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第六讲怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。[写作技法指导]启——创造良好开端[常用开头词汇]表示

“启”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly，firstofall，atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/st

artwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。First,Ithinkeveryoneneedsfriendsandiseagertogetfriendship.Fir

stofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraf

fic.Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.Tobegin/startwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.Generallyspeakin

g,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.[常用开头句式]Astheproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes，“Timeismone

y.”Ascanbeseenfromthetable,nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinChina.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanimporta

ntroleinpeople’slife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.Itisb

elievedthathealthisabovewealth.Itiswellknownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal.I’mexcitedtolearnthatwe

aregoingtostartamagazine.[满分作文选粹]I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibition.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Firs

tofall,I’dliketoknowwhentheclasswillstartandhowmanystudentstherewillbeinaclass.(全国卷Ⅰ)Asisknowntoall,sho

esplayanimportantroleinourlife,foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.(湖南卷)承——顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇]表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besi

des,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what’smore,furthermore，moreover,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,

forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。Also,doletmeknowifyouneedmor

einformation.Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Besides,developingagoodhabitoflearningcan

helpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively.What’smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.Inaddition,weshouldn’tneglectthateveryonew

antsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.[常用顺承句式]TakeBeijingforexampl

e,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tcherishwildlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandu

nity.[满分作文选粹]Inaddition,therearefamousartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Worsestill,Idon’tevenknowmuchaboutthewordandformatofthe

enclosure.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.(2016·江苏卷)Afterthat,Isetout

toreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.(

2016·浙江卷)AsfarasI’mconcerned,everysummerIstayatmyuncle’shouseinthecountryforthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.(2016·四川卷)Besides,I

havesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistanttomyEnglishteacher.(2015·陕西卷)Soonafterwards,asec

ondentrancewasopenedtotheparkingplace.(北京卷)转——巧妙转折过渡[常用转折过渡词汇]表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,whil

e,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/thoug

h,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmyparents.However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidw

erealizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Onthecontrary,thevolun

teersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.[常用转折句式]Whatever/No

matterwhatyousay,hewon’tbelieveyou.Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.Asamatteroffact,Ididn’tagreewithyou.[满分作文选粹]However,aplancanbearnofruitwithout

beingactuallycarriedout.(2016·浙江卷)Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillm

uchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.(2015·江苏卷)Otherwise,we’llhavetoanswerforourselfishnessso

onerorlater.(重庆卷)Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(北京卷)合——完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇]表示“合”的词汇常

用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort，inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tos

umup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeour­selvesandgetreadyforthene

wchallenges.Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.Onthewhole,Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.Inaword,successisimpor

tant,andsoisfailure,becauseit’sthemotherofsuccess.Tosumup,environmentalprotectionisofgreatimportance,whichcanma

keuslivemorecomfortablyandhealthily.[常用结尾句式]I’dappreciateitifyoucoulddeliverthemassoonaspossible.Itishightimethatwedidsomethingtopre

venttheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture.Wecan,therefore,cometo

theconclusionthatnothingissopreciousaspeaceintheworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatyoumu

sthaveself-confidenceifyouwanttoachievesomething.[满分作文选粹]Inaword,Ilikeeverythinginspring,especiallythefe

elingsbathedintherainandsunshine.(2016·四川卷)Inshort,internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifimmoral,andcanno

tbetrusted.(2016·江苏卷)Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson­linevoting.(2016·江苏卷)Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispers

onallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.(2015·安徽卷)Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.(2015·陕西卷)Lastbutnotleast,health

isalsoverysignificantforusstudents.(江西卷)So,it’ssafetoconcludethatitisreasonabletoincludeEnglishwhichfacil

itatesdailycommunication.(江苏卷)[应用落实体验]A(2017·长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：1．开车出行的好处；2．开车出行带来的问题；3．

你的观点和建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，_____________________________________

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urs，LiHua[考生作文]Dear__Sir/Madam，Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamiliesowncars,whichmakesthelifeeasier,quickerandmoreconvenient.Beside

s,itcansavethemalotoftime.Sothisiswhysomanypeopleprefertodrivecarswhengoingout.Butjustaseverycoinhastwosides,thepopul

arityofdrivingcarsresultsinmanyproblems.Forexample,toomanycarscancausetrafficproblems.What’sworse/Tomakematt

ersworse/Worsestill，airpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.Personally/Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned，asausefultraffictool,carsshould

beusedoccasionally.Ifpossible，wecantakepublictransportorgooutbybikeoronfoot.Looking__forward__to__your__r

eply.Yours，Li__Hua[我来提升]将文中加黑的衔接词升级1．Besides→In__addition/What’s__more/Moreover2．So→Therefore3．But→Howeve

r4．Forexample→For__instance[积累练习]将下列衔接词进行升级1．inmyview→in__my__point__of__view2．becauseof→on__account__of/due__to/owing__to/thanks__to3．because→i

n__that4．assoonas→the__moment/immediately/on__(upon)＋动名词5．if→providing/provided/supposing/suppose/on__condition__that6．although→d

espite/in__spite__ofB(2017·青岛模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1．付出才有回报；2．收获自

信和友谊；3．感激之情。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。LookingbacktotheNationalEnglishSpeakingCompetitionItookpartinseveraldaysago,Ihavealot

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__________________________________________________[考生作文]Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took

__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.IamverygladthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetitionandIam

proudofmyself.I’veestablishedfriendshipanditdevelopedmyself-confidence.Iowemysuccesstomyteachersandjudges.Theyhavehelpedmealot.Fromthecomp

etitionIhaveunderstoodthemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Iowemysuccesstomyworkinghard.Ihavemadefriendswithstudentsfromalloverour

country.Ihavelearnedalotfromthem.Theexperienceisveryimportanttous.Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.Iexpecttoachievemor

esuccess.[段落升格作文]Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Com­petition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I_

_have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.Firstly,IfeelreallydelightedthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetition,w

hichmakesmeunderstandthetruemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Besides,I’veestablishedthefriendshipwithstudentsfromalloverourcountry,fromwh

omI’velearnedalot.Moreimpor­tantly,takingthiscompetitionhasenabledmetoovercomemyfearofspeakinginpublic,thusdevelopingmyself­con­fidence.Additi

onally,Iowemanythankstomyteachersandjudges,withoutwhosehelp,Icouldn’thavedonesuchanexcellentjob.Tosumup,Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfuland

memorableexperience.专题强化训练26书面表达(一)[学生用书P127(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·河北石家庄高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾

在你家居住。近期你校要举办以“ForeignersTellChineseStories”为主题的英语征文活动。请写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：1．截稿时间2月1日；2．字数要求500左右；3．投稿邮箱chinesestory@126.com。注意：1.词数100左右；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearDavid，_________________________________________________________________________________________

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_________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__David，IthasbeenhalfayearsinceyouleftChin

a.How’severythinggoing?①Recently,anactivitythemed“ForeignersTellChineseStories”willbeheldinourschool.②Anyforeignstud

entwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacantakepartinit.Ithinkyouaresuitablefortheactivity,foryouusedtolivehereandlearnedsomuchaboutthecountry.You

canwriteaboutyourunderstandingofChinesecultureaswellasyourpersonalexperiencesinChina.Youareexpectedtowriteanarticleabout500wordsinEnglish.I

’dappreciateitifyoucouldmailyourarticletochinesestory@126.combeforeFebruary1st.③I’mlookingforwardtoyourparticipation.Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①R

ecently,ourschoolwillholdanactivitywhosethemeis“ForeignersTellChineseStories”．②ItissuggestedthatanyforeignstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacanpartic

ipateinit.③Idohopethatyouwillbeabletoparticipate./Weshouldbeverypleasedifyoucouldhonoruswithyourparticipation.Pass

age2(2017·河南洛阳高三第一次统考)假定你是李华，你的外教Ms.Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chineseknot)，但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms.Jenkins，说明相关情况。注意：1.词数10

0左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkins，______________________________________________________________________________________________

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__________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jenkins，①Iwouldliketooffermyapologyfornotb

eingabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②ThereasonisthatIhavegotacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldlieinbedforoneweekorso.

Butdon’tworry.I’veaskedafriendofmine，HanMeimei，togothereinstead.SheisgoodatmakingChineseknots.Shewillgotoyourapartmentat9：00thisSaturdaymorning

.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.③IhavetheconfidencethatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Wishyouagoodtime!Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Sorrynottobeablet

oteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday./It’sapitythatIamnotabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②BecauseIhavegotacold，andthedoctorsuggestst

hatIshouldlieinbedforoneweekorso./WhyIcan’tcomeisthatIhavecaughtacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldstayinbedforoneweekorso.

③WiththehelpofHanMeimei，there’snodoubtthatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Passage3(2017·湖北八校高三第一次联考

)假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathonrace)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼theYellowCraneTower，东湖EastLake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：

1．回复他的要求：2．询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMark，_____________________________

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_________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Mark，I’mverygladtohavereceivedyourletter,sayingthatyouwouldtakepartinthewinter

marathonracetobeheldinWuhanonDecember31.①Itismypleasuretoarrangeforyouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsomeofthefamousscenicspotshereaftertherac

e.②I’lldomybesttosatisfyyourneedandguaranteeyouapleasantjourney.Justtellmetheexacttimeofyourarrivalandhowlo

ngyouwillstayinyournextletter,sothatIcanpickyouupattheairportandmakeaproperarrangement.Bytheway,wishyougoodluckinthemarathonrac

e!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandyourarrival.Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①I’dbeverydelightedtoarrangeforyouraccommodatio

nandshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinteresthereaftertherace.②I’lldowhatIcantomeetyourneedandmakesurethatyouhaveapleas

antjourney./I’lldoeverythingIcantosatisfyyourneedandprovideyouwithapleasantjourney.Passage4(2017·云南高三调研)假如你是李

华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1．陪伴；2．照顾；3．其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3

．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter，___________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Peter，Howareyougettingalongthesedays

？Itisnormalthatyoucannotunderstandwhymygrandparentsarelivingwithus.Hereissomethingaboutit.Asweallknow,oldpeop

lealwaysfeellonely,sodomygrandparents.Besides，whenmyparentsarebusywiththeirwork,mygrandparentswillkeepmecompany.Mostimporta

ntly，theyareinpoorhealth，sotheyneedlookingafter.Onlyinthiswaycanwetakegoodcareofeachother.Actually，inChinagener

ationsarewillingtolivetogether.CaringfortheoldisconsideredasavirtueinChineseculture.Howaboutyourcultureofsupport

ingyourelders？I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·湖南部分重点中学考前演练)假定你是李华，即将去美国参加一个中美文化夏令营活动。请你根据以下内容

要点给你的美国朋友Mike写一封信，告知他你的美国之行。1．此行的目的；2．活动的内容；3．你的期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。De

arMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmerica._____________________________________________________

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iHuaOnepossibleversion：DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmerica.ThissummerIamtoattendanEnglishsummercampforSino­U.S.culturalexchang

es，whichIhavelongbeendreamingabout.Thisprogramisaimedatpromotingtheunderstandingofthepeopleandculturebetwee

nthetwocountries.Duringthetwo-weekEnglishsummercamp，wewillvisitsomefamousAmericanuniversities，experienceAmeric

ancultureandcustoms，andtourplacesofinterestintheU．S.Furthermore，wewillalsobeofferedaplatformtopracticeourspokenEnglishinanauthenticlangua

geenvironment.Iamsurethatthisprogramwillhelpmebetterunderstandtheculturaldifference.Meanwhile，IcanintroducemycountrytoAmericanstudentsthrought

hisprogram，whichwilldefinitelybeagreatsuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练27书面表达(二)[学

生用书P129(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·大连双基测试)假定你是李华，请给正在你校学习的英国交换生Bob写封邮件，通知他周末有义工活动，询问他是否参加。主要内容包括：1．主题：捡垃圾；2．时间和地点；3．注意事项。注意：1.词

数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearBob，Asanexchangestudent，howareyougettinga

longwithyourclassmates？Here,I’memailingyoutoinviteyoutoasocialpracticethisweekend.①OnSunday，we’rescheduledtotakepartinsomevoluntarywork，inwhichwe

’llhelpcleanthelocalnursinghome.Ourmaintaskistopickuplitterforthem.②Tiringasitmaybe,itiswellworthtryingbecauseyoucancomm

unicatewithlocalpeopleinChinese.③Ifyou’dliketojoinus,pleaseinformmebeforeFridayandIcanmakesomearrangementsforyou.Besides,doremembertowearap

airofglovestoprotectyourhandsifyoucome!Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation!Yours，LiHua【一句多译】①Wearetotakepartinsomevoluntaryworkwherethenursing

homewillbecleanedonSunday.②Thoughtired,youmayfeelitisworthwhiletohaveatrybecauseitgivesyouagoodopportunitytopracticeChinesewithlocalpeople.③Wouldyo

uliketojoinus？Ifyou’dliketo，pleasecallmebeforeFridayandIcangetthingspreparedinadvance.Passage2(2017·银川4月检测)假定你是高三学生李华。三月初你在网上买了一双鞋，打算送给妈妈作为“三八”

妇女节的礼物。但是，收到货后发现存在若干问题。请你就此给消费者协会写一封投诉信。要点如下：1．介绍购物情况；2．反映存在问题；3．提出解决方案。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，Iamo

neofyourcustomers._________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearSir/Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.IorderedapairofshoesformymumasagiftforWomen’sDay.Tomydi

sappointment，therearethefollowingproblems.①Tobeginwith,itdidn’tarriveonschedule，whichmissedtheWomen’sDay.Beside

s，notonlyisitthewrongsizebutitisalsoofwrongcolor.Whatbothersmemostisthequalityoftheshoes.Theyarenotm

adeofgenuineleather，whichgiveoffabadsmell.②Iamnotsatisfiedtohavereceivedsuchpoorservice，andIamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.Ihopeyoucaneitherretu

rnmymoneyordeliveranewpairtome.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua__【一句多译】①Tostartwith，notarrivi

ngonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay./Firstofall,asitdidn’tarriveonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay.②Notsatisfiedtohave

receivedsuchpoorservice，Iamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.Passage3(2017·东北三校二模)假如你是高三学生李华，你的好朋友Nancy在你校

的友好学校美国圣西诺高中读十二年级。毕业在即，她来信问你的梦想，请给她写封回信。主要内容包括：1．对梦想的理解；2．你的人生梦想；3．如何实现你的梦想。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearNancy，_

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HuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Nancy，Iamwritingtosharemydreamwithyou.Ourhomelanddreamstorestoretheformerglory，whichinspiresmetorecallmydrea

m—tobecomeadoctor，savinglivesandshoulderingaburdenoflow­expensemedicaltreatmentfordistantpoorvillagers.Beingamotivationand

goal,dreamsmakeusdetermined，diligentanddevotedaswellasmakinglifemoremeaningful.However，itisquiteplainthatobstaclescastafierceeyeo

nmealongside.Therefore，givingfullplaytostrengthsandminimizingweaknessesincurrentpreparationfortheentranceexamismyfirstc

hallengeIamtofaceconsciously.Also,Iamfullyconvincedthatsparingnoeffortstooffertoilandsweatfirmlyandconsistentlywillcontributealo

t.Iamincuriosityaboutyoursandreplytomesoon，please.Yours，Li__Hua__Passage4(2017·安徽合肥高三第一次教学质量检测)假如你是李华，来自阳光中

学，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr.Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：1．接受邀请，表示感谢；2．询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；3．提出相关建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．

开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMr.Williams，IamLiHua,astudentfromSunshineMiddleSchool._____________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforallyourhelpandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHuaOnepos

sibleversion：Dear__Mr.Williams，I__am__Li__Hua，a__student__from__Sunshine__Middle__School.Wearedelightedtoac

cepttheinvitationtoplayafriendlytabletennismatch,whichwillnodoubtstrengthenourfriendship.Iamwritingtoknowmoreaboutthearrangements.Sin

ceitisthefirsttimeforustogotoAustralia,we’dliketoknowthedetailsabouttheaccommodationssothatwecanmakesomepreparationsin

advance.Weprefertoliveinhostfamiliestoexperiencelocalculture.Besides,isitpossibleforyoutopickusupattheairportafterourarrival?Also,Iwouldappreci

ateitifwecouldworkoutaproperscheduleforbothsides.Thank__you__for__all__your__help__and__look__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2

017·烟台诊断)假如你是李华，你校英国交换生Tom在邮件中说他被牛津大学(OxfordUniversity)录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝聚会，但你那天要参加汉语诗词(poetry)比赛，不能参加聚会。请用英语给他回复邮件。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增

加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTom，________________________________________________________________________________________________

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__Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Tom，CongratulationsonyourbeingadmittedtoOxfordUniversity!I’mgrateful

andhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourcelebrationpartytobeheldthisSaturdayevening.However，muchtomyregret，Ihavetodeclineyourkindinvitation.Asyouknow,aChineseP

oetryCompetitionisbeingheldinourschoolandIhavesuccessfullyenteredthefinalroundcompetition，whichhappenstobescheduledonthisSaturdayandwillnotend

untillateintotheevening.It’sagreatpitythatIcan’tmakeittoyourparty.ButI’vepreparedagiftforyouandhopefullyyouwilllikeit.Mayyourpartyb

eagreatsuccessandenjoyyourselfthatday!Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练28书面表达(三)[学生用书P131(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·湖南长郡中学模

拟)假如你是李华，在丹麦访问学习的一周里你住在Anne家里。在即将回国之际，请你给她写一封感谢信。要点如下：1．简述你的丹麦之行；2．感谢她为你所做的一切；3．向她发出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：丹麦Denmark___________

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_______________________Onepossibleversion：DearAnne,IamwritingtoconveymygratitudeforyourkindhelpandcareduringmystayinDenmark,

withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.Duringtheweek,thecomfortableroom,deliciousmealsandespeciallyyourfriendlyfamilyallmademefeelathome

.Moreover,guidedbyyouIhadachancetovisitsomeplacesofinterestandbeexposedtosuchauniquecultureaswellasbeaut

ifulscenery.Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,IdobelievethatIwillhaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountryandculture.ThanksagainforyourkindhelpandIamsince

relylookingforwardtoshowingyouaroundinChinainthenearfuture.Allthebestwishestoyou.Yours,LiHuaPassage2(2017·重庆一模)假

如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter从网上知道了“ISingChina”的活动，这一活动旨在推广汉语、传播中国文化，他写信告诉你他很想参加这一活动，请你根据要点给他写一封回信。要点：1.推荐歌曲名称及内容；2．推荐理由；3．答应提供必要帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细

节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。DearPeter,GladtoknowyouwanttolearntosingaChinesesong._______________________________________

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____________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Peter,__Glad__to__know__you__wa

nt__to__learn__to__sing__a__Chinese__song.IwillbeverygladtorecommendWhataBeautifulJasminetoyou.ThisisafamousChi

nesefolksong,whichdescribesagirlwholovesjasmine.Throughthesongwecanknowabeautifulgirlwholoveslifeandexpectslove.Themusicis

verysweet,andthewordsarebeautiful.Whenyousingthesongyoucanfeelthetruelovebetweenayoungmanandawoman.ThissongisagoodsymbolofChinese

culture.Iwillpostyouthevideoofthesong.Ifyoulikeit,IwillhelpyoutopronouncetheChinesewords.Anyway,Iwouldliketoofferyouanyhelp.Best__wishes!Yours__sin

cerely，Li__HuaPassage3(2017·山东淄博一模)假定你是李华，你的语文老师Mr.Li受邀于三月初去英国一所学校进行交流。他将做关于中国传统文化的报告，并与英国学生互动(interact)。他请你用英语给对方负责人Ms.Jenkins写一封邮件，

希望提前安排好。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkins,________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jenkins,__OnbehalfofmyChineseteacherM

r.Li,I’mwritingtoinformyouthathewillbeinvitedtovisityourschoolinearlyMarch.I’mmorethandelightedtotellyouwhathehasarranged.Asalear

nedscholar,Mr.LiwilldeliveraspeechabouttraditionalChineseculture,talkingaboutthehistoryofChinesechara

cters,paintingsandTangpoetry.Afterthat,hewillinteractwithsomestudentsfromEnglandinyourschoolhall,whichwillsurelypromot

etheculturecommunicationbetweentwoschools.Howdoyouliketheplan?Isincerelyhopethatyoucouldmakearrangementsin

advance.Yours__faithfully，Li__HuaPassage4(2017·临沂一模)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中想了解你家的家风以及家风

对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：家风familyspiritsDearMichael,I’mgla

dtoknowthatyouarelearningChineselanguageandculture.______________________________________________________

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nepossibleversion：Dear__Michael,__I’m__glad__to__know__that__you__are__learning__Chinese__language__and__culture.Inyouremailyousaidthaty

ouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutmyfamilyspirits.Well,therearemanygoodqualitiesthathavebeenpassedfromgenerationtogenerationinmyfamily.Myparent

salwayslayemphasisontheimportanceofhonesty,bravery,perseveranceanddiligenceandtheyhavesetgoodexamplesformeandmybrother.Myfamilyspiritshave

aprofoundinfluenceonme.I’malwaysfriendlytoothersandamalwaysreadytohelpothers.Ialwayscheerupandneverstopchasingmygoaleve

nthoughImeetwithdifficulties.Owinggreatthankstothosegoodqualities,Ihavemadegreatachievementsinmystudyandlife.Yours，Li__HuaPassage

5(2017·东北三省四市模拟)假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要评选“TheMostQualifiedStudent”，请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：1．介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；2．说明推荐理由。注意：1.词数100左

右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor,_________________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Editor

，I’maseniorhighschoolstudentandIhappenedtohearthatyouarehostinganactivitytoselectTheMostQualifiedStudent.①Itisagreathonourforme

tointroducetoyouoneofmybestfriends,LinYang.Firstofall,he,whoisamongthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,notonlystudieshard,butalsobeha

veswell.Secondly,hestandsoutforhisdiversehobbies,includingpaintingandplayingtheviolin.②Lastbutnotleast,heiswarm­heartedandwillingtohelpo

thersinneed.Therefore,IhererecommendhimtoyouwithallmyheartandIlookforwardtohearingfromyouattheearliestpossiblemoment.Yours__sincerely，Li

__Hua【一句多译】①Iwouldbegratefulifyouconsidermyrecommendationofmybestfriend,LinYang./Inmyopinion,mybestfriend,LinYang,shouldbec

hosentobeTheMostQualifiedStudent.②Mostimportantly,heisalwaysreadytohelpothers./Themostqualifiedpointsofhimarewarm­heartednessandtherea

dinesstomeetothers’need.