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河北省中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不

流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读1.审题不清，要点不全2.单词拼写、标点符号、字体等低级错误多3.句子结构、用词不地道，不准确4.缺乏好的句式，词汇不丰富5.卷面脏乱

，字体不规范，书写太拥挤，勾画过多6.开头罗嗦，不能直入主题。层次不分明，主体部分内容欠充实，不生动，结尾草率书面表达中学生常有的问题一、掌握正确的写作技巧非常重要据报道韩国将用电子课本取代学校的纸质课本。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正就“PaperBooksorE-books?”这一话题征文。请你

根据下面提供的信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿，并谈谈你的看法。E-books1.Easytotake2.Protectenvironment3.LookupeasilyPaperbooks1.Takenotes2.Practicehandwriting3.Badfore

yes注意：1.短文应包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；2.词数不少于80。题目和开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。It’sreportedthatallschoolsinKoreawillusee-booksinsteadofpaperboo

ksatschool.Example1Beforewriting一、审.认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心1.Userightsubjects(明确主语尤其是人称)2.Usepropertense（使用正确的时态）3.Howmany

parts（分成几部分）they(books)we一般现在时三个部分时态，人称时态，人称二、列.用简单的句子或短语列出提纲PartOne.电子图书的优点。1.携带轻便,2.利于环保,3.容易查询PartTwo.纸质课本的优点。1.方便做笔记,2.有利于书写,3.不会伤眼睛。PartThree.自

身观点。时态，人称时态，人称时态，人称三、加.加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。开门见山式回忆式开头疑问式开头倒叙式开头三、加.加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。自然结

尾，点明主题首尾呼应，升华主题反问结尾，引起深思表达祝愿，阐述愿望三、加.加首尾，使结构完整。It’sreportedthatallschoolsinKoreawilluseE-booksinstea

dofpaperbooksatschool.Manypeoplethinkthisisgoodnewsbecausee-bookshavemanyadvantages.--------------------------Bute-boo

ksmakersshoulddoalotofthingstoimprovethemsothattheywon’tdoharmtooureyes.四、连.恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。Bute-booksmakerssh

oulddoalotofthingstoimprovethemsothattheywon’tdoharmtooureyesight.过渡词和句1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,ne

ither…nor;2.表示选择:or,either…or;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless关联词6.表示对比:instead,no

t…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:

firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示强调:also,besides,what’smore,actually,infact,10.表

示结论:inaword,generallyspeaking,五、美1.Usethefamiliarwordsandstructures（使用熟悉的词句）2.Usebeautifulwordsandstructures•(选好的词句，美化文章)•在有把握的情况下展示自己的

语言功底。3.Writeneatlyandcorrectly.书写规范,卷面整洁。Wecanusee-bookstofinishourhomeworkquickly.SoIthinkifweusee-books,wecansaveal

otoftimetorest.What’smore,wecanfindoutanythingweneedinthemquickly.•First,paperbooksaremoreconvenient.A

ndwecanwritenotesinthem.•Weshouldusee-booksbecauseweliveinmoderncitiesandweshouldsharetheresultofthedevelopmentofthetechnology.检查并修改错误•看词数是否达到要求。看

有无遗漏要点•看文体格式是否正确规范•检查时态是否正确，主谓语人称是否一致，代词使用是否正确，•单词拼写，标点符号是否正确•句子形式是否符合英语的表达习惯Remember:Pleasescratchifyougetenough

time.打草稿六、查•InKorea,e-bookswillinsteadofpaperbooks.••Usethee-booksdon’thavepollution.•Ifweusee-books,weneedn’ttotakeabigheavybagtoschool.•I

fyouwant,youshouldboughtit.taketheplaceofInKorea,peoplewillusee-booksinsteadofpaperbooksinSouthKarea.E-booksdon’tcausepo

llution.don’tneedtotake/needn’ttakewantitbuy查美连加列审作文用关联词句美化文章审清题意加上首尾列出要点检查错误Writingskills—sixstepsPaperBooks

orE-books?It’sreportedthatallschoolsinKoreawillusee-books.Manypeoplethinkthisisgoodnewsbecausee-bookshave

manyadvantages.Firstofall,theyaregoodfortheenvironment,sincetheycansavelotsofpaperandtrees.Besides,theyareveryconvenient.Togetapap

erbook,Wehavetospendalotoftimesearchingforitinabookshop.Butwecanfinde-booksveryquicklyonthecomputer.Withe-books,

ourteachersneedn’twriteontheblackboardandweneedn’tcleantheblackboardeveryday.•However,paperbooksalsohavesomeadvantages.W

ithpaperbooks,wecanmakenoteseasily.Itisgoodforustopracticehandwriting.Itwon’tdosomuchharmtooureyesase-booksdo.•Iprefere-books.Itcanmakeusen

joylifebetter.Bute-booksmakersshoulddoalotofthingstoimprovethemsothattheywon’tdoharmtooureyes.二、重视模仿善于积累brainstormphysicalproblemsWhatwo

rdsorphrasescanyouthinkofwhenyouseetheword“physicalproblems”?Example2教材文本有利于学生写作haveastomachachehaveafeverhaveacoldhaveacoug

hhaveasorebackhaveasorethroathaveaheadachehaveatoothacheillnessphysicalproblems身体健康问题1.Itisveryimportanttokeeph

ealthy.2.Howcanwekeephealthy？3.Wecan’tgotosleeptoolate.4.Wecan’tgetuptoolate.5.Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.

6.Weshoulddomoreexercise.关于健康问题常用句春天来了，容易患感冒，为了保持健康，某英语网站正在征集有关保持健康建议的稿件，请结合以下图表写一篇应征短文。Howtokeephealthyeatothers…………drinkmorevegetablesandfruitd

omoreexerciselessjunkfoodrunanddomorningexercisePlaybasketballandfootballmorewaterHowtokeephealthySpringiscoming.It’seasyforustogetacoldduringthistim

e.Hereissomeadviceabouthowtokeephealthy.First,weshoulddrinkmorewater.We’dbetterdrinkhotteawithhoney.Second,wemusteatmorevegetablesandfruit.We’resupp

osedtoeatlessjunkfood.Third,weshoulddomoreexercise,suchasrunning,doingmorningexercisesandsoon.What’smore,weallshouldhaveenoughsl

eep.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.Besides,we’dbettergotobedearlyandgetupearly.Healthissoimportantforeveryone

.Ihopeeveryonewillhaveahealthylifestyleandstayhealthy.WWWWIt’WDo提建议•hadbetter(not)do...最好(不)做...•howabout/wh

ataboutdoing…怎么样?•Ithinkyoushoulddo...我认为你应该…•Isuggest/advicethatyoushoulddo...我建议你做…•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...我要是你的话，我会做…•It’sb

esttodo...最好做…•Whynotdo/Whydon’tyoudo…?为什么不…典型句型和美句积累水环境•1.It'sourdutytosavewater.•2.Asweknow,waterisveryimportanttoman.•3.wecan’tlivewithout

water.•4.Theamountofwaterwhichissuitabletodrinkislessandless.•5.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.典型句型和美句积累

典型句型和美句积累中考满分作文必背7类句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…对某人来说…2).…so…that…如此…以至于…too…todo太…而不能…such…that…如此…以至于…3).not…until…直到…

才…4).Thatiswhy+句子那是…的原因5).Thatisbecause+句子那是因为…6).Itissaidthat+句子据说…Itisreportedthat+句子据报道…7）asweallknow,+句子据我们所知语言学习•1.Myfavoritesu

bjectisEnglish。•2.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish。•3.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallov

ertheworld.典型句型和美句积累MyHobby•Iama15-year-oldstudentinjuniorGrade3.ThoughIamalwaysbusywithmystudy,Iwouldliketospendtimeonmyhobbies，suchasplayingthepi

ano，surfingtheInternet.兴趣爱好典型句型和美句积累•1.HisnameisJack.•2.HewasborninLondonin1982.•3.Heis1.68meterstall

andweighs52kilos.写人记事典型句型和美句积累旅游和介绍地方•1.LastSunday（Saturday，…），itwassunny（rainy，windy，foggy，）•2.Igotupveryearly（late）。AfterbreakfastIwentt

o…withmyfriendsbybike，bus,...典型句型和美句积累新生事物评价•1.Computerisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant•2.weshouldmakegooduseofit.•3.Itmaybegetinthewayof（妨碍）

ourstudy.•4.Wecandolotsofthingswithit.典型句型和美句积累梦想与未来•Recentlywedidasurveyinourclassinordertolearnaboutstudents’idealjobs.Here’sareportabout

mygroupmembers’ideas.•Marywantstobeafashiondesignerbecauseshelikesbeautifulclothesandisgoodatdrawing.Katewantstobeagardener,shelivesplants,andshe

wantstomakethecitiesbetter.Mikewouldliketobeawriter.He’dliketosharehiswonderfulstorieswithothers.Tomwouldliketobeacoo

k.He’dliketocookdeliciousfoodforothers.Iwouldliketobeapoliceman.Iwanttoprotectthepeoplesafe.•Hopefullyeveryone

canrealizetheirdreamsinthefuture.典型句型和美句积累中考作文结尾得出结论的五种万能句•1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration，wenaturallycometo

theconclusionthat…把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论……2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors，wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat…考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会

得出合理的结论……3、Therefore，we’dbettercometotheconclusionthat…因此，我们最好得出这样的结论……4、Thereisnodoubtthat…hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问

，…有优点也有缺点。5、Allinall，wecannotlivewithout…Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwou

ldarise.总之，我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。典型句型和美句积累中考英语作文必备的10个谚语1.Everycoinhastwosides.每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物

的两面性。2.Thewinteriscomingandthespringisnotfar.冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?3.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。4.Practicema

kesperfect.熟能生巧。5.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。6.Afallintoapit,againinyourwit.吃一堑，长一智。7.Agoodbe

ginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。8.Don'tputofftilltomorrowwhatshouldbedonetoday.今日事，今日9.Timeandtidewaitfo

rnoman.时不我待。10.Howtimeflies.时光如梭。典型句型和美句积累2016热点话题•1.全民读书活动；•2.乐于助人、德育的话题；•3.学生们喜欢的明星以及电视节目等；•4.“低头族”；•5.家庭、人口问题：中国实行二孩政策，•6.安全自救问题（校园安全等）；•

7.环保问题；•8.家乡的变化；•Practicemakesperfect!Example3水是万物之源，没有水，人类、动植物都不能存活。因此，人人都有保护和节约用水的职责。某英文报开展了以“水”为主

题的征文活动，请你根据下面图表信息写一篇短文参加征文。短文内容包括水的重要性、水的用途、水的现状及我们应该如何保护和节约用水。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的

人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计词数。Waterimportanceusage(用途)Situation（现状）WaterprotectionWhatcanweuseitfor?Lessandless,pollutedHowcanwesavewater?Howcanw

estopwaterpollution?.Waterisveryimportantforhumans,animalsandplants.Importance:Doyouthinkwaterisimportantforus?I

ftherewasnowater,Whatwouldhappen?Usage:Whatcanweusewaterfor?Beforewriting•Situation（现状）Lessandlesscleanwater.WaterpollutionWaterprotecti

onHowcanwesavewater?Howcanwestopwaterpollution?.Turnoffthetaps.Reuseandrecycle.CallonpeopletosavewaterWeshould/should

n’t…Wearesupposedto…We’dbetter…We’dbetternot…It’sgoodto…Whynotdo…Doingsth.is…Waterisveryimportantforhumans,animalsandplants.Humansanda

nimalsdrinkwatereveryday.Plantsneedwatertogrow.Nolivingthingscanlivewithoutwater.Butthereislessandlesscleanwaterontheearth.Somepeoplewastewaterinthei

rdailylives.Theyeventhrowrubbisheverywhere.Itpolluteswaterseriously.Somefactoriespourwastewaterintoriversorlakes.Moreandmorewaterispollu

ted.Soweshoulddosomethingtoprotectwater.Wemustsaveererydropofwater.Wearesupposedtoturnoffthetapsafterweusethem.We’dbetterreus

eandrecyclethewaterweused.What’smore,wecancallonmorepeopletosavewater.Let’stakeactionsnow.•1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……Therearedifferentopinionsamong

peopleasto____。Somepeoplesuggestthat____。2.俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。Thereisanoldsaying______。Itstheexperienceo

fourforefathers，however，itiscorrectinmanycaseseventoday.3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，…。更为糟糕的是……。Today，____，whichhavebroughtalotofharmsinourd

ailylife.First，____Second，____。Whatmakesthingsworseisthat______。4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。Nowadays，itiscommonto______。Ma

nypeoplelike______because______。Besides，______。5.任何事物都是有两面性，…也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everythinghastwosi

desand______isnotanexception，ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……People’sopinionsabout

______varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythat______。Tothem，_____。7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。Manisnowfacingabigproblem______whic

hisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。______hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople，especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebate

sarerightontheirway.9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。_____hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife

.ithasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？Accordingtothefigure/numbe

r/statistics/percentagesinthe/chart/bargraph/line/graph，itcanbeseenthat______while.Obviously，______，butwhy？11、最近，…问题已引起人们的

关注。Recently，theproblemof…hasarousedpeople’sconcern.12、互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。Internethasbeen

playinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswel

l.13、如今，（人口过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。Nowadays，（overpopulation）hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.14、随着科技的发展，越来越多的人

认为…Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology，moreandmorepeoplebelievethat…