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WritingAdescriptionofaplace✓Thereisamysteryenvelopeonyourdesks.✓Thereare3airticketsinit.✓Followme!Let’sstartourwonderfuljourney!Itisoneofth

elargestcountriesintheworld.ItliesonthesouthcoastofthePacific.Sydneyisthebiggestcityofit.ItisfamousforKoalaand

Kangaroo.Guess!SydneyOperaHouse悉尼歌剧院SydneyHarborBridge悉尼大桥SydneyUniversity悉尼大学KangarooKoalaGoldcoastAustr

aliaAustraliaisoneofthelargestcountriesintheworld.ItliesonthesouthcoastofthePacific.Ithasanareaof7.6millionsquarekilometers.Ithasapopulation

of10million.SydneyisthebiggestcityinAustralia.YoucanfindmanyplacesofinteresttheresuchastheSydneyHarborBridge,SydneyOperaHouse.AustraliaisfamousforK

oalaandKangaroo.Anditisalsofamousforitsbeautifulbeaches.Ifyoulikethesunshineandplayingbythesea,itisaperfectplacetogo.

Australiahassomethingforeveryone,sowhynotvisitAustraliathisyear?FactsInteresting/specialthingsLocationAreaPopulationAustraliaisoneofthelargestcount

riesintheworld.ItliesonthesouthcoastofthePacific.Ithasanareaof7.6millionsquarekilometers.Ithasapopulationof10million.Sydneyisthe

biggestcityinAustralia.YoucanfindmanyplacesofinteresttheresuchastheSydneyHarbourBridge,SydneyOperaHouse.Australia

isfamousforKoalaandKangaroo.Anditisalsofamousforitsbeautifulbeaches.Ifyoulikethesunshineandplayingbythesea,i

tisaperfectplacetogo.Australiahassomethingforeveryone,sowhynotvisitAustraliathisyear?Task1:Structure&ContentOpinions/feelingsChinaCouldyoutellmesomep

lacesofinterest(名胜)inChina?Chinaisalargecountrywithfivethousandyearshistory.ItstandsinAsiaandliesonthewestcoastoftheocean.Itcoversanareaof9

,600,000squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationof1.3billion.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinChina,suchastheGreatWall

,theSummerPalaceandsoon.HainanandGuangdongbytheseaaretheperfectplacesforasummerholiday,butifyouliketovisitChinainwinter,youcantryskiingonthem

ountainsinHa’erbin.Chinahassomethingforeveryone.Ilovemycountry!WelcometoChina!FactsInterestingspecialthingsOpinions/feelingsLocationAreaPopulation

Task2:LanguageChinaisalargecountrywithfivethousandyearshistory.ItstandsinAsiaandliesonthewestcoastoftheocean.Itcoversanareaof9,600,000squarekil

ometers.Ithasapopulationof1.3billion.FactsPopulationAreaLocationTherearemanyplacesofinterestinChina,suchastheGreatWall,

theSummerPalaceandsoon.HainanandGuangdongbytheseaaretheperfectplacesforasummerholiday,butifyouliketovisitChinainwinter,youcantryskiingonthe

mountainsinHa’erbinInteresting/specialthingsPlacesofinterestSpecialthings1.Chinahassomethingforeveryone.2.Ilovemycountry!3.Welco

metoChina!4.Thisholiday,whynotcometoChina!5.….Opinions/feelingsChinaisalargecountrywithfivethousandyearshisto

ry.ItstandsinAsiaandliesonthewestcoastoftheocean.Itcoversanareaof9,600,000squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationof1.3bi

llion.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinChina,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandsoon.HainanandGuangdongbytheseaaretheperfectplaceforasumme

rholiday,butifyouliketovisitChinainwinter,youcantryskiingonthemountainsinHa’erbin.Chinahassomethingfore

veryone.Ilovemycountry!WelcometoChina!GuangzhouGuangzhouStatueoftheFiveGoats五羊雕塑GuangzhouTower广州塔Changlongtouris

tresort长隆旅游度假区HaixinshaPark海心沙公园FACTSLocationNorthofChina,thecapitalofGuangdongNameRamCity(羊城)PopulationAbout130million

Area7,400squarekilometersInteresting/specialthings①GuangzhouTower，StatueoftheFiveGoats，Changlongtouristresort②deliciousfood③The16thA

sianGamesin2010(第16届亚运会)Opinions/Feelings?WelcometoGuangzhou!Task3:SpeakingGuangzhouisthecapitalcityofGuangdongProvince.Itiscall

ed“RamCity”.ItliesinthesouthofChina.Ithasanareaofabout7,400squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationofover130million.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinGuangzhou,

suchasGuangzhouTower,StatueoftheFiveGoats,Changlongtouristresortandsoon.Guangzhouisalsofamousforitsdelic

iousfoodandyoucanfindmanykindsoffoodthere.The16thAsianGameswasheldinGuangzhouin2010.AnditwassoexcellentthatmanytouristswenttoGuangzhoutohaveavisit

.Guangzhouhassomethingforeveryone.Thiswinterholiday,whynotcometoGuangzhou!FactsInteresting/specialthingsOpinions/fe

elingsHowtodescribeaplace?GuangzhouFactsInteresting/specialthingsOpinionsfeelingsLocationAreaPopulation①…isalarg

ecountrywith….history./…oneofthemost….intheworld.②…standsin…andliesinthe…of…③Ithas/coversanareaof…squarek

ilometers.④Ithasapopulationof….①Therearemanyplacesofinterestin…,suchas….②Ifyoupreferto…,youcan…③…isfamousfor…①IhopeIcanvisit…oneday.

②Whynotvisit….thisyear?③…Howmanyparts?Whatarethey?Task4:WritingXinghaiSquareLaohutanOceanParkJinshitanTourismVacationZone地理位置中国东北部别名北方明珠(N

orthPearl)人口近600万面积12,574平方公里名胜星海广场；老虎滩海洋公园；金石滩国家旅游度假区节日中国国际啤酒节：每年7月底举行吸引着世界各地的人们你对自己家乡的感受和期盼？请根据以下内容，向今天新的英语老师Co

nnie介绍你的家乡--大连。Wouldyoupleasetellmoreaboutyourhometown?coringcriteria评分标准一个好的方面：________________________________一个有待改善的方面：________

___________________项目本次互改重点分值20分得分内容8分要点1-4每点0.5分4分要点5、6每点1.5分4分结构3分分段写1.5分结尾段1.5分语言7分时态：一般现在时2分拼写、语法5分书写2分书写认真

、卷面整洁2分评改人：作文总分：Task5:Scoringopinions/feelingsSummary:MainpointsLanguageFacts：LocationPopulationArea✓…isalargecountrywith….histo

ry./…oneofthemost….intheworld.✓…standsin…andliesinthe…of…✓Ithas/coversanareaof…squarekilometers.✓Ithasapopulationof….Speci

alorInterestingthings✓Therearemanyplacesofinterestin…,suchas….✓Ifyoupreferto…,youcan…✓…isfamousfor…Opinionsorfeelings✓IhopeIcanvisit…oneday.✓Wh

ynotvisit….thisyear?Scoringcriteria评分标准➢Askoneofyourclassmatestomakecommentsonyourcompositionsaccordingtothescoringcriteria.➢Polishthecompositionacc

ordingtohis/herideaandwhatyouhavelearnedtoday.Homework•1.学习语文是一种享受，你会发现语文学习是在与另一个人对话，也是在与自己对话。每当你读一篇文章时，仿佛作者

就在你身边，他的经历、他的情感都进入了你心中。•2.不论读名家名篇，还是自己创作，你会更清楚地认识到自己，每次学习语文，其实都是对自己的一次审视，你不仅仅懂的更多，而且文学素养也随之提高。这便是语文，需要你与之心灵相通。•3.动物也有着自己

的语言。它们不光有声音语言，还有许多无声的语言，例如美妙的舞姿、绚丽的色彩和芬芳的气味，研究这些千奇百怪的语言对人类有特殊的意义。•4.议论文写作中大部分同学会陷入泛泛而谈，没有议论的内容，就算有论据可用，也只是蜻蜓点水，草草收兵。不少作文且不说能运用几种修辞组织语言，更不说能使句子富有意

蕴，单是连最基本的语言通顺也很难做到。•5.记叙文的写作反映的问题则更大，且不说选材的平淡，就语言的叙述而言，无法体现出一个学生高中三年这一思想蜕变的进步，反而还停留在初中的水平，令人汗颜。•6.大部分的记叙文平铺直叙，语言啰嗦乏味，缺少灵

动性的语句，不会运用各种表达方式，逻辑错乱，这样的文章基本都被判为四类下。•7.由果溯因法。事物都是互相联系的。比如，有很多事物就是以因果关系的联系形式存在的。写材料作文，审题时如果能由材料中列举的现象或结果推究出造成所列现象或结果的本质原因，往往能找到最佳的

立意。•8.提炼中心法。这是写新材料作文最为常见且最为稳妥的审题立意方法。写新材料作文时，如果能准确地提炼出材料的中心，并以其作为文章的主旨，一定会使所写文章既切题又有深度。所以，写新材料作文时这种方法来立意最多。•9.抓关键句法。关键句常常有暗示材料中心的作用

。所以，有些新材料作文材料中的关键性语句可以作为选择立意角度的突破口。在新材料作文的材料中，关键句常常是命题者或材料中的人物的评议性语句。感谢观看，欢迎指导！