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第六讲怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。[写作技法指导

]启——创造良好开端[常用开头词汇]表示“启”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly，firstofall，atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/star

twith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。First,Ithinkeveryo

neneedsfriendsandiseagertogetfriendship.Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplain

ingabouttheheavytraffic.Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.Tobegin/startwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicare

as.Generallyspeaking,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.[常用开头句式]Astheproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes，“Timeism

oney.”Ascanbeseenfromthetable,nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinChina.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanim

portantroleinpeople’slife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmin

d.Itisbelievedthathealthisabovewealth.Itiswellknownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal.I’mexcitedto

learnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine.[满分作文选粹]I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibition.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Firstofall,I’dl

iketoknowwhentheclasswillstartandhowmanystudentstherewillbeinaclass.(全国卷Ⅰ)Asisknowntoall,shoesplayan

importantroleinourlife,foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.(湖南卷)承——顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇]表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩

展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what’smore,furthermore，moreover,what’sworse,stillless,tomakematter

sworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。Also,doletmeknowifyouneedm

oreinformation.Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Besides,developingagoo

dhabitoflearningcanhelpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively.What’smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.In

addition,weshouldn’tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanan

dhealthy.[常用顺承句式]TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tcherishwildlife.AsfarasIamconc

erned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.[满分作文选粹]Inaddition,therearefamousartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Worsesti

ll,Idon’tevenknowmuchaboutthewordandformatoftheenclosure.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpos

sible.(2016·江苏卷)Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwi

thgoodpublicspeechskills.(2016·浙江卷)AsfarasI’mconcerned,everysummerIstayatmyuncle’shouseinthecountryfo

rthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.(2016·四川卷)Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistanttomyEnglishteacher.(2015·陕西卷)S

oonafterwards,asecondentrancewasopenedtotheparkingplace.(北京卷)转——巧妙转折过渡[常用转折过渡词汇]表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意

见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despit

e,inspiteof,regardlessof等。ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmyparents.However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwere

alizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Onthecontrary,thevol

unteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.[常用转折句式]Whatever/Noma

tterwhatyousay,hewon’tbelieveyou.Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.Asamatteroffact,Ididn’tagreewithyo

u.[满分作文选粹]However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.(2016·浙江卷)Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,

thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.(2015·江苏卷)Otherwise,we’llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoo

nerorlater.(重庆卷)Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(北京卷)合——完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇]表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的

结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort，inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。Allinall,travelingisthebe

stchoicetorechargeour­selvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.Onthewhole,Ifindabik

emoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.Inaword,successisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseit’sthemotherofsuccess.Tosumup,environmentalp

rotectionisofgreatimportance,whichcanmakeuslivemorecomfortablyandhealthily.[常用结尾句式]I’dappreciateitifyoucould

deliverthemassoonaspossible.Itishightimethatwedidsomethingtopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.Onlywithcom

binedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture.Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissoprecious

aspeaceintheworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatyoumusthaveself-confidencei

fyouwanttoachievesomething.[满分作文选粹]Inaword,Ilikeeverythinginspring,especiallythefeelingsbathedintherainandsunshine.(2016·四川

卷)Inshort,internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.(2016·江苏卷)Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson­linevoting.(2016·江苏

卷)Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.(2015·安徽卷)Iwillbegratefuli

fyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.(2015·陕西卷)Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.(江西卷)So,it’ssa

fetoconcludethatitisreasonabletoincludeEnglishwhichfacilitatesdailycommunication.(江苏卷)[应用落实体验]A(2017·长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，

现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：1．开车出行的好处；2．开车出行带来的问题；3．你的观点和建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总

词数。DearSir/Madam，_______________________________________________________________________________________________

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_______________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua[考生作文]Dear__Sir/Madam，Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamiliesowncars,

whichmakesthelifeeasier,quickerandmoreconvenient.Besides,itcansavethemalotoftime.Sothisiswhysomanypeopleprefertodrivecarswhengoingout.Butjustasever

ycoinhastwosides,thepopularityofdrivingcarsresultsinmanyproblems.Forexample,toomanycarscancausetrafficproblems.What’sworse/Toma

kemattersworse/Worsestill，airpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.Personally/Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned，asausefultr

affictool,carsshouldbeusedoccasionally.Ifpossible，wecantakepublictransportorgooutbybikeoronfoot.Looking__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li

__Hua[我来提升]将文中加黑的衔接词升级1．Besides→In__addition/What’s__more/Moreover2．So→Therefore3．But→However4．Forexample

→For__instance[积累练习]将下列衔接词进行升级1．inmyview→in__my__point__of__view2．becauseof→on__account__of/due__to/owing__to/thanks__to3．becaus

e→in__that4．assoonas→the__moment/immediately/on__(upon)＋动名词5．if→providing/provided/supposing/suppose/on__conditio

n__that6．although→despite/in__spite__ofB(2017·青岛模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1．付出才有回报；2．收获自信

和友谊；3．感激之情。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。LookingbacktotheNationalEnglishSpeakingCompet

itionItookpartinseveraldaysago,Ihavealottosharewithyou._______________________________________________________________________________

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______________________________________________________________________________________________[考生作文]Looking__back__to__the__National__E

nglish__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__

you.IamverygladthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetitionandIamproudofmyself.I’veestablishedfriendshipanditdevelopedmyself-confidence.Iowemysuccessto

myteachersandjudges.Theyhavehelpedmealot.FromthecompetitionIhaveunderstoodthemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Iowemysuccesstomyworkinghard.I

havemadefriendswithstudentsfromalloverourcountry.Ihavelearnedalotfromthem.Theexperienceisveryimportanttous.Iwilla

lwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.Iexpecttoachievemoresuccess.[段落升格作文]Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Co

m­petition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.Firstly,IfeelreallydelightedthatI’vewonthef

irstprizeinthecompetition,whichmakesmeunderstandthetruemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Besides,I’veestablishedthefriendshipwithstuden

tsfromalloverourcountry,fromwhomI’velearnedalot.Moreimpor­tantly,takingthiscompetitionhasenabledmeto

overcomemyfearofspeakinginpublic,thusdevelopingmyself­con­fidence.Additionally,Iowemanythankstomyteachersandjudges

,withoutwhosehelp,Icouldn’thavedonesuchanexcellentjob.Tosumup,Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.专题强化训练26书面表达(一)[学生用

书P127(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·河北石家庄高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾在你家居住。近期你校要举办以“ForeignersTellChineseStories”为主题的英语征文活动。请写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如

下：1．截稿时间2月1日；2．字数要求500左右；3．投稿邮箱chinesestory@126.com。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearDavid，_______

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______________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__David，IthasbeenhalfayearsinceyouleftChina.How’severythinggoing?①Recently,anactivitythemed“

ForeignersTellChineseStories”willbeheldinourschool.②AnyforeignstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacantakepartinit.Ithinkyouaresuit

ablefortheactivity,foryouusedtolivehereandlearnedsomuchaboutthecountry.Youcanwriteaboutyourunderstandingo

fChinesecultureaswellasyourpersonalexperiencesinChina.Youareexpectedtowriteanarticleabout500wordsinEnglish.I’dappreciateitifyo

ucouldmailyourarticletochinesestory@126.combeforeFebruary1st.③I’mlookingforwardtoyourparticipation.Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Recently,ours

choolwillholdanactivitywhosethemeis“ForeignersTellChineseStories”．②Itissuggestedthatanyforeignstudent

whoisenthusiasticaboutChinacanparticipateinit.③Idohopethatyouwillbeabletoparticipate./Weshouldbeverypl

easedifyoucouldhonoruswithyourparticipation.Passage2(2017·河南洛阳高三第一次统考)假定你是李华，你的外教Ms.Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chineseknot)，但你

因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms.Jenkins，说明相关情况。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkins，_______________________

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__________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms._

_Jenkins，①IwouldliketooffermyapologyfornotbeingabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②Thereasoni

sthatIhavegotacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldlieinbedforoneweekorso.Butdon’tworry.I’veaskedafriendofmine，HanMeimei，togot

hereinstead.SheisgoodatmakingChineseknots.Shewillgotoyourapartmentat9：00thisSaturdaymorning.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.③Ihavetheconfidencet

hatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Wishyouagoodtime!Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①SorrynottobeabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday./It’sapitythatIamno

tabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②BecauseIhavegotacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldlieinbedforoneweeko

rso./WhyIcan’tcomeisthatIhavecaughtacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldstayinbedforoneweekorso.③WiththehelpofHanMeimei，there’snodoubtthatyoucanlearn

howtomakeChineseknots.Passage3(2017·湖北八校高三第一次联考)假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(ma

rathonrace)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼theYellowCraneTower，东湖EastLake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1．回复他的要求：2．询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排

。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMark，____________________________________________________________________________

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version：Dear__Mark，I’mverygladtohavereceivedyourletter,sayingthatyouwouldtakepartinthewintermarathonracetobeheldinWuhanonDecember3

1.①Itismypleasuretoarrangeforyouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsomeofthefamousscenicspotshereaftertherace.②I’lldomybesttos

atisfyyourneedandguaranteeyouapleasantjourney.Justtellmetheexacttimeofyourarrivalandhowlongyouwillstayinyournextletter,sothatIcanpickyouupa

ttheairportandmakeaproperarrangement.Bytheway,wishyougoodluckinthemarathonrace!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandyourarrival.Yours，Li__Hua

【一句多译】①I’dbeverydelightedtoarrangeforyouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinteresthereaftertherace.②I’lldowhatIca

ntomeetyourneedandmakesurethatyouhaveapleasantjourney./I’lldoeverythingIcantosatisfyyourneedandprovideyouwithapleasantjourney.Pass

age4(2017·云南高三调研)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1．陪伴；2．照顾；3．其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和

结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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version：Dear__Peter，Howareyougettingalongthesedays？Itisnormalthatyoucannotunderstandwhymygrandparentsarelivingwithus.Hereissomethingaboutit.Asw

eallknow,oldpeoplealwaysfeellonely,sodomygrandparents.Besides，whenmyparentsarebusywiththeirwork,mygrandparentswillkeepmecompany.Mostimportantly，they

areinpoorhealth，sotheyneedlookingafter.Onlyinthiswaycanwetakegoodcareofeachother.Actually，inChinagenerati

onsarewillingtolivetogether.CaringfortheoldisconsideredasavirtueinChineseculture.Howaboutyourcultureofsupportingyourelders？I’mlookingforw

ardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·湖南部分重点中学考前演练)假定你是李华，即将去美国参加一个中美文化夏令营活动。请你根据以下内容要点给你的美国朋友Mike写一封信，告知他你的美国之行。1．此行的目的；2．活动的内容；3．你的期望。注意：

1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmeri

ca.__________________________________________________________________________________________________

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ke，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmerica.ThissummerIamtoattendanEnglishsummercampforSino­

U.S.culturalexchanges，whichIhavelongbeendreamingabout.Thisprogramisaimedatpromotingtheunderstandingofthepeopleandculturebetweenthetwocountri

es.Duringthetwo-weekEnglishsummercamp，wewillvisitsomefamousAmericanuniversities，experienceAmericancultureandcustoms，an

dtourplacesofinterestintheU．S.Furthermore，wewillalsobeofferedaplatformtopracticeourspokenEnglishinanauthenticlanguageenvironment.Iamsur

ethatthisprogramwillhelpmebetterunderstandtheculturaldifference.Meanwhile，IcanintroducemycountrytoAmericanstudentsthroughthispr

ogram，whichwilldefinitelybeagreatsuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练27书面表达(二)[学生用书P129(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·大连双基测试)假定你是李华，

请给正在你校学习的英国交换生Bob写封邮件，通知他周末有义工活动，询问他是否参加。主要内容包括：1．主题：捡垃圾；2．时间和地点；3．注意事项。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________

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_______Onepossibleversion：DearBob，Asanexchangestudent，howareyougettingalongwithyourclassmates？Here,I’memailingyoutoinviteyouto

asocialpracticethisweekend.①OnSunday，we’rescheduledtotakepartinsomevoluntarywork，inwhichwe’llhelpcleantheloca

lnursinghome.Ourmaintaskistopickuplitterforthem.②Tiringasitmaybe,itiswellworthtryingbecauseyoucancommunicatewithlocalpeopleinChinese.③Ifyou’dliketo

joinus,pleaseinformmebeforeFridayandIcanmakesomearrangementsforyou.Besides,doremembertowearapairofgl

ovestoprotectyourhandsifyoucome!Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation!Yours，LiHua【一句多译】①Wearetotakeparti

nsomevoluntaryworkwherethenursinghomewillbecleanedonSunday.②Thoughtired,youmayfeelitisworthwhiletohaveatrybecauseitgivesyouagoodop

portunitytopracticeChinesewithlocalpeople.③Wouldyouliketojoinus？Ifyou’dliketo，pleasecallmebeforeFridayandIcangetthingspreparedinadv

ance.Passage2(2017·银川4月检测)假定你是高三学生李华。三月初你在网上买了一双鞋，打算送给妈妈作为“三八”妇女节的礼物。但是，收到货后发现存在若干问题。请你就此给消费者协会写一封投诉信。要点如下：1．介绍购物情况；2．反映存在问

题；3．提出解决方案。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.____________________________________

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________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearSir/Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.Iorde

redapairofshoesformymumasagiftforWomen’sDay.Tomydisappointment，therearethefollowingproblems.①Tobeginwith

,itdidn’tarriveonschedule，whichmissedtheWomen’sDay.Besides，notonlyisitthewrongsizebutitisalsoofwrongcolor.Whatbothersmemostisthequalityoftheshoe

s.Theyarenotmadeofgenuineleather，whichgiveoffabadsmell.②Iamnotsatisfiedtohavereceivedsuchpoorservice，andIamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit

.Ihopeyoucaneitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewpairtome.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua__【一句多译】①Tostartwi

th，notarrivingonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay./Firstofall,asitdidn’tarriveonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay.②Notsatisfiedtohavere

ceivedsuchpoorservice，Iamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.Passage3(2017·东北三校二模)假如你是高三学生李华，你的好朋友Nancy在你校的友好学校美国圣西诺高中读十二年级。毕业在即，她来信问你的梦想，请给她写封回

信。主要内容包括：1．对梦想的理解；2．你的人生梦想；3．如何实现你的梦想。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearNancy，______________________________

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_________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Nan

cy，Iamwritingtosharemydreamwithyou.Ourhomelanddreamstorestoretheformerglory，whichinspiresmetorecallmydr

eam—tobecomeadoctor，savinglivesandshoulderingaburdenoflow­expensemedicaltreatmentfordistantpoorvillagers.Beingam

otivationandgoal,dreamsmakeusdetermined，diligentanddevotedaswellasmakinglifemoremeaningful.However，itisquiteplainthatobstaclescastafie

rceeyeonmealongside.Therefore，givingfullplaytostrengthsandminimizingweaknessesincurrentpreparationfortheentranceexamismyfi

rstchallengeIamtofaceconsciously.Also,Iamfullyconvincedthatsparingnoeffortstooffertoilandsweatfirmlyandconsistentlywillcon

tributealot.Iamincuriosityaboutyoursandreplytomesoon，please.Yours，Li__Hua__Passage4(2017·安徽合肥高三第一次教学质量检测)假如你是李华，来自阳光中学，你校乒乓球队应

邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr.Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：1．接受邀请，表示感谢；2．询问食宿、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；3．提出相关建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以

适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMr.Williams，IamLiHua,astudentfromSunshineMiddleSchool.__________________________________________________________

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_________________________Thankyouforallyourhelpandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Mr.Williams，I__am__Li__Hua，

a__student__from__Sunshine__Middle__School.Wearedelightedtoaccepttheinvitationtoplayafriendlytabletennismatch,w

hichwillnodoubtstrengthenourfriendship.Iamwritingtoknowmoreaboutthearrangements.SinceitisthefirsttimeforustogotoAust

ralia,we’dliketoknowthedetailsabouttheaccommodationssothatwecanmakesomepreparationsinadvance.Weprefer

toliveinhostfamiliestoexperiencelocalculture.Besides,isitpossibleforyoutopickusupattheairportafterourarrival?Also,Iwouldappreciateitifweco

uldworkoutaproperscheduleforbothsides.Thank__you__for__all__your__help__and__look__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·烟台诊断)假如你

是李华，你校英国交换生Tom在邮件中说他被牛津大学(OxfordUniversity)录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝聚会，但你那天要参加汉语诗词(poetry)比赛，不能参加聚会。请用英语给他回复邮件。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使

行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTom，___________________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Tom，CongratulationsonyourbeingadmittedtoOxfor

dUniversity!I’mgratefulandhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourcelebrationpartytobeheldthisSaturdayevening.However，

muchtomyregret，Ihavetodeclineyourkindinvitation.Asyouknow,aChinesePoetryCompetitionisbeingheldinourschoolandIhavesuccessfullyenteredthef

inalroundcompetition，whichhappenstobescheduledonthisSaturdayandwillnotenduntillateintotheevening.It’sagreatpitythatIcan

’tmakeittoyourparty.ButI’vepreparedagiftforyouandhopefullyyouwilllikeit.Mayyourpartybeagreatsuccessandenjoyyourselfthatday!Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练28

书面表达(三)[学生用书P131(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·湖南长郡中学模拟)假如你是李华，在丹麦访问学习的一周里你住在Anne家里。在即将回国之际，请你给她写一封感谢信。要点如下：1．简述你的丹麦之行；2．感谢她为你

所做的一切；3．向她发出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：丹麦Denmark_______________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearAnne,Iamwritingtoconveymygratitudeforyourkindhelpa

ndcareduringmystayinDenmark,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.Duringtheweek,thecomfortableroom,deliciousm

ealsandespeciallyyourfriendlyfamilyallmademefeelathome.Moreover,guidedbyyouIhadachancetovisitsomeplacesofinteres

tandbeexposedtosuchauniquecultureaswellasbeautifulscenery.Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,IdobelievethatIwil

lhaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountryandculture.ThanksagainforyourkindhelpandIamsincerelylookingforwardtoshowingyouaroundinChinainthenearfuture.Allt

hebestwishestoyou.Yours,LiHuaPassage2(2017·重庆一模)假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter从网上知道了“ISingChina”的活动，这一活动旨在推广汉语、传播中国文化，他写信告诉你他

很想参加这一活动，请你根据要点给他写一封回信。要点：1.推荐歌曲名称及内容；2．推荐理由；3．答应提供必要帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数

。DearPeter,GladtoknowyouwanttolearntosingaChinesesong._________________________________________________________________________________

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_______________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Peter,__Glad__to__know__you__want__to__learn__to__sing__a__Chinese__song.I

willbeverygladtorecommendWhataBeautifulJasminetoyou.ThisisafamousChinesefolksong,whichdescribesagirlwholovesjasmine.Throughthesongwecanknow

abeautifulgirlwholoveslifeandexpectslove.Themusicisverysweet,andthewordsarebeautiful.Whenyousingthesongyoucanfeelthetruelov

ebetweenayoungmanandawoman.ThissongisagoodsymbolofChineseculture.Iwillpostyouthevideoofthesong.Ifyoulikeit,Iwillhelpyoutopronouncet

heChinesewords.Anyway,Iwouldliketoofferyouanyhelp.Best__wishes!Yours__sincerely，Li__HuaPassage3(2017·山东淄博一模)假定你是李华，你的语文老师Mr.Li受邀于

三月初去英国一所学校进行交流。他将做关于中国传统文化的报告，并与英国学生互动(interact)。他请你用英语给对方负责人Ms.Jenkins写一封邮件，希望提前安排好。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词

数。DearMs.Jenkins,____________________________________________________________________________________

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__________________________________Yoursfaithfully，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jenkins,__OnbehalfofmyChineseteacherMr.Li,I’mwrit

ingtoinformyouthathewillbeinvitedtovisityourschoolinearlyMarch.I’mmorethandelightedtotellyouwhathehasarranged.Asalearnedscholar,Mr.L

iwilldeliveraspeechabouttraditionalChineseculture,talkingaboutthehistoryofChinesecharacters,paintingsandTangpoetry.Afterthat,

hewillinteractwithsomestudentsfromEnglandinyourschoolhall,whichwillsurelypromotetheculturecommunicationbetw

eentwoschools.Howdoyouliketheplan?Isincerelyhopethatyoucouldmakearrangementsinadvance.Yours__faithfully，Li__HuaP

assage4(2017·临沂一模)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中想了解你家的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以

适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：家风familyspiritsDearMichael,I’mgladtoknowthatyouarelearningChineselanguageandculture.________________________________________

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____________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Michael,__I’m__glad__to__know__that__you__are__learning__Chinese__language__and__cult

ure.Inyouremailyousaidthatyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutmyfamilyspirits.Well,therearemanygoodqualitiesthathavebeenpassedfromge

nerationtogenerationinmyfamily.Myparentsalwayslayemphasisontheimportanceofhonesty,bravery,perseveranceanddiligenceandt

heyhavesetgoodexamplesformeandmybrother.Myfamilyspiritshaveaprofoundinfluenceonme.I’malwaysfriendlytoothersandamalwaysreadytohelpothers.Ialw

ayscheerupandneverstopchasingmygoaleventhoughImeetwithdifficulties.Owinggreatthankstothosegoodqualities,Ihavemadegreatachievementsinmystudyan

dlife.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·东北三省四市模拟)假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要评选“TheMostQualifiedStudent”，请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：1．介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；2．说明推荐理由。

注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor,_____________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Editor，I’maseniorhighschoolstudentandIhappenedtohearthatyouar

ehostinganactivitytoselectTheMostQualifiedStudent.①Itisagreathonourformetointroducetoyouoneofmybestfriends,LinYang.Fi

rstofall,he,whoisamongthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,notonlystudieshard,butalsobehaveswell.Secondly,hestandsoutforhisdiversehobbies,includingpa

intingandplayingtheviolin.②Lastbutnotleast,heiswarm­heartedandwillingtohelpothersinneed.Therefore,Ihererecommendhimtoyouwithallmyhear

tandIlookforwardtohearingfromyouattheearliestpossiblemoment.Yours__sincerely，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Iwouldbegratefulifyouconsi

dermyrecommendationofmybestfriend,LinYang./Inmyopinion,mybestfriend,LinYang,shouldbechosentobeTheMostQualifiedStudent.②Mostimportantly,heisalwa

ysreadytohelpothers./Themostqualifiedpointsofhimarewarm­heartednessandthereadinesstomeetothers’need.