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1基础·自主学习核心·互动探究SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有关身心健康的比较说明文本单元的写作任务是读一篇关于健康的文章后，写一篇有关身心健康的比较说明文。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthe

modelGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriede

verynewdietIreadaboutonline.Itriedno-fat，low-fat，5：2，onlybananas，nobananas—Ialmostwentbananas，too.2基础·自主学习核心·互动探究ThenIrea

danarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat？”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit？”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthi

nkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight，thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”，Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilo

metresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed，Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveabur

gernowandthen，butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally，Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerew

rongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead，ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody，Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.3基础·自主学习核

心·互动探究(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①___________________adj.健康的②___________________adj.不健康的③___

________________绿色食品④___________________健康饮食⑤___________________不健康的饮食习惯healthy/fitunhealthy/unfitgreenfoodhealthyfood/dietunhealthyeatinghabit4基础·自主

学习核心·互动探究⑥________________良好的生活习惯⑦________________adj.肥胖的⑧________________强身健体⑨________________充足的睡眠⑩________________进行运动⑪_______

_________减肥⑫___________________对„„有益处⑬________________节食⑭________________养成一个„„的饮食习惯⑮___________________身体健康/不

健康⑯____________________________对某人的健康/视力有益/害goodlivinghabitsoverweight/fatbuildupone’sbodyenoughsleeptakeex

erciseloseweightbegoodfor/dogoodtogoonadietforma...eatinghabitbeingood/poorhealthbegood/badforone’shealth/eyes5基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅱ.While-

writing写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。内容包括：1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；2.现在已经做到二者平衡；3.你的做法。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：____

_______________________________________________________Paragraph2：__________________________________________________________

_Paragraph3：___________________________________________________________Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudybefore.Howtobalancerestandstudy.Icanbalanceres

tandstudynow.6基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________adj.劳累的②______________

__v.认识到；意识到③__________________平衡休息和学习④________________忙于⑤________________休息一下⑥________________结果⑦________________生病⑧________________一直⑨______

__________打篮球⑩________________落后tiredrealizebalancerestandstudybebusywithhavearestasaresultfallillallthetimep

laybasketballfallbehind7基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.Sentences①我经常忙于学习，因此没有时间休息。(so)________________________________________________

________________________②不是整天学习，而是我开始抽时间休息。(ratherthan)________________________________________________________________________③我不是整天做作业，而是一天

打一个小时篮球。(insteadof)________________________________________________________________________Iwasoftenbusywithmy

study，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttop

laybasketballforanhouraday.8基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.so，ratherthan，insteadof，insteadTwoyearsago，Icouldn’

tbalancerestandstudy.Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Asaresult，Ioftenfelttiredandstressed.AtlastIfellillan

dhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness，Ibegantothinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealizetheimportanceofbalancingrest

andstudy.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhourada

y.Finally，Igottobalancerestandstudy.Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind;instead，Istudiedbetterthanbefore.9基础

·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainwhyhe

/shechanged/wantedtochange?□2.Doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?□3.Isthetextwell-or

ganised?□4.Doesthewriterusewordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?□5.Arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?□6.Doesthewriterusec

orrectpunctuation?10基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作要点Thepast：Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdiet.Thechanges：Ifocusedonfitne

ssratherthandietandweight.Thepresent：IbecamepositiveandIbecamebothhappierandhealthier.常用词汇like，so，too，still，similarly，similarto，thes

ame(...as...)，incommon(with)，both...and...，instead，than，however/but/though，differentfrom，ratherthan，in

steadof，thedifferenceis...11基础·自主学习核心·互动探究亮点表达1.Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.运动与健康息息相关。2.Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoo

dhours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。3.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。4.Accordingtoarecentsurvey，fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdisease

slinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4000000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。12基础·自主学习核心·互动探究5.Unlessyoukeepabalanceddiet，youwillputonweight.除非你保持均衡的饮食，否则将

会增加体重。6.Earlytobedandearlytorise，makesamanhealthy，wealthyandwise.早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。7.Thewalldependsonthefoundation，and

thebodydependsonexercise.墙靠基础坚，身强靠锻炼。8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.每天一个苹果，医生远离我。(谚语)13基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作技巧词汇没有所谓高低级

之分，只有准确不准确之别。高考的满分范文和高分作文都在使用那些大部分中国学生高中就知道的词汇。千万不要一厢情愿地把一个本来平实准确的词，换成你觉得所谓的高级词(就像说到“离开家乡到大城市发展”中的“离开”就该用“leave”，而不用貌似更

高级但其实毫无准确性可言的“abandon”)。切记：最符合语境的才是最准确的，最准确的才是最给力的。14本节内容结束