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第六讲怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。[写作技法指导]启——创造良好开端[常用开头词汇]表示“启

”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly，firstofall，atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/st

artwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。First,Ithinkeveryoneneeds

friendsandiseagertogetfriendship.Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.Nowadays/Recentl

y,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic.Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.Tobegin/st

artwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.Generallyspeaking,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.[常用开头句式]As

theproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes，“Timeismoney.”Ascanbeseenfromthetable,nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinChina.Withthedevelopmentofth

eInternet,computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.There

isnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.Itisbelievedthathealthisabovewealth.Itiswellknownthatanelephan

tisaverykindandgentleanimal.I’mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine.[满分作文选粹]I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoinviteyout

oseetheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibition.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Firstofall,I’dliketoknowwhentheclasswillstartandhowmanystudentstherewillbeinaclass.(全国卷Ⅰ)Asiskn

owntoall,shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife,foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.(湖南卷)承——顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇]表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：se

cond/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what’smore,furthermore，moreover,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersw

orse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。Also

,doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Besides,developingagoodhabitoflea

rningcanhelpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively.What’smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.Inaddition,

weshouldn’tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentclean

andhealthy.[常用顺承句式]TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tche

rishwildlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.[满分作文选粹]Inaddition,therearefamousartistsw

howillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Worsestill,Idon’tevenknowmuchaboutthewordandformatoftheenclosure.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Furthermore,vot

ingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.(2016·江苏卷)Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wr

oteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.(2016·浙江卷)AsfarasI’mconcerned,everysummerIstayatmyuncle’sho

useinthecountryforthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.(2016·四川卷)Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistantt

omyEnglishteacher.(2015·陕西卷)Soonafterwards,asecondentrancewasopenedtotheparkingplace.(北京卷)转——巧妙转折过渡[常用转折

过渡词汇]表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,a

s,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmypar

ents.However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantage

s.Onthecontrary,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadoriginally

said,thetripturnedouttobefun.[常用转折句式]Whatever/Nomatterwhatyousay,hewon’tbelieveyou.Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.Asamatteroffact,Id

idn’tagreewithyou.[满分作文选粹]However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.(2016·浙江卷)Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsa

ndhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.(2015·江苏卷)Otherwise,we’llhavetoanswerforoursel

fishnesssoonerorlater.(重庆卷)Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(北京卷)合——完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇]表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，

引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort，inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumu

p,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeour­selvesandgetreadyfor

thenewchallenges.Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.Onthewhole,Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.Inaword,successisimporta

nt,andsoisfailure,becauseit’sthemotherofsuccess.Tosumup,environmentalprotectionisofgreatimportance,whichcanmakeuslivemo

recomfortablyandhealthily.[常用结尾句式]I’dappreciateitifyoucoulddeliverthemassoonaspossible.Itishightimethatwedidsomethingtopreventtheenvir

onmentfrombeingpolluted.Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture.Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusiontha

tnothingissopreciousaspeaceintheworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatyoumusthaveself-confidenceifyou

wanttoachievesomething.[满分作文选粹]Inaword,Ilikeeverythinginspring,especiallythefeelingsbathedintherainandsunshine.(2016·四川卷)Inshort,inter

netvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.(2016·江苏卷)Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson­linevoting.(2016·江苏卷)Finally

,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.(2015·安徽卷)Iwillbegratefulify

oucouldgivemeakindconsideration.(2015·陕西卷)Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.(江西卷)So,it’ssafetoconcludetha

titisreasonabletoincludeEnglishwhichfacilitatesdailycommunication.(江苏卷)[应用落实体验]A(2017·长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的

人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：1．开车出行的好处；2．开车出行带来的问题；3．你的观点和建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，_______

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dtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua[考生作文]Dear__Sir/Madam，Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamiliesowncars,whichmakesthelifeeasier,q

uickerandmoreconvenient.Besides,itcansavethemalotoftime.Sothisiswhysomanypeopleprefertodrivecarswhengoin

gout.Butjustaseverycoinhastwosides,thepopularityofdrivingcarsresultsinmanyproblems.Forexample,toomanycarscancausetrafficproblems.What’sworse/Tomake

mattersworse/Worsestill，airpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.Personally/Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned，asausefultraffictool,carsshouldbeusedoccasiona

lly.Ifpossible，wecantakepublictransportorgooutbybikeoronfoot.Looking__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li_

_Hua[我来提升]将文中加黑的衔接词升级1．Besides→In__addition/What’s__more/Moreover2．So→Therefore3．But→However4．Forexample→For__instance[积累练习]将下列衔接词进行升级1．inmyview→i

n__my__point__of__view2．becauseof→on__account__of/due__to/owing__to/thanks__to3．because→in__that4．assoonas→the__

moment/immediately/on__(upon)＋动名词5．if→providing/provided/supposing/suppose/on__condition__that6．although

→despite/in__spite__ofB(2017·青岛模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1．付出才有回报；2．收获自信和友谊；3．感激之情。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节以使行文

连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。LookingbacktotheNationalEnglishSpeakingCompetitionItookpartinseveraldaysago,Ihavealottosharewithyou.______________________

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__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.

IamverygladthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetitionandIamproudofmyself.I’veestablishedfriendshipanditdevelopedmyself-confid

ence.Iowemysuccesstomyteachersandjudges.Theyhavehelpedmealot.FromthecompetitionIhaveunderstoodthemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．I

owemysuccesstomyworkinghard.Ihavemadefriendswithstudentsfromalloverourcountry.Ihavelearnedalotfromthem.Theexperi

enceisveryimportanttous.Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.Iexpecttoachievemoresuccess.[段落升格作文]Looking__back__to__th

e__National__English__Speaking__Com­petition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.Firstly,

IfeelreallydelightedthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetition,whichmakesmeunderstandthetruemeaningofthep

roverb“Nopains,nogains”．Besides,I’veestablishedthefriendshipwithstudentsfromalloverourcountry,fromwhomI’velearnedalot.Moreimpor­tantly,takingthiscomp

etitionhasenabledmetoovercomemyfearofspeakinginpublic,thusdevelopingmyself­con­fidence.Additionally,Iowe

manythankstomyteachersandjudges,withoutwhosehelp,Icouldn’thavedonesuchanexcellentjob.Tosumup,Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience

.专题强化训练26书面表达(一)[学生用书P127(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·河北石家庄高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾在你家居住。近期你校要举办以“Foreign

ersTellChineseStories”为主题的英语征文活动。请写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：1．截稿时间2月1日；2．字数要求500左右；3．投稿邮箱chinesestory@126.com。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearDavid，

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ssibleversion：Dear__David，IthasbeenhalfayearsinceyouleftChina.How’severythinggoing?①Recently,anactivitythemed“ForeignersTellChineseStories”willbehel

dinourschool.②AnyforeignstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacantakepartinit.Ithinkyouaresuitablefortheactivity,foryouusedtoliv

ehereandlearnedsomuchaboutthecountry.YoucanwriteaboutyourunderstandingofChinesecultureaswellasyourpersonal

experiencesinChina.Youareexpectedtowriteanarticleabout500wordsinEnglish.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldmailyou

rarticletochinesestory@126.combeforeFebruary1st.③I’mlookingforwardtoyourparticipation.Yours，Li__Hua【

一句多译】①Recently,ourschoolwillholdanactivitywhosethemeis“ForeignersTellChineseStories”．②Itissuggestedthatanyforeign

studentwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacanparticipateinit.③Idohopethatyouwillbeabletoparticipate./Weshouldbev

erypleasedifyoucouldhonoruswithyourparticipation.Passage2(2017·河南洛阳高三第一次统考)假定你是李华，你的外教Ms.Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chinesek

not)，但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms.Jenkins，说明相关情况。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkins，_______________________

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____________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jenkins，①Iwouldliketooffe

rmyapologyfornotbeingabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②ThereasonisthatIhavegotacold，andthe

doctorsuggeststhatIshouldlieinbedforoneweekorso.Butdon’tworry.I’veaskedafriendofmine，HanMeimei，togothereins

tead.SheisgoodatmakingChineseknots.Shewillgotoyourapartmentat9：00thisSaturdaymorning.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.③Ihavetheconfid

encethatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Wishyouagoodtime!Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①SorrynottobeabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday./It’sa

pitythatIamnotabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②BecauseIhavegotacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIsh

ouldlieinbedforoneweekorso./WhyIcan’tcomeisthatIhavecaughtacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldstayinbedforoneweekorso.③WiththehelpofH

anMeimei，there’snodoubtthatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Passage3(2017·湖北八校高三第一次联考)假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31

日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathonrace)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼theYellowCraneTower，东湖EastLake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1．回复他的要求：2．询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排。注意：1.词

数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMark，____________________________________________________________________________

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possibleversion：Dear__Mark，I’mverygladtohavereceivedyourletter,sayingthatyouwouldtakepartinthewintermarathonracetobeheldinWuhanonDecember31.①Itismy

pleasuretoarrangeforyouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsomeofthefamousscenicspotshereaftertherace.②I’lldomybesttosatisfyyournee

dandguaranteeyouapleasantjourney.Justtellmetheexacttimeofyourarrivalandhowlongyouwillstayinyournextletter,sothatIcanpickyouupatth

eairportandmakeaproperarrangement.Bytheway,wishyougoodluckinthemarathonrace!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandyourarrival.Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①I’d

beverydelightedtoarrangeforyouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinteresthereaftertherace.②I’lldowhatIcantomeetyourneedandmakesuretha

tyouhaveapleasantjourney./I’lldoeverythingIcantosatisfyyourneedandprovideyouwithapleasantjourney.Passage4(2017·云南高三调研)假如你是李华

，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1．陪伴；2．照顾；3．其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter，_

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ear__Peter，Howareyougettingalongthesedays？Itisnormalthatyoucannotunderstandwhymygrandparentsarelivingwithus.Hereissomething

aboutit.Asweallknow,oldpeoplealwaysfeellonely,sodomygrandparents.Besides，whenmyparentsarebusywiththeirwork,mygrandparentswillkeepmec

ompany.Mostimportantly，theyareinpoorhealth，sotheyneedlookingafter.Onlyinthiswaycanwetakegoodcareofeachother.Actually，inChina

generationsarewillingtolivetogether.CaringfortheoldisconsideredasavirtueinChineseculture.Howaboutyourcultureofsupportingyou

relders？I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·湖南部分重点中学考前演练)假定你是李华，即将去美国参加一个中美文化夏令营活动。请你根据以下内容要点给你的美国朋友Mik

e写一封信，告知他你的美国之行。1．此行的目的；2．活动的内容；3．你的期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmerica.___

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_______Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmerica.ThissummerIamtoattendanEnglishsummercampforS

ino­U.S.culturalexchanges，whichIhavelongbeendreamingabout.Thisprogramisaimedatpromotingtheunderstandingofthepeopleandcu

lturebetweenthetwocountries.Duringthetwo-weekEnglishsummercamp，wewillvisitsomefamousAmericanuniversities，experienceAmericancultureandcustoms，andtou

rplacesofinterestintheU．S.Furthermore，wewillalsobeofferedaplatformtopracticeourspokenEnglishinanauthenticlanguag

eenvironment.Iamsurethatthisprogramwillhelpmebetterunderstandtheculturaldifference.Meanwhile，Icanintroducemycoun

trytoAmericanstudentsthroughthisprogram，whichwilldefinitelybeagreatsuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua专题强化

训练27书面表达(二)[学生用书P129(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·大连双基测试)假定你是李华，请给正在你校学习的英国交换生Bob写封邮件，通知他周末有义工活动，询问他是否参加。主要内容

包括：1．主题：捡垃圾；2．时间和地点；3．注意事项。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________

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_____________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearBob，Asanexchangestudent，

howareyougettingalongwithyourclassmates？Here,I’memailingyoutoinviteyoutoasocialpracticethisweekend.①OnSunday

，we’rescheduledtotakepartinsomevoluntarywork，inwhichwe’llhelpcleanthelocalnursinghome.Ourmaintaskistopickuplitterforth

em.②Tiringasitmaybe,itiswellworthtryingbecauseyoucancommunicatewithlocalpeopleinChinese.③Ifyou’dlike

tojoinus,pleaseinformmebeforeFridayandIcanmakesomearrangementsforyou.Besides,doremembertowearapairofglovestoprotectyour

handsifyoucome!Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation!Yours，LiHua【一句多译】①Wearetotakepartinsomevoluntaryworkwherethenursinghomewillbec

leanedonSunday.②Thoughtired,youmayfeelitisworthwhiletohaveatrybecauseitgivesyouagoodopportunitytopracticeChinesewithlocalp

eople.③Wouldyouliketojoinus？Ifyou’dliketo，pleasecallmebeforeFridayandIcangetthingspreparedinadvance.Passage2(2017·银

川4月检测)假定你是高三学生李华。三月初你在网上买了一双鞋，打算送给妈妈作为“三八”妇女节的礼物。但是，收到货后发现存在若干问题。请你就此给消费者协会写一封投诉信。要点如下：1．介绍购物情况；2．反映存在问题；3．提出解决方案。注意：1.词数10

0左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.________________________________________________________________________

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_______________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearSir/Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.Iorderedapairofsh

oesformymumasagiftforWomen’sDay.Tomydisappointment，therearethefollowingproblems.①Tobeginwith,itdidn’tarriveonschedule，whichmissedthe

Women’sDay.Besides，notonlyisitthewrongsizebutitisalsoofwrongcolor.Whatbothersmemostisthequalityofthesh

oes.Theyarenotmadeofgenuineleather，whichgiveoffabadsmell.②Iamnotsatisfiedtohavereceivedsuchpoorservice，andIamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.

Ihopeyoucaneitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewpairtome.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua__【一句多译】①To

startwith，notarrivingonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay./Firstofall,asitdidn’tarriveonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’s

Day.②Notsatisfiedtohavereceivedsuchpoorservice，Iamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.Passage3(2017·东北三校二模)假如你是高三

学生李华，你的好朋友Nancy在你校的友好学校美国圣西诺高中读十二年级。毕业在即，她来信问你的梦想，请给她写封回信。主要内容包括：1．对梦想的理解；2．你的人生梦想；3．如何实现你的梦想。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾

已给出，不计入总词数。DearNancy，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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__________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：

Dear__Nancy，Iamwritingtosharemydreamwithyou.Ourhomelanddreamstorestoretheformerglory，whichinspiresmetorecallmydream—tobe

comeadoctor，savinglivesandshoulderingaburdenoflow­expensemedicaltreatmentfordistantpoorvillagers.Beingamotivatio

nandgoal,dreamsmakeusdetermined，diligentanddevotedaswellasmakinglifemoremeaningful.However，itisquitepl

ainthatobstaclescastafierceeyeonmealongside.Therefore，givingfullplaytostrengthsandminimizingweaknessesincurrentpre

parationfortheentranceexamismyfirstchallengeIamtofaceconsciously.Also,Iamfullyconvincedthatsparingnoeffortst

ooffertoilandsweatfirmlyandconsistentlywillcontributealot.Iamincuriosityaboutyoursandreplytomesoon，pleas

e.Yours，Li__Hua__Passage4(2017·安徽合肥高三第一次教学质量检测)假如你是李华，来自阳光中学，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr.Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：1．接受邀请，表示感谢；2．询问食宿

、交通及比赛日程等方面的安排；3．提出相关建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMr.Williams，IamLiHua,astudentfromSun

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nkyouforallyourhelpandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Mr.Williams，I__am__Li__Hua，a__student__from__Sunshine__Middle__Schoo

l.Wearedelightedtoaccepttheinvitationtoplayafriendlytabletennismatch,whichwillnodoubtstrengthenourfriendship.Iamwritingtokno

wmoreaboutthearrangements.SinceitisthefirsttimeforustogotoAustralia,we’dliketoknowthedetailsabouttheaccommodationssothatwecanmake

somepreparationsinadvance.Weprefertoliveinhostfamiliestoexperiencelocalculture.Besides,isitpossibleforyoutopickusupattheairportafterourarrival?Also,I

wouldappreciateitifwecouldworkoutaproperscheduleforbothsides.Thank__you__for__all__your__help__and__look__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li__H

uaPassage5(2017·烟台诊断)假如你是李华，你校英国交换生Tom在邮件中说他被牛津大学(OxfordUniversity)录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝聚会，但你那天要参加汉语诗词(poetry)比赛，不能参加聚会。请用英语给他回复邮件。注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTom，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Tom，Con

gratulationsonyourbeingadmittedtoOxfordUniversity!I’mgratefulandhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourcelebrationpartytobehe

ldthisSaturdayevening.However，muchtomyregret，Ihavetodeclineyourkindinvitation.Asyouknow,aChinesePoetryCompetitionisbeinghe

ldinourschoolandIhavesuccessfullyenteredthefinalroundcompetition，whichhappenstobescheduledonthisSaturdayandwillno

tenduntillateintotheevening.It’sagreatpitythatIcan’tmakeittoyourparty.ButI’vepreparedagiftforyouandh

opefullyyouwilllikeit.Mayyourpartybeagreatsuccessandenjoyyourselfthatday!Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练28书面表达(三)[学生用书P131(单独成册)]Passage

1(2017·湖南长郡中学模拟)假如你是李华，在丹麦访问学习的一周里你住在Anne家里。在即将回国之际，请你给她写一封感谢信。要点如下：1．简述你的丹麦之行；2．感谢她为你所做的一切；3．向她发出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以

使行文连贯。参考词汇：丹麦Denmark____________________________________________________________________________________________

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_____________________Onepossibleversion：DearAnne,Iamwritingtoconveymygratitudeforyourkindhelpandcareduringmy

stayinDenmark,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.Duringtheweek,thecomfortableroom,deliciousmealsandespec

iallyyourfriendlyfamilyallmademefeelathome.Moreover,guidedbyyouIhadachancetovisitsomeplacesofinterestandbeexposedtosuchauniqueculture

aswellasbeautifulscenery.Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,IdobelievethatIwillhaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountryand

culture.ThanksagainforyourkindhelpandIamsincerelylookingforwardtoshowingyouaroundinChinainthenearfuture.Allthebestwishestoyou.Yours,LiHuaPassa

ge2(2017·重庆一模)假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter从网上知道了“ISingChina”的活动，这一活动旨在推广汉语、传播中国文化，他写信告诉你他很想参加这一活动，请你根据要点给他写一封回信。要点：1.推荐歌曲名称及内容；2．推荐理由；3．答

应提供必要帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。DearPeter,GladtoknowyouwanttolearntosingaChinesesong._________

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_____________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yourssincerely，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Peter,__Glad__to__

know__you__want__to__learn__to__sing__a__Chinese__song.IwillbeverygladtorecommendWhataBeautifulJasminetoyou.Thisisafa

mousChinesefolksong,whichdescribesagirlwholovesjasmine.Throughthesongwecanknowabeautifulgirlwholoveslifeandexpects

love.Themusicisverysweet,andthewordsarebeautiful.Whenyousingthesongyoucanfeelthetruelovebetweenayoungmana

ndawoman.ThissongisagoodsymbolofChineseculture.Iwillpostyouthevideoofthesong.Ifyoulikeit,IwillhelpyoutopronouncetheChinesewords.Anywa

y,Iwouldliketoofferyouanyhelp.Best__wishes!Yours__sincerely，Li__HuaPassage3(2017·山东淄博一模)假定你是李华，你的语文老师Mr.Li受邀于三月初去英国一所学校进行交流。他将做关于中国传统文化的报告，并与英国学生互动(i

nteract)。他请你用英语给对方负责人Ms.Jenkins写一封邮件，希望提前安排好。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkins

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___________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jen

kins,__OnbehalfofmyChineseteacherMr.Li,I’mwritingtoinformyouthathewillbeinvitedtovisityourschoolinearlyMa

rch.I’mmorethandelightedtotellyouwhathehasarranged.Asalearnedscholar,Mr.Liwilldeliveraspeechabouttraditional

Chineseculture,talkingaboutthehistoryofChinesecharacters,paintingsandTangpoetry.Afterthat,hewillinteractwithsomestudentsfromEnglandinyourschoolha

ll,whichwillsurelypromotetheculturecommunicationbetweentwoschools.Howdoyouliketheplan?Isincerelyhopethatyo

ucouldmakearrangementsinadvance.Yours__faithfully，Li__HuaPassage4(2017·临沂一模)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中想了解你家的家风以及家风

对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：家风familyspiritsDearMichael,I’mgladtoknowthatyouarelearningC

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_________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Michael,__I’m__glad__to__k

now__that__you__are__learning__Chinese__language__and__culture.Inyouremailyousaidthatyouwantedtoknowsomethingabo

utmyfamilyspirits.Well,therearemanygoodqualitiesthathavebeenpassedfromgenerationtogenerationinmyfamily.Myparentsalwayslayemphasisontheimportanceo

fhonesty,bravery,perseveranceanddiligenceandtheyhavesetgoodexamplesformeandmybrother.Myfamilyspiritshaveaprofoundinfluenceonme

.I’malwaysfriendlytoothersandamalwaysreadytohelpothers.IalwayscheerupandneverstopchasingmygoaleventhoughImee

twithdifficulties.Owinggreatthankstothosegoodqualities,Ihavemadegreatachievementsinmystudyandlife.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·东北三省

四市模拟)假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要评选“TheMostQualifiedStudent”，请你用英语给编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：1．介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；2．说明推荐理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适

当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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iHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Editor，I’maseniorhighschoolstudentandIhappenedtohearthatyouarehostinganactivitytoselectTheMostQualifiedStu

dent.①Itisagreathonourformetointroducetoyouoneofmybestfriends,LinYang.Firstofall,he,whoisamongthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,noton

lystudieshard,butalsobehaveswell.Secondly,hestandsoutforhisdiversehobbies,includingpaintingandplayingt

heviolin.②Lastbutnotleast,heiswarm­heartedandwillingtohelpothersinneed.Therefore,IhererecommendhimtoyouwithallmyheartandIlook

forwardtohearingfromyouattheearliestpossiblemoment.Yours__sincerely，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Iwouldbegratefulifyouconsidermyrecommendationofmybestfriend,L

inYang./Inmyopinion,mybestfriend,LinYang,shouldbechosentobeTheMostQualifiedStudent.②Mostimportantly,heisa

lwaysreadytohelpothers./Themostqualifiedpointsofhimarewarm­heartednessandthereadinesstomeetothers’need.