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河北省中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多

，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读1.审题不清，要点不全2.单词拼写、标点符号、字体等低级错误多3.句子结构、用词不地道，不准确4.缺乏好的句式，词汇不丰富5

.卷面脏乱，字体不规范，书写太拥挤，勾画过多6.开头罗嗦，不能直入主题。层次不分明，主体部分内容欠充实，不生动，结尾草率书面表达中学生常有的问题一、掌握正确的写作技巧非常重要据报道韩国将用电子课本取代学校的纸质课本。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正就“PaperBooksorE-books?”这一话题征

文。请你根据下面提供的信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿，并谈谈你的看法。E-books1.Easytotake2.Protectenvironment3.LookupeasilyPaperbooks1.Takenotes2.Practicehandwriting3.

Badforeyes注意：1.短文应包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2.词数不少于80。题目和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。It’sreportedthatallschoolsinKoreawillusee-booksinsteadof

paperbooksatschool.Example1Beforewriting一、审.认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心1.Userightsubjects(明确主语尤其是人称)2.Usepropertense（使用正确的时态）3.Howmanyparts（分成几

部分）they(books)we一般现在时三个部分时态，人称时态，人称二、列.用简单的句子或短语列出提纲PartOne.电子图书的优点。1.携带轻便,2.利于环保,3.容易查询PartTwo.纸质课本的优点。1.方便做笔记,2.有利于书写,3.不会伤眼睛。P

artThree.自身观点。时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称三、加.加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。开门见山式回忆式开头疑问式开头倒叙式开头三、加.加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简

洁，漂亮。自然结尾，点明主题首尾呼应，升华主题反问结尾，引起深思表达祝愿，阐述愿望三、加.加首尾，使结构完整。It’sreportedthatallschoolsinKoreawilluseE-booksinsteadofpa

perbooksatschool.Manypeoplethinkthisisgoodnewsbecausee-bookshavemanyadvantages.--------------------------Bute-booksmakersshoulddoalotofthingstoimp

rovethemsothattheywon’tdoharmtooureyes.四、连.恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。Bute-booksmakersshoulddoalotofthingstoimprovethemsothattheywon’tdoharmtooure

yesight.过渡词和句1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示选择:or,either…or;3.表示转折:but,however

,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless关联词6.表示对比:instead,not…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解释:fore

xample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.

表示强调:also,besides,what’smore,actually,infact,10.表示结论:inaword,generallyspeaking,五、美1.Usethefamiliarwor

dsandstructures（使用熟悉的词句）2.Usebeautifulwordsandstructures•(选好的词句，美化文章)•在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。3.Writeneatlyandc

orrectly.书写规范,卷面整洁。Wecanusee-bookstofinishourhomeworkquickly.SoIthinkifweusee-books,wecansavealotoftimetorest.What’smore,wecanfindo

utanythingweneedinthemquickly.•First,paperbooksaremoreconvenient.Andwecanwritenotesinthem.•Weshouldusee-booksbecauseweliveinmodernci

tiesandweshouldsharetheresultofthedevelopmentofthetechnology.检查并修改错误•看词数是否达到要求。看有无遗漏要点•看文体格式是否正确规范•检查时态是否正确，主谓语人称是否一致，代词使

用是否正确，•单词拼写，标点符号是否正确•句子形式是否符合英语的表达习惯Remember:Pleasescratchifyougetenoughtime.打草稿六、查•InKorea,e-bookswillinsteadofpaperbooks.••Usethee-boo

ksdon’thavepollution.•Ifweusee-books,weneedn’ttotakeabigheavybagtoschool.•Ifyouwant,youshouldboughtit.ta

ketheplaceofInKorea,peoplewillusee-booksinsteadofpaperbooksinSouthKarea.E-booksdon’tcausepollution.don’tneedtotake/needn

’ttakewantitbuy查美连加列审作文用关联词句美化文章审清题意加上首尾列出要点检查错误Writingskills—sixstepsPaperBooksorE-books?It’sreportedthat

allschoolsinKoreawillusee-books.Manypeoplethinkthisisgoodnewsbecausee-bookshavemanyadvantages.Firstofall,theyaregoodfortheenvironment

,sincetheycansavelotsofpaperandtrees.Besides,theyareveryconvenient.Togetapaperbook,Wehavetospendalotoftimesearchingforitinabooksho

p.Butwecanfinde-booksveryquicklyonthecomputer.Withe-books,ourteachersneedn’twriteontheblackboardandweneedn’tcleantheblackboard

everyday.•However,paperbooksalsohavesomeadvantages.Withpaperbooks,wecanmakenoteseasily.Itisgoodforustopr

acticehandwriting.Itwon’tdosomuchharmtooureyesase-booksdo.•Iprefere-books.Itcanmakeusenjoylifebetter.Bute-book

smakersshoulddoalotofthingstoimprovethemsothattheywon’tdoharmtooureyes.二、重视模仿善于积累brainstormphysicalproblemsWhatw

ordsorphrasescanyouthinkofwhenyouseetheword“physicalproblems”?Example2教材文本有利于学生写作haveastomachachehaveafeverhaveacoldhaveacoughhaveasoreb

ackhaveasorethroathaveaheadachehaveatoothacheillnessphysicalproblems身体健康问题1.Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.2.Howcanwekeeph

ealthy？3.Wecan’tgotosleeptoolate.4.Wecan’tgetuptoolate.5.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.6.Weshoulddomoreexercise.关于健康

问题常用句春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下图表写一篇应征短文。Howtokeephealthyeatothers…………drinkmorevegetablesandfruitdomoreexerciselessjunkfoodrunanddo

morningexercisePlaybasketballandfootballmorewaterHowtokeephealthySpringiscoming.It’seasyforustogetacoldduri

ngthistime.Hereissomeadviceabouthowtokeephealthy.First,weshoulddrinkmorewater.We’dbetterdrinkhotteawithhoney.Seco

nd,wemusteatmorevegetablesandfruit.We’resupposedtoeatlessjunkfood.Third,weshoulddomoreexercise,suchasrunning,do

ingmorningexercisesandsoon.What’smore,weallshouldhaveenoughsleep.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Besides,we’dbettergotobedearlyandgetupear

ly.Healthissoimportantforeveryone.Ihopeeveryonewillhaveahealthylifestyleandstayhealthy.WWWWIt’WDo提建议•hadbette

r(not)do...最好(不)做...•howabout/whataboutdoing…怎么样?•Ithinkyoushoulddo...我认为你应该…•Isuggest/advicethatyoushould

do...我建议你做…•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...我要是你的话，我会做…•It’sbesttodo...最好做…•Whynotdo/Whydon’tyoudo…?为什么不…典型句型和美句积累水环境•1.It's

ourdutytosavewater.•2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman.•3.wecan’tlivewithoutwater.•4.Theamountofwaterwhichissu

itabletodrinkislessandless.•5.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.典型句型和美句积累典型句型和美句积累中考满分作文必背7类句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…对某人来说…2).…so…that…如此…以至

于…too…todo太…而不能…such…that…如此…以至于…3).not…until…直到…才…4).Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因5).Thatisbecause+句子那是因为…6).Itissa

idthat+句子据说…Itisreportedthat+句子据报道…7）asweallknow,+句子据我们所知语言学习•1.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish。•2.Morethanthreequartersoftheinformati

onontheInternetisinEnglish。•3.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.典型句型和美句积累MyHobby•Iama15-year

-oldstudentinjuniorGrade3.ThoughIamalwaysbusywithmystudy,Iwouldliketospendtimeonmyhobbies，suchasplayin

gthepiano，surfingtheInternet.兴趣爱好典型句型和美句积累•1.HisnameisJack.•2.HewasborninLondonin1982.•3.Heis1.68meterstallandweighs52kilos.写人记

事典型句型和美句积累旅游和介绍地方•1.LastSunday（Saturday，…），itwassunny（rainy，windy，foggy，）•2.Igotupveryearly（late）。AfterbreakfastIwe

ntto…withmyfriendsbybike，bus,...典型句型和美句积累新生事物评价•1.Computerisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant•2.weshouldmakegooduseofit.•3.Itmaybeg

etinthewayof（妨碍）ourstudy.•4.Wecandolotsofthingswithit.典型句型和美句积累梦想与未来•Recentlywedidasurveyinourclassinordertol

earnaboutstudents’idealjobs.Here’sareportaboutmygroupmembers’ideas.•Marywantstobeafashiondesignerbecauseshelikesbeautifulclothesandisgoodatdraw

ing.Katewantstobeagardener,shelivesplants,andshewantstomakethecitiesbetter.Mikewouldliketobeawriter.He’dliketoshar

ehiswonderfulstorieswithothers.Tomwouldliketobeacook.He’dliketocookdeliciousfoodforothers.Iwouldliketobeapoliceman.Iwanttoprot

ectthepeoplesafe.•Hopefullyeveryonecanrealizetheirdreamsinthefuture.典型句型和美句积累中考作文结尾得出结论的五种万能句•1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration，wen

aturallycometotheconclusionthat…把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论……2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors，wemayreasonablycometotheconclu

sionthat…考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论……3、Therefore，we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此，我们最好得出这样的结论……4、Thereisnodoubtthat…hasitsdrawback

saswellasmerits.毫无疑问，…有优点也有缺点。5、Allinall，wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwa

ystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.总之，我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。典型句型和美句积累中考英语作文必备的10个谚语1.Eve

rycoinhastwosides.每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。2.Thewinteriscomingandthespringisnotfar.冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?3.Failureisthe

motherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。4.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。5.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。6.Afallintoapit,againinyourwit.吃一堑，长一智。7

.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。8.Don'tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日9.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.时不我待。10.How

timeflies.时光如梭。典型句型和美句积累2016热点话题•1.全民读书活动；•2.乐于助人、德育的话题；•3.学生们喜欢的明星以及电视节目等；•4.“低头族”；•5.家庭、人口问题：中国实行二孩政策，•6.安全自救问题

（校园安全等）；•7.环保问题；•8.家乡的变化；•Practicemakesperfect!Example3水是万物之源，没有水，人类、动植物都不能存活。因此，人人都有保护和节约用水的职责。某英文报开展了以“水”为主题的征文活动，请你根据下面图表信息写一篇短

文参加征文。短文内容包括水的重要性、水的用途、水的现状及我们应该如何保护和节约用水。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计词数。Wateri

mportanceusage(用途)Situation（现状）WaterprotectionWhatcanweuseitfor?Lessandless,pollutedHowcanwesavewater?Howcanwe

stopwaterpollution?.Waterisveryimportantforhumans,animalsandplants.Importance:Doyouthinkwaterisimportantforus?Iftherewasnowater,Whatwoul

dhappen?Usage:Whatcanweusewaterfor?Beforewriting•Situation（现状）Lessandlesscleanwater.WaterpollutionWaterprotectionHowcanwesavewate

r?Howcanwestopwaterpollution?.Turnoffthetaps.Reuseandrecycle.CallonpeopletosavewaterWeshould/shouldn’t…Wearesupposedto…We

’dbetter…We’dbetternot…It’sgoodto…Whynotdo…Doingsth.is…Waterisveryimportantforhumans,animalsandplants.Humansandanimalsdrinkwatereveryd

ay.Plantsneedwatertogrow.Nolivingthingscanlivewithoutwater.Butthereislessandlesscleanwaterontheearth.S

omepeoplewastewaterintheirdailylives.Theyeventhrowrubbisheverywhere.Itpolluteswaterseriously.Somefactoriespourwastewater

intoriversorlakes.Moreandmorewaterispolluted.Soweshoulddosomethingtoprotectwater.Wemustsaveererydropofwater.Wearesupposedtoturnoffthetapsafterweu

sethem.We’dbetterreuseandrecyclethewaterweused.What’smore,wecancallonmorepeopletosavewater.Let’stakeactio

nsnow.•1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto____。Somepeoplesuggestthat____。2.俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈

的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。Thereisanoldsaying______。Itstheexperienceofourforefathers，however，itiscorrectinmanycaseseventoday.3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多

危害。首先，……；其次，…。更为糟糕的是……。Today，____，whichhavebroughtalotofharmsinourdailylife.First，____Second，____。What

makesthingsworseisthat______。4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。Nowadays，itiscommonto______。Manypeoplelike______becaus

e______。Besides，______。5.任何事物都是有两面性，…也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everythinghastwosidesand______isnotanexception，ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……People’sopinionsabout______varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythat______。Tothem，_____

。7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。Manisnowfacingabigproblem______whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将

引发激烈的辩论。______hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheirway.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来

越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。_____hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.ithasbroughtusaloto

fbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？Accordingtothefigure/number/sta

tistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，itcanbeseenthat______while.Obviously，______，butwhy？11、

最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。Recently，theproblemof…hasarousedpeople’sconcern.12、互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题

。Internethasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.13、如今，（人口过剩）已成

为我们不得不面对的问题了。Nowadays，（overpopulation）hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.14、随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…Withthedevelo

pmentofscienceandtechnology，moreandmorepeoplebelievethat…