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1基础·自主学习核心·互动探究SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有关身心健康的比较说明文本单元的写作任务是读一篇关于健康的文章后，写一篇有关身心健康的比较说明文。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowri

teafterthemodelGOINGPOSITIVEIalwayswantedtolookliketheslimgirlsonTVeventhoughIknewthatitwasimpossible.

IworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdietIreadaboutonline.Itriedno-fat，low-fat，5：2，onlybananas，nobananas—Ial

mostwentbananas，too.2基础·自主学习核心·互动探究ThenIreadanarticlethatsaidinsteadofasking“AmIfat？”Ishouldbeasking“AmIfit？”Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesucha

difference!OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight，thingsbegantochange.Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”，Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwok

ilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed，Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.Icouldstillhaveaburgernowan

dthen，butIwouldaddasaladoranapple.Finally，Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyface

orbody.Instead，ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody，Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.3基础·自主学习

核心·互动探究(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①___________________adj.健康的②___________________adj.不健康的③

___________________绿色食品④___________________健康饮食⑤___________________不健康的饮食习惯healthy/fitunhealthy/unfitgreenfood

healthyfood/dietunhealthyeatinghabit4基础·自主学习核心·互动探究⑥________________良好的生活习惯⑦________________adj.肥胖的⑧________________

强身健体⑨________________充足的睡眠⑩________________进行运动⑪________________减肥⑫___________________对„„有益处⑬________________节

食⑭________________养成一个„„的饮食习惯⑮___________________身体健康/不健康⑯____________________________对某人的健康/视力有益/害goodlivinghabitsover

weight/fatbuildupone’sbodyenoughsleeptakeexerciseloseweightbegoodfor/dogoodtogoonadietforma...eatinghabitbeing

ood/poorhealthbegood/badforone’shealth/eyes5基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅱ.While-writing写一篇100词左右的短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。内容包括：1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；2.现在已经做到二者平衡；3.你的做法。St

ep1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：___________________________________________________________Paragraph2：____________________

_______________________________________Paragraph3：___________________________________________________________Icouldn’tbal

ancerestandstudybefore.Howtobalancerestandstudy.Icanbalancerestandstudynow.6基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step2Listthewords，p

hrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________adj.劳累的②________________v.认识到；意识到③________________

__平衡休息和学习④________________忙于⑤________________休息一下⑥________________结果⑦________________生病⑧________________一直⑨

________________打篮球⑩________________落后tiredrealizebalancerestandstudybebusywithhavearestasaresultfallillallthetimeplaybasketballf

allbehind7基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.Sentences①我经常忙于学习，因此没有时间休息。(so)________________________________________________________________________②不是整天学习，而是我

开始抽时间休息。(ratherthan)________________________________________________________________________③我不是整天做作业，而是一天打一个小时篮

球。(insteadof)________________________________________________________________________Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.Rather

thanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesometimetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.8基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step

3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.so，ratherthan，insteadof，insteadTwoyearsago，Icouldn’tbalancerestandstudy.Iwasoftenbusywithmystudy，s

oIhadnotimetohavearest.Asaresult，Ioftenfelttiredandstressed.AtlastIfellillandhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness，Ibegant

othinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealizetheimportanceofbalancingrestandstudy.Ratherthanstudyingallthetime，Ibegantosparesomet

imetohavearest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwenttoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Finally，Igottobalancere

standstudy.Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind;instead，Istudiedbetterthanbefore.9基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepass

ageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Doesthewriterexplainwhyhe/shechanged/wantedt

ochange?□2.Doesthewritertellhowthechangeshaveimprovedorwillimprovehis/herlife?□3.Isthetextwell-organised?□4.Doesthewriterusew

ordsandexpressionstoshowsimilaritiesanddifferences?□5.Arethereanygrammarorspellingerrors?□6.Doesthewriterusecorrectpunctuation?10基础·自主学习核心·互

动探究写作要点Thepast：Iworriedaboutmyweightandtriedeverynewdiet.Thechanges：Ifocusedonfitnessratherthandietandweight.Thepresent：Ibecam

epositiveandIbecamebothhappierandhealthier.常用词汇like，so，too，still，similarly，similarto，thesame(...as...)，incommon(with)，both...and...，instead，th

an，however/but/though，differentfrom，ratherthan，insteadof，thedifferenceis...11基础·自主学习核心·互动探究亮点表达1.Takingexerciseiscloselyrela

tedtohealth.运动与健康息息相关。2.Weshouldgetintothehabitofkeepinggoodhours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。3.Smokinghasagreatinfluenceonourhealth.抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。4.Acco

rdingtoarecentsurvey，fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一项调查，每年有4000000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。12基础·自主学习核心·互动探究5.Unl

essyoukeepabalanceddiet，youwillputonweight.除非你保持均衡的饮食，否则将会增加体重。6.Earlytobedandearlytorise，makesamanhealthy，wealthyan

dwise.早睡早起会使人健康、富有和聪明。7.Thewalldependsonthefoundation，andthebodydependsonexercise.墙靠基础坚，身强靠锻炼。8.Anap

pleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.每天一个苹果，医生远离我。(谚语)13基础·自主学习核心·互动探究写作技巧词汇没有所谓高低级之分，只有准确不准确之别。高考的满分范文和高分作文都在使用那些大部分中国学生高中就知

道的词汇。千万不要一厢情愿地把一个本来平实准确的词，换成你觉得所谓的高级词(就像说到“离开家乡到大城市发展”中的“离开”就该用“leave”，而不用貌似更高级但其实毫无准确性可言的“abandon”)。

切记：最符合语境的才是最准确的，最准确的才是最给力的。14本节内容结束