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第六讲怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。[写作技法指导]启——创造良好开端[常用开头词汇]表示“启”的词汇常

用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。常见的词汇有：first,firstly，firstofall，atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,n

ow,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。First,Ithinkeveryoneneedsfriendsand

iseagertogetfriendship.Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45­minutelesson.Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarec

omplainingabouttheheavytraffic.Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.Tobegin/startwit

h,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.Generallyspeaking,themoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.[常用开头句式]Asth

eproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes，“Timeismoney.”Ascanbeseenfromthetable,nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinCh

ina.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepe

arlyhours.Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.Itisbelievedthathealthisabovewealth.Itiswellknownthatanel

ephantisaverykindandgentleanimal.I’mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine.[满分作文选粹]I’mLiHua.I’mwritingt

oinviteyoutoseetheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibition.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Firstofall,I’dliketoknowwhentheclasswillstartandhowmanystudentst

herewillbeinaclass.(全国卷Ⅰ)Asisknowntoall,shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife,foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.(湖南卷)承——顺势承上启下[常用顺承词汇]表示“承

”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。常见的词汇有：second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what’smore,furthermore，moreover,wha

t’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obv

iously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。Also,doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.Secondly，weshouldgetupearly

tomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.Besides,developingagoodhabitoflearningcanhelpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively

.What’smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.Inaddition,weshouldn’tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsoci

ety.Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.[常用顺承句式]TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesin

theworld.Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tcherishwildlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.[满分作文选粹]Inaddition,therearefamou

sartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Worsestill,Idon’tevenknowmuchaboutthewordandformatoftheenclosure.(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Fur

thermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.(2016·江苏卷)Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,an

dpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.(2016·浙江卷)AsfarasI’mconcerned,everysummerIstayatmyun

cle’shouseinthecountryforthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.(2016·四川卷)Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistant

tomyEnglishteacher.(2015·陕西卷)Soonafterwards,asecondentrancewasopenedtotheparkingplace.(北京卷)转——巧妙转折过渡[常用转折过渡词汇]表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情

况。常见的词汇有：but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or(else),onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though

,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideri

ngmyparents.However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppin

galsohasmanydisadvantages.Onthecontrary,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.ContrarytowhatIhadorigi

nallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.[常用转折句式]Whatever/Nomatterwhatyousay,hewon’tbelieveyou.Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.Asamatteroffact,Id

idn’tagreewithyou.[满分作文选粹]However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.(2016·浙江卷)Inspiteofthelarge-sca

leconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.(2015·江苏卷)Otherwise,

we’llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.(重庆卷)Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.(北京卷)

合——完美结束全文[常用结尾词汇]表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。常见的词汇有：finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort，inbrief,inconclusion,ina/onewo

rd,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeour­selvesandgetreadyfort

henewchallenges.Inconclusion,agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.Onthewhole,Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.Inaword,succ

essisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseit’sthemotherofsuccess.Tosumup,environmentalprotectionisofgreatimportance,

whichcanmakeuslivemorecomfortablyandhealthily.[常用结尾句式]I’dappreciateitifyoucoulddeliverthemassoonaspossible.Itishight

imethatwedidsomethingtopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfut

ure.Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousaspeaceintheworld.Fromwhathasbeendiscu

ssedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatyoumusthaveself-confidenceifyouwanttoachievesomething.[满分作文选粹]Inaword,Ilikeeverythinginspring,

especiallythefeelingsbathedintherainandsunshine.(2016·四川卷)Inshort,internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.(2016·江苏卷)

Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardson­linevoting.(2016·江苏卷)Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbev

eryinteresting.(2015·安徽卷)Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.(2015·陕西卷)Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsov

erysignificantforusstudents.(江西卷)So,it’ssafetoconcludethatitisreasonabletoincludeEnglishwhichfacilitatesdailycomm

unication.(江苏卷)[应用落实体验]A(2017·长春实验中学模拟)汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：1．开车出行的好处；2．开车出行带来的问题；3．你的观点和建

议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，________________________________________________________________

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______Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua[考生作文]Dear__Sir/Madam，Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamiliesowncar

s,whichmakesthelifeeasier,quickerandmoreconvenient.Besides,itcansavethemalotoftime.Sothisiswhysomanypeoplep

refertodrivecarswhengoingout.Butjustaseverycoinhastwosides,thepopularityofdrivingcarsresultsinmanyproblems.Forexample,toomanycar

scancausetrafficproblems.What’sworse/Tomakemattersworse/Worsestill，airpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.Personal

ly/Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned，asausefultraffictool,carsshouldbeusedoccasionally.Ifpossible，wecantakepublictransportorgooutbyb

ikeoronfoot.Looking__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li__Hua[我来提升]将文中加黑的衔接词升级1．Besides→In__addition/What’s__more/Moreover2．So→Therefore3．But→H

owever4．Forexample→For__instance[积累练习]将下列衔接词进行升级1．inmyview→in__my__point__of__view2．becauseof→on__account__o

f/due__to/owing__to/thanks__to3．because→in__that4．assoonas→the__moment/immediately/on__(upon)＋动名词5．if→pro

viding/provided/supposing/suppose/on__condition__that6．although→despite/in__spite__ofB(2017·青岛模拟)假如你是某中学的学生李

华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1．付出才有回报；2．收获自信和友谊；3．感激之情。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数

。LookingbacktotheNationalEnglishSpeakingCompetitionItookpartinseveraldaysago,Ihavealottosharewithyou.__________________

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__________[考生作文]Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several_

_days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.IamverygladthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetitionandIampro

udofmyself.I’veestablishedfriendshipanditdevelopedmyself-confidence.Iowemysuccesstomyteachersandjudge

s.Theyhavehelpedmealot.FromthecompetitionIhaveunderstoodthemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Iowemysuccesstomywo

rkinghard.Ihavemadefriendswithstudentsfromalloverourcountry.Ihavelearnedalotfromthem.Theexperienceisveryimportanttous.Iwillalwayst

reasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.Iexpecttoachievemoresuccess.[段落升格作文]Looking__back__to__the__National__English__S

peaking__Com­petition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.Firstly,IfeelreallydelightedthatI’vewo

nthefirstprizeinthecompetition,whichmakesmeunderstandthetruemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Besides,I’veestablis

hedthefriendshipwithstudentsfromalloverourcountry,fromwhomI’velearnedalot.Moreimpor­tantly,takingthiscompetit

ionhasenabledmetoovercomemyfearofspeakinginpublic,thusdevelopingmyself­con­fidence.Additionally,Iowemanythankstomyteachersandjudges,withoutwhos

ehelp,Icouldn’thavedonesuchanexcellentjob.Tosumup,Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.专题强化训练26书面表达(一)[学生用书P127(

单独成册)]Passage1(2017·河北石家庄高三质量检测)假定你是李华，你的美国朋友David作为交换生曾在你家居住。近期你校要举办以“ForeignersTellChineseStories”为主题的英语征文活动。请写一封邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：1．截稿时间2月1日；2．字数要求500左

右；3．投稿邮箱chinesestory@126.com。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearDavid，___________________________________________________________

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_____________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__David，Ithasbeenhalfayearsinceyo

uleftChina.How’severythinggoing?①Recently,anactivitythemed“ForeignersTellChineseStories”willbeheldinourschool.②Any

foreignstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacantakepartinit.Ithinkyouaresuitablefortheactivity,foryouusedtolivehereandlearnedsomuchaboutthecountr

y.YoucanwriteaboutyourunderstandingofChinesecultureaswellasyourpersonalexperiencesinChina.Youareexpectedtowritea

narticleabout500wordsinEnglish.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldmailyourarticletochinesestory@126.combeforeFebruary1st.③I’mlo

okingforwardtoyourparticipation.Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Recently,ourschoolwillholdanactivitywhosethemeis“ForeignersTellChineseStories”．

②ItissuggestedthatanyforeignstudentwhoisenthusiasticaboutChinacanparticipateinit.③Idohopethatyouwillbea

bletoparticipate./Weshouldbeverypleasedifyoucouldhonoruswithyourparticipation.Passage2(2017·河南洛阳高三第一次统考)假定你是李华，你的外教Ms.Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chines

eknot)，但你因故无法前往，你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去，请写一封电子邮件给Ms.Jenkins，说明相关情况。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkin

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s，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jenkins，①IwouldliketooffermyapologyfornotbeingabletoteachyoutomakeChines

eknotsthisSaturday.②ThereasonisthatIhavegotacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldlieinbedforoneweekorso.Butdon’tworry.I’veaskedafriendofmine，HanMei

mei，togothereinstead.SheisgoodatmakingChineseknots.Shewillgotoyourapartmentat9：00thisSaturdaymorning.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.③Ihavetheconf

idencethatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Wishyouagoodtime!Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Sorrynottobeabletoteach

youtomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday./It’sapitythatIamnotabletoteachyoutomakeChineseknotsthisSaturday.②BecauseIhavegotac

old，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldlieinbedforoneweekorso./WhyIcan’tcomeisthatIhavecaughtacold，andthedoctorsuggeststhatIshouldstayi

nbedforoneweekorso.③WiththehelpofHanMeimei，there’snodoubtthatyoucanlearnhowtomakeChineseknots.Passage3(2017·湖北八校高三第

一次联考)假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件，说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathonrace)，希望你帮助他预订好旅馆，并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼theYellowCraneTower，东湖Ea

stLake)。请你给他写封回信，内容包括：1．回复他的要求：2．询问他到达的具体时间，待多久，以便你做具体安排。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMark，___________

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_______________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Mark，I’mverygladtohavereceivedyourletter,sayingthatyou

wouldtakepartinthewintermarathonracetobeheldinWuhanonDecember31.①Itismypleasuretoarrangeforyouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsom

eofthefamousscenicspotshereaftertherace.②I’lldomybesttosatisfyyourneedandguaranteeyouapleasantjourne

y.Justtellmetheexacttimeofyourarrivalandhowlongyouwillstayinyournextletter,sothatIcanpickyouupattheairportandmakeaproperarrangement.Bytheway,wi

shyougoodluckinthemarathonrace!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyandyourarrival.Yours，Li__Hua【一句多译】①I’dbeverydelightedtoarrange

foryouraccommodationandshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinteresthereaftertherace.②I’lldowhatIcantomeetyourneedandmakesurethatyouhaveapleasant

journey./I’lldoeverythingIcantosatisfyyourneedandprovideyouwithapleasantjourney.Passage4(2017·云南高三调研)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知

你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1．陪伴；2．照顾；3．其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter，______________________________

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_____________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Peter，How

areyougettingalongthesedays？Itisnormalthatyoucannotunderstandwhymygrandparentsarelivingwithus.Hereissomethingaboutit.Asweallknow,oldpeoplealwa

ysfeellonely,sodomygrandparents.Besides，whenmyparentsarebusywiththeirwork,mygrandparentswillkeepmecompany.Mostimportantly，the

yareinpoorhealth，sotheyneedlookingafter.Onlyinthiswaycanwetakegoodcareofeachother.Actually，inChinagenerationsarewillingtoliveto

gether.CaringfortheoldisconsideredasavirtueinChineseculture.Howaboutyourcultureofsupportingyourelders？

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·湖南部分重点中学考前演练)假定你是李华，即将去美国参加一个中美文化夏令营活动。请你根据以下内容要点给你的美国朋友Mike写一封信，告知他你的

美国之行。1．此行的目的；2．活动的内容；3．你的期望。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmeri

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____________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearMike，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmytriptoAmerica.Thissummer

IamtoattendanEnglishsummercampforSino­U.S.culturalexchanges，whichIhavelongbeendreamingabout.Thisprogramisaimedatpromotingtheunderstandi

ngofthepeopleandculturebetweenthetwocountries.Duringthetwo-weekEnglishsummercamp，wewillvisitsomefamousAmericanuniversities，expe

rienceAmericancultureandcustoms，andtourplacesofinterestintheU．S.Furthermore，wewillalsobeofferedaplatformtopracticeourspokenEnglishina

nauthenticlanguageenvironment.Iamsurethatthisprogramwillhelpmebetterunderstandtheculturaldifference.Meanwhile，Icanintroducemycou

ntrytoAmericanstudentsthroughthisprogram，whichwilldefinitelybeagreatsuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练27书面表达(二)[学生用

书P129(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·大连双基测试)假定你是李华，请给正在你校学习的英国交换生Bob写封邮件，通知他周末有义工活动，询问他是否参加。主要内容包括：1．主题：捡垃圾；2．时间和地点；3．注意事项。注意：1

.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Onepossibleversion：DearBob，Asanexchangestudent，howareyougettingalongwithyourclassmates？Here,I’memailingyoutoinv

iteyoutoasocialpracticethisweekend.①OnSunday，we’rescheduledtotakepartinsomevoluntarywork，inwhichwe’llhelp

cleanthelocalnursinghome.Ourmaintaskistopickuplitterforthem.②Tiringasitmaybe,itiswellworthtryingbecauseyoucancommun

icatewithlocalpeopleinChinese.③Ifyou’dliketojoinus,pleaseinformmebeforeFridayandIcanmakesomearrangementsforyou.Bes

ides,doremembertowearapairofglovestoprotectyourhandsifyoucome!Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation!Yours，LiHua【一句多译】①Wearetotakepartinsomev

oluntaryworkwherethenursinghomewillbecleanedonSunday.②Thoughtired,youmayfeelitisworthwhiletohaveatrybecauseitgivesyouagoodopportunitytopracticeChines

ewithlocalpeople.③Wouldyouliketojoinus？Ifyou’dliketo，pleasecallmebeforeFridayandIcangetthingspreparedinadvance.Passage2(2017·银川4月检测)假定你是高三学生李华。三月初你在

网上买了一双鞋，打算送给妈妈作为“三八”妇女节的礼物。但是，收到货后发现存在若干问题。请你就此给消费者协会写一封投诉信。要点如下：1．介绍购物情况；2．反映存在问题；3．提出解决方案。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以

使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.___________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：DearSir/

Madam，Iamoneofyourcustomers.IorderedapairofshoesformymumasagiftforWomen’sDay.Tomydisappointment，therearethefollowingproblems.①

Tobeginwith,itdidn’tarriveonschedule，whichmissedtheWomen’sDay.Besides，notonlyisitthewrongsizebutitisalsoofwrongcolor.Whatbothersmemostisthequalit

yoftheshoes.Theyarenotmadeofgenuineleather，whichgiveoffabadsmell.②Iamnotsatisfiedtohavereceivedsuchpoorser

vice，andIamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.Ihopeyoucaneitherreturnmymoneyordeliveranewpairtome.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Y

ours，Li__Hua__【一句多译】①Tostartwith，notarrivingonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay./Firstofall,asitdidn’tarri

veonschedule，itmissedtheWomen’sDay.②Notsatisfiedtohavereceivedsuchpoorservice，Iamqualifiedtoaskyoutohandleit.Passage3(2017·东北三校二模)假如你

是高三学生李华，你的好朋友Nancy在你校的友好学校美国圣西诺高中读十二年级。毕业在即，她来信问你的梦想，请给她写封回信。主要内容包括：1．对梦想的理解；2．你的人生梦想；3．如何实现你的梦想。注意：1.词数100左右；2．

开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearNancy，______________________________________________________________________________________________________

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_________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Nancy，Iamwritingt

osharemydreamwithyou.Ourhomelanddreamstorestoretheformerglory，whichinspiresmetorecallmydream—tobecomeadoctor，savinglivesandshoulderingabur

denoflow­expensemedicaltreatmentfordistantpoorvillagers.Beingamotivationandgoal,dreamsmakeusdetermined，diligentanddevotedaswellasmaking

lifemoremeaningful.However，itisquiteplainthatobstaclescastafierceeyeonmealongside.Therefore，givingfullplaytostrengthsandminimiz

ingweaknessesincurrentpreparationfortheentranceexamismyfirstchallengeIamtofaceconsciously.Also,Iamfullyconvincedthatsparingnoeffortstooffertoila

ndsweatfirmlyandconsistentlywillcontributealot.Iamincuriosityaboutyoursandreplytomesoon，please.Yours，Li__Hua__Passage4(2017·安徽合肥高三第一次教学质量检测)假

如你是李华，来自阳光中学，你校乒乓球队应邀去澳大利亚一所中学参加中学生乒乓球友谊赛。请你给举办学校联系人Mr.Williams写一封邮件询问相关事宜，要点如下：1．接受邀请，表示感谢；2．询问食宿、交通及比

赛日程等方面的安排；3．提出相关建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMr.Williams，IamLiHua,astudentfromSunshineMiddleSchool.______________________

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______________________________________________________________________Thankyouforallyourhelpandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHuaOne

possibleversion：Dear__Mr.Williams，I__am__Li__Hua，a__student__from__Sunshine__Middle__School.Wearedelightedtoacceptt

heinvitationtoplayafriendlytabletennismatch,whichwillnodoubtstrengthenourfriendship.Iamwritingtoknowmor

eaboutthearrangements.SinceitisthefirsttimeforustogotoAustralia,we’dliketoknowthedetailsabouttheaccommodations

sothatwecanmakesomepreparationsinadvance.Weprefertoliveinhostfamiliestoexperiencelocalculture.Beside

s,isitpossibleforyoutopickusupattheairportafterourarrival?Also,Iwouldappreciateitifwecouldworkoutaproper

scheduleforbothsides.Thank__you__for__all__your__help__and__look__forward__to__your__reply.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·

烟台诊断)假如你是李华，你校英国交换生Tom在邮件中说他被牛津大学(OxfordUniversity)录取了，邀请你本周六晚参加庆祝聚会，但你那天要参加汉语诗词(poetry)比赛，不能参加聚会。请用英语给他回复邮件。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适

当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTom，____________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Tom，Congratulatio

nsonyourbeingadmittedtoOxfordUniversity!I’mgratefulandhonoredtobeinvitedtoyourcelebrationpartytobeheldthisSaturdayevening.However，muchto

myregret，Ihavetodeclineyourkindinvitation.Asyouknow,aChinesePoetryCompetitionisbeingheldinourschoolan

dIhavesuccessfullyenteredthefinalroundcompetition，whichhappenstobescheduledonthisSaturdayandwillnote

nduntillateintotheevening.It’sagreatpitythatIcan’tmakeittoyourparty.ButI’vepreparedagiftforyouandhopefullyyouwilllikeit.Mayyourpartyb

eagreatsuccessandenjoyyourselfthatday!Yours，Li__Hua专题强化训练28书面表达(三)[学生用书P131(单独成册)]Passage1(2017·湖南长郡中学模拟)假如你是李华

，在丹麦访问学习的一周里你住在Anne家里。在即将回国之际，请你给她写一封感谢信。要点如下：1．简述你的丹麦之行；2．感谢她为你所做的一切；3．向她发出邀请。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连

贯。参考词汇：丹麦Denmark_________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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______________________________Onepossibleversion：DearAnne,IamwritingtoconveymygratitudeforyourkindhelpandcareduringmystayinDenma

rk,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.Duringtheweek,thecomfortableroom,deliciousmealsandespeciallyyourfriendlyfamilyallmademefeelathome

.Moreover,guidedbyyouIhadachancetovisitsomeplacesofinterestandbeexposedtosuchauniquecultureaswellasbeautifulscenery.Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,Idobeli

evethatIwillhaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountryandculture.ThanksagainforyourkindhelpandIamsincerelylookingforwardtoshowingyouaroundinChi

nainthenearfuture.Allthebestwishestoyou.Yours,LiHuaPassage2(2017·重庆一模)假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter从网上知道了“ISingChina”的活动，这一活动旨在推广汉语、传播中国文化，

他写信告诉你他很想参加这一活动，请你根据要点给他写一封回信。要点：1.推荐歌曲名称及内容；2．推荐理由；3．答应提供必要帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。DearPeter,Gladtoknowyouw

anttolearntosingaChinesesong._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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ion：Dear__Peter,__Glad__to__know__you__want__to__learn__to__sing__a__Chinese__song.Iwillbeverygladtorecommen

dWhataBeautifulJasminetoyou.ThisisafamousChinesefolksong,whichdescribesagirlwholovesjasmine.Throughthes

ongwecanknowabeautifulgirlwholoveslifeandexpectslove.Themusicisverysweet,andthewordsarebeautiful.Whenyousingthesongyoucanfeelthetrueloveb

etweenayoungmanandawoman.ThissongisagoodsymbolofChineseculture.Iwillpostyouthevideoofthesong.Ifyoulikeit,Iwillhelpyoutoprono

uncetheChinesewords.Anyway,Iwouldliketoofferyouanyhelp.Best__wishes!Yours__sincerely，Li__HuaPassage3(2017·山东淄博一模)假定你是李华，你的语文老师Mr.L

i受邀于三月初去英国一所学校进行交流。他将做关于中国传统文化的报告，并与英国学生互动(interact)。他请你用英语给对方负责人Ms.Jenkins写一封邮件，希望提前安排好。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3

．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMs.Jenkins,_________________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Ms.__Jenkins,__Onbe

halfofmyChineseteacherMr.Li,I’mwritingtoinformyouthathewillbeinvitedtovisityourschoolinearlyMarch.I’mmorethandelig

htedtotellyouwhathehasarranged.Asalearnedscholar,Mr.LiwilldeliveraspeechabouttraditionalChineseculture,talkingabouttheh

istoryofChinesecharacters,paintingsandTangpoetry.Afterthat,hewillinteractwithsomestudentsfromEnglandinyourschoolhall,whichwillsurelypromotethecul

turecommunicationbetweentwoschools.Howdoyouliketheplan?Isincerelyhopethatyoucouldmakearrangementsinadvance.Yours__faithfully，

Li__HuaPassage4(2017·临沂一模)假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael正在一家孔子学院学习汉语和中国文化，知道中国人很重视家风传承。他在给你的电子邮件中想了解你家的家风以及家风对你的影响。请你给他回复一封电子邮件

。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：家风familyspiritsDearMichael,I’mgladtoknowthatyouarelearningChineselanguageandculture

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____________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear__Michael,__I’m__glad__to__know__that__you__are__learning__Chin

ese__language__and__culture.Inyouremailyousaidthatyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutmyfamilyspirits.Well,therearemanygoodqualitiesthathave

beenpassedfromgenerationtogenerationinmyfamily.Myparentsalwayslayemphasisontheimportanceofhonesty,bravery,persev

eranceanddiligenceandtheyhavesetgoodexamplesformeandmybrother.Myfamilyspiritshaveaprofoundinfluenceonme.I’malways

friendlytoothersandamalwaysreadytohelpothers.IalwayscheerupandneverstopchasingmygoaleventhoughImeetwithdifficulties.Owinggreatthanksto

thosegoodqualities,Ihavemadegreatachievementsinmystudyandlife.Yours，Li__HuaPassage5(2017·东北三省四市模拟)假如你是李华，得知某英文报社要评选“TheMostQualifiedStudent”，请你用英语给

编辑写一封推荐信。要点如下：1．介绍被推荐人(林扬)的基本信息；2．说明推荐理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearEditor,________

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rsion：Dear__Editor，I’maseniorhighschoolstudentandIhappenedtohearthatyouarehostinganactivitytoselectTheMostQualifiedStudent.①It

isagreathonourformetointroducetoyouoneofmybestfriends,LinYang.Firstofall,he,whoisamongthemostdiligentstuden

tsinourschool,notonlystudieshard,butalsobehaveswell.Secondly,hestandsoutforhisdiversehobbies,includingpaintingandplayingtheviolin.②Lastbutn

otleast,heiswarm­heartedandwillingtohelpothersinneed.Therefore,IhererecommendhimtoyouwithallmyheartandIlookforwardtohea

ringfromyouattheearliestpossiblemoment.Yours__sincerely，Li__Hua【一句多译】①Iwouldbegratefulifyouconsidermyrecommendationofmybe

stfriend,LinYang./Inmyopinion,mybestfriend,LinYang,shouldbechosentobeTheMostQualifiedStudent.②Mostimp

ortantly,heisalwaysreadytohelpothers./Themostqualifiedpointsofhimarewarm­heartednessandthereadinesstomeetothers’need.