴涵巫女般迷幻魔力的风格之中。•2.她选择以代表强烈欲望的紫色来包装其化妆品系列，以黯紫色为主色的包装，周围布满了红艳的蔷薇，像极了年代妩媚的面粉盒；复古俏丽的化妆品系列让城中女子爱不释手。•3.古琦品牌时装一向以高档、豪华、性感而闻名于世，以“身份与财富之象

征”品牌形象成为富有的上流社会的消费宠儿，一向被商界人士垂青，时尚之余不失高雅。古琦现在是意大利最大的时装集团。•4.继承着法国高级女装的传统，始终保持高级华丽的设计路线，迎合上流社会成熟女性的审美品味，象征着法国时

装文化的最高精神。•5.多年过去了，这个名字依然引领着世界的流行时尚。然而在这些辉煌的业绩后面，我们所看到的是一个活生生的，他充满着深情，极为害羞，又极为幽默，他便是永远的。•6.迪奥的设计，注重的是服装的女性造型线条而

并非色彩。他的时装具有鲜明的风格：裙长不再曳地，强调女性隆胸丰臀、腰肢纤细、肩形柔美的曲线，打破了战后女装保守古板的线条。这种风格轰动了巴黎乃至整个西方世界，给人留下深刻的印象。•7.服装与其他名牌做法不同，它从不将任何“”或“”等明显的标志放在衣服上，而衣标上的字样，则是其

唯一的辨识方法。•8.推出的服装款式向顾客传递积极、开放的生活理念,倡导时尚的生活方式。专为成熟时尚的都市女性设计。她们的着装风格典雅、性感；精于对服装款式、颜色、面料及配饰的感谢观看，欢迎指导！