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一、题型特点：书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。中考书面表达贴近生活，贴近时代，给同学们一更多的表达空间。作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目，提示性词语越来越少，而给同学们的空间越来越大二、考查形式（体

裁）：中考英语考查形式多样：看图（表）写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。体裁包括：记叙文、说明文和应用文；三、中考评分标准：作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标

准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010年河南中考英语范文及评分标准2010

年河南中考英语范文及评分标准影响作文分数的因素：1题目要求、内容要点；2句子准确、通顺；3层次结构清晰；4拼写、语法等错误；5卷面整洁度；2010年河南中考评分标准：四、做题步骤：1审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节；2列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容；3写作：在提纲的

基础上补充要点；4复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；5誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。*总之做到三审：体裁、时态、人称；三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；三查：要点、拼写

和语法、连贯。五、作文一般框架：文章分3段：（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。满分作文标准

：第一档：（15~13分）•完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。•句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。•卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。•最好能有一两个亮

点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）六、如何列提纲：例1：利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepop

ular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,share…with…;Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）Howev

er,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime——affectstudy;Ontheotherhand,notsafe——stolen,hurtfeelingsPara4

:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.七、如何列提纲：例2：计划安排型作文——谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom…,holidayiscoming,pla

nforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;Secondly,visittouristatt

ractions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenj

oymysummervocation.)八、常见的作文类型模板：1书信Dear...,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter…--------------------------------------------------------------------

----------------------------------------------------------------------Bestwishes!Yours,Lucya书信开头常用语•Iamverygladto

receiveyourletter(hearformyou).•Hello,Jane.Iseverythinggoing(on)well?…/Howiseverythinggoing(on)?•I’mwr

itingtoyouforsomeadviceonhowto…•I’mwritingtoaskifyoucan...•Howtimeflies!Ithasbeenmonths/yearssincewelastmet.•Th

ankyouforinvitingmeto….b书信结尾常用语•Bestwishes(to/foryou).•Wishyougoodluck.•(Iam)lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.•二、口头通知常见写作模板：•呼语及开场白部分：•

Ladiesandgentlemen,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Ihaveanannouncementtomake.•正文部分：•Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequired

toattendit.•Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes.•Pleaselistencarefullyandwe’llhaveadiscussioningroups.•Pleasecomeontimeanddon’tbelate.•结束语部分：•Pl

easecomeandjoininit.•Everybodyiswelcometoattendit.•Ihopeyou’llhaveanicetimehere.•That’sall.Thankyou.八、常见的作文类型提纲模板：2图表、数字比例型（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastwe

ek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe

…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto…3说明利弊型Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…How

ever,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2…Inmyopinion,个人观点…4不同观点型Wemadeasurveyaboutwhethe

rweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somebelieve…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink

…反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…Asforme,个人观点…5解决问题型Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosol

veit.Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.九、常用过渡性词语叙事

文常用的句子间连接词：Atfirst;atlast;intheend…then/next/afterthat…when/while/assoonas/not…until…atthesametime;attimes;onceinawhile;sothatToone’ssurpr

ise/joyLuckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…inaword/inall议论文常用连接词表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;表示递进的：besides;w

hat’smore;what’sworse;(moreover);表示原因的：because;for…;becauseof…;thanksto…;(forthereasonthat…);表示结果的：so;asaresu

lt;so…that…;therefore;表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat…;(inorder)to…;for…;表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldrathe

rdo…thando…;议论文常用连接词表示转折的：however;but;表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…表示总结的：inall/short;inaword;inbrief/tota

l;lastbutnotleast;last;表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;s

bbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinteres

tin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fro

mthebottomofmyheart;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;as

weknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;议论文常用连接词表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart

;personally;其他：ingeneral;generallyspeaking;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;十、作文万能句式Iwillworkhardtomakemydre

amcometrue.Ihopeyourdreamwillcometrueoneday.Ittakessb.+时间+todo…Sb.spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+onsth./(in)doingsth.It’sim

portant/necessary/useful/useless/common…(forsb.)tov…It’snice/kindofsb.tov..It’stimeforsb.todosth.It’sawasteoftimeto…It’s…years/dayssincesb.+vedIt

’sgreatfuntodo=sb.havegreatfundoingIt’sapitythat…It’sanhonorto…十、作文万能句式I’m/We’renotallowedto…I’mafraidofmak

ingmistakes…Therebe…doing…Greatchangeshavetakenplacein…sthis/arewellworthv-ing.Itseems/seemedthat…Itseems(im)p

ossibletov…Itissaidthat…Asthesayinggoes,……and….aredifferentinmanyways.too+adj./adv.todoTherearemanydifferencesbetween…and…十、作文万能句式Ihavemadeup

mymindto…Iamsurethat…Iamnotsurewhether/if…Iwouldrather….than…Itdoesn’tmatterif…Thankyouforv-ing.Ifeveryonecanmakeacontributiontotheearth/natur

e/society,ourlifewillbebetterandbetter.十一、作文万能短语have/lookforachancetododooutdooractivitiesbe/getusedto(doing)sth.learn…from…beproudof/takepridein…

playanimportant/activepart/rolein…agreewithsb.todosth.withthehelpofsb.=withone’shelp(反义：withoutone’shelp)be/getreadytodosth.=be

/getreadyforsth.payattentionto…takegoodcareof…makefriendswith…geton/alongwellwith…十一、作文万能短语wishyousuccessful/successastimegoesby…graduatefrom…looki

ngbacktothepastthreeyears,…（用现在完成时态）passthe(final)examsticktodoingkeepyoumindonyourgoalsmakeupone’smindtodosth.(on

sth.)makeadecisiontodoworkhardatEnglishonceinawhile/attimes/nowandthenfromthenon十一、作文万能短语inthefuture（将来）/infut

ure（从今以后）increaseourknowledge/enlargeourvocabularyinfact/asamatteroffactinthebeginning/atfirstfeellikegivinguphavetrouble/difficultyin(doing)sth.have

(no)timetodohaveexperiencein(doing)sth.followone’sadvice/suggestionsmastersomebasic…skillsberequiredtodoasksb.forhelpcan’twait

todo十一、作文万能短语besupposedtodoencouragesb.tododeal/dowith…workout/solvetheproblemsallsorts/kindsof…athomean

dabroadoneof…befullof…learnsth.byoneselfcomeupwithgoodideasbesurprisedatsth.(todosth.)inordertokeephealthy/fitagoodwaytov…十一、作文万能短

语keep(on)tryingworryabout…/beworriedabout…inone’sspare/freetimebekind/friendlytobestrictwithhelpotherssaythankyouto…havefun/enjo

yoneself/haveagoodtimeplentyof+C/Uworryabout/beworriedaboutasksb.forhelp/turntosb.forhelp/callsb.forhelpbepopularwith…sharesth.withsb.knowlittle/mu

chabout…十一、作文万能短语do/tryone’sbesttov…be/feelsorryfor…helpsb.(to)dosth./withsth.in/duringclassbefore/aftercla

ssteachsb.todosth.*•词数80左右，不少于70词，不多于100词。•不能使用其他颜色笔、修正液等可被视为标记的工具；绝对不能透露真实信息。四、Languageerrorsinwriting纠错１.be多余或缺少•I’menjoystudy

ingEnglish.•Itbadforourhealth.IenjoystudyingEnglish.Itisbadforourhealth.2.时态错误•Atthattime,theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish.•Ihadenjoyedstudy

ingEnglishsinceImeethim.Atthattime,theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish.IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim.•Myfavoritespor

tisrun.•Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus.Myfavoritesportisrunning.Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus.3.非谓语动词错误•Ilike

dosports.•IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup.Ilikedoingsports

.4.副词位置错误•Iverythankher.•Iverylikefootball.Ithankherverymuch.Ilikefootballverymuch.5.代词错误•Theyaregoodfor

usbody.•Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer.Theyaregoodforourbody.IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer.6.缺介词或介

词错误•IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish.•Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme.IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish.Heevencametomyhometohelpme.•Ilike

itbecauseit’sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy.•IhaveevergivedupEnglish.(单词错误)(动词P.P.错误)Ilikeitbecauseit’sexcitingand

goodformyhealth.IhaveevergivenupEnglish.7.其他错误•It’sgoodformyhealth.Notonlymakemebrave,butalsomakemebecometaller.•Ifyouwant

tokeepfit,itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday.It’sgoodformyhealth.Itnotonlymakesmebrave,butalsomakesmebecometaller

.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday.（缺主语）（句型错误）Findoutthemistakesinthefollowing

sentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.

Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateher

birthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）P

unctuation（标点符号）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettabl

ethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）10.Inmyfat

her’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort

,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.P

hrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatona

seat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentenc

esandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（

词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihu

aonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.In

mylifehavemanythingshappened.Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfrien

dsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.So

westartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.Ithinkitwasthemost

unforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandc

orrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so1.是否有大小写错误(capit

allettersorlowercaseletters)2.是否有拼写错误(spellingmistakes)3.是否有标点错误(punctuationmistakes)4.是否有语法错误(grammarmistakes)•主谓是否一致•

动词的时态•语态的使用是否正确•词组的搭配是否合乎习惯…CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting五、整洁性1.字迹乱，划痕较多，字字不踩线。高低错落。2.字迹或太大，显得不紧凑；或太小，太密，看

不清，占不满格。3字数太多，显得太罗嗦，出格就看不见了。字数太少，空太多格，会被误认为字数不够，不会得高分。4规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写以“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文，提示如下：1孙老师，25岁，1.65米,打扮入时。2

关心热爱学生。3教学方法生动有趣。4与学生关系融洽，深受同学欢迎；六、实战训练Pre-writing1.审：2.定：“MyEnglishTeacher”为题写一篇100字作文记叙文，第三人称，一般现在时篇章结构：三段式首段：个人简历正文：教学特色尾段：作者的评价befashionableloves

tudents,andcareaboutthestudentsbelivelyandinterestinggetonwellwith…,bepopularwith…Writing:3.列1.打扮入时2.热爱学生，关心学生3.生动有趣4.相处融洽，深受欢迎MyEnglishTeacher

MissSunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstu

dents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herlessonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!Writi

ng4.连：连词成句，连句成篇复写Rewriting：5、美——润色丰富要点；6、改——查错改错7、抄——修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。WritingMyEnglishTeacherMiss

SunisourEnglishteacher.Sheis25yearsold.Sheis1.65meterstall.①Sheisveryfashionable.②Shelovesherstudents.Shecaresaboutus.③Herl

essonsareinterestingandlively;④MissSungetsonwellwithus.Sheisverypopular.Weallloveherandherteaching!请根据要点提示，用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍

己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文。字数100词左右。内容要点如下：1．谭老师个人简况：1957年生于湖南；大学毕业后，2．在四川德阳一所中学教书；外表严肃，3．对学生要求严格，4．深爱学生。5．谭老师英雄事

迹：汶川地震时，他在上课。教学楼坍塌时刻，用身体保护4名学生英勇献身，4名学生得救。6．你的感受及愿望。参考词语：1.graduatefromauniversity,大学毕业2.bestrictwith…,对……严格3.theWenchuanearthquake,汶川地震4.c

ollapse,坍塌5.deeds,事迹三段式：首段：正文：结尾：谭老师的个人简介谭老师的英雄事迹作者的感受和愿望列出7个内容要点：1）外表严肃；2）对学生要求严格；3）深爱学生；4）地震时在上课；5）教学楼坍塌时，用身

体保护4名学生英勇献身；6）感受；7）愿望。Helooksserious.He’sstrictwithhisstudents.Heloveshisstudentsdeeply.Hewasgivingl

essonsatthatmoment.Whentheteachingbuildingcallapsed,heprotectedfourstudentswithhisbody.Ifeeldeeplymoved.I’lllearnfromhim.连句成文：TanQianqiuw

asbornin1957inHunanprovince.HegraduatedfromHunanUniversity.HetaughtpoliticsinamiddleschoolinDeyangcity,Sichuanprovince.Hehadtaug

httherefor27years.Helookedserious.Hewasverystrictwithhisstudents.Helovedthemdeeply.WhentheWenchuanearthquakehappened,hewasgivingalesson.Theschool

buildingcollapsed.heprotectedhisfourstudentswithhisbody.Thestudentsweresaved.MrTanlosthislife.Iamdeeplymovedbyh

isdeeds.MrTanisanordinaryteacherandagreathero.Iwilllearnfromhim.HomeworkFinishrewritingthecompositionafterclass，usi

ngthetechniqueslearnedinthislesson.TanQianqiuwasbornin1957inHunanprovince.AftergraduatingfromHunanUniversity,hetaught

politicsinamiddleschoolinDeyangcity,Sichuanprovince.Hehadtaughttherefor27years.Thoughhelookedseriousandwasv

erystrictwithhisstudents,helovedthemdeeply.WhentheWenchuanearthquakehappened,hewasgivingalesson.Atthemomenttheschoolbuildingcollapsed,heprotectedhi

sfourstudentswithhisbody.Thestudentsweresaved,butMrTanlosthislife.Iamdeeplymovedbyhisdeeds.MrTanisnotonlyanordinaryteacher,butalsoag

reathero.Iwilllearnfromhim.IwillstudyharderandbeapersonlikehimwhenIgrowup.温馨提示:后期复习应以阅读为中心，坚持“全面、系统、扎实、灵活”的基本指导思想，立足语言基础知识，进行系统地梳理、归纳、

总结和拓展，突出语言应用，注重能力培养。Thankyou!Goodbye!•Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/end•1.第一眼看到你会被那抢眼、近乎妖艳的色彩震撼，更会迷醉于她独特的，蕴涵巫女般迷幻魔力的风格之中。

•2.她选择以代表强烈欲望的紫色来包装其化妆品系列，以黯紫色为主色的包装，周围布满了红艳的蔷薇，像极了年代妩媚的面粉盒；复古俏丽的化妆品系列让城中女子爱不释手。•3.古琦品牌时装一向以高档、豪华、性感而闻名于世，以“身份与财富之象征”品牌形象成为

富有的上流社会的消费宠儿，一向被商界人士垂青，时尚之余不失高雅。古琦现在是意大利最大的时装集团。•4.继承着法国高级女装的传统，始终保持高级华丽的设计路线，迎合上流社会成熟女性的审美品味，象征着法国时装文化

的最高精神。•5.多年过去了，这个名字依然引领着世界的流行时尚。然而在这些辉煌的业绩后面，我们所看到的是一个活生生的，他充满着深情，极为害羞，又极为幽默，他便是永远的。•6.迪奥的设计，注重的是服装的女性造型线条而并非色彩。他的时装具有鲜明的风格：裙长不再曳地，强调女性

隆胸丰臀、腰肢纤细、肩形柔美的曲线，打破了战后女装保守古板的线条。这种风格轰动了巴黎乃至整个西方世界，给人留下深刻的印象。•7.服装与其他名牌做法不同，它从不将任何“”或“”等明显的标志放在衣服上，而衣标上的字样，则是其唯一的辨识方法。•8.推出的

服装款式向顾客传递积极、开放的生活理念,倡导时尚的生活方式。专为成熟时尚的都市女性设计。她们的着装风格典雅、性感；精于对服装款式、颜色、面料及配饰的感谢观看，欢迎指导！