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1基础·自主学习核心·互动探究SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有关身心健康的比较说明文本单元的写作任务是读一篇关于健康的文章后,写一篇有关身心健康的比较说明文。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowrite
afterthemodelGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.IworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdietI
readaboutonline.Itriedno-fat,low-fat,5:2,onlybananas,nobananas—Ialmostwentbananas,too.2基础·自主学习核心·互动探究ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinstea
dofasking“AmIfat?”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit?”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference!OnceIstartedthinki
ngaboutfitnessratherthanweight,thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”,Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilomet
resineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed,Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldst
illhaveaburgernowandthen,butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmo
delsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead,ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveabout
myselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.3基础·自主学习核心·互动探究(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①____
_______________adj.健康的②___________________adj.不健康的③___________________绿色食品④___________________健康饮食⑤__________
_________不健康的饮食习惯healthy/fitunhealthy/unfitgreenfoodhealthyfood/dietunhealthyeatinghabit4基础·自主学习核心·互动探究⑥________________良好的生活习惯⑦________________
adj.肥胖的⑧________________强身健体⑨________________充足的睡眠⑩________________进行运动⑪________________减肥⑫__________________
_对„„有益处⑬________________节食⑭________________养成一个„„的饮食习惯⑮___________________身体健康/不健康⑯____________________________对某人的健康/视力有益/害goodlivinghab
itsoverweight/fatbuildupone’sbodyenoughsleeptakeexerciseloseweightbegoodfor/dogoodtogoonadietforma...eati
nghabitbeingood/poorhealthbegood/badforone’shealth/eyes5基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅱ.While-writing写一篇100词左右的短文,介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。内容包括:1.以前无法平衡学习和休息;2
.现在已经做到二者平衡;3.你的做法。Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1:________________________________________________
___________Paragraph2:___________________________________________________________Paragraph3:_________
__________________________________________________Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudybefore.Howtobalancerestandstudy.Icanbalancerestandstudynow.6基础·自
主学习核心·互动探究Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________adj.劳累的②________________
v.认识到;意识到③__________________平衡休息和学习④________________忙于⑤________________休息一下⑥________________结果⑦________________生病⑧________________一直⑨_________
_______打篮球⑩________________落后tiredrealizebalancerestandstudybebusywithhavearestasaresultfallillallthetimeplayb
asketballfallbehind7基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.Sentences①我经常忙于学习,因此没有时间休息。(so)__________________________________________________________________
______②不是整天学习,而是我开始抽时间休息。(ratherthan)______________________________________________________________________
__③我不是整天做作业,而是一天打一个小时篮球。(insteadof)________________________________________________________________________Iwasoftenbusyw
ithmystudy,soIhadnotimetohavearest.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime,Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoin
gmyhomeworkalltheday,Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.8基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthef
ollowingwords.so,ratherthan,insteadof,insteadTwoyearsago,Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudy.Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy,soIhadnotimetoha
vearest.Asaresult,Ioftenfelttiredandstressed.AtlastIfellillandhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness,Ibeganto
thinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealizetheimportanceofbalancingrestandstudy.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime,Ibegantosparesometimet
ohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday,Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Finally,Igottobalancerestandstu
dy.Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind;instead,Istudiedbetterthanbefore.9基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅲ.Post-writing—p
olishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainwhyhe/
shechanged/wantedtochange?□2.Doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?□3.Isthetextwell-organised?□4.Doesthewri
terusewordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?□5.Arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?□6.Doest
hewriterusecorrectpunctuation?10基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作要点Thepast:Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdiet.Thechanges:Ifocus
edonfitnessratherthandietandweight.Thepresent:IbecamepositiveandIbecamebothhappierandhealthier.常用词汇like,so,too,still,similarly,simil
arto,thesame(...as...),incommon(with),both...and...,instead,than,however/but/though,differentfrom,ratherthan,insteadof,thedifferenceis...11基
础·自主学习核心·互动探究亮点表达1.Takingexerciseiscloselyrelatedtohealth.运动与健康息息相关。2.Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.我们应该
养成早睡早起的习惯。3.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。4.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeop
ledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一项调查,每年有4000000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。12基础·自主学习核心·互动探究5.Unlessyoukeepab
alanceddiet,youwillputonweight.除非你保持均衡的饮食,否则将会增加体重。6.Earlytobedandearlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。7.Thewalldepe
ndsonthefoundation,andthebodydependsonexercise.墙靠基础坚,身强靠锻炼。8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.每天一个苹果,医生远离我。(谚语)13基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作技巧词汇没有所
谓高低级之分,只有准确不准确之别。高考的满分范文和高分作文都在使用那些大部分中国学生高中就知道的词汇。千万不要一厢情愿地把一个本来平实准确的词,换成你觉得所谓的高级词(就像说到“离开家乡到大城市发展”中的“离开”就该用“leave”,而不用貌似更高级但其实毫无准确性可言的“aban
don”)。切记:最符合语境的才是最准确的,最准确的才是最给力的。14本节内容结束