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第二讲短文改错[全国卷3年考情分析][命题者说]短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。短文词数通常与书面

表达一样，也是100词左右。Ⅰ短文改错命题原则表——高考就考这些点着眼点具体思考点词法动词时态、语态、非谓语动词、情态动词与虚拟语气名词可数不可数、单数还是复数、是否需用所有格代词主格与宾格、人称与物主、人称与反身、各种不定代词形容词、副词原级、比较级、最高级冠词不定冠词、定冠词还

是零冠词介词基本用法、固定搭配词性误用形容词与副词、形容词与名词、名词与动词句法连词(并列连词和从句引导词)、主谓一致、therebe句型与特殊句式行文逻辑时态一致、指代一致、逻辑一致Ⅱ短文改错意识原

则表——答题就按此法办短文改错10处错误中，设错方式是有规律的，一般情况下，多、缺词2～3个，错词7～8个，做完题后，可按此规律进行查验。见下表：[来源:Zxxk.Com]类型总数(10)具体思考点多、缺词2～3be的各种形式、介词、冠词、不定式符号、三

大从句引导词、代词、副词、固定搭配中的虚词错词7～8连词、三大从句引导词、动词、名词、代词、形容词、副词等A(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdri

vinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,soonceIstartedt

hecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup！

”“Slowdown！”“Turningleft！”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostop

thecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.答案：Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteene

ighteenthbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhard∧the/myfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,Ithoug

htIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,sobut/yetonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoeswentblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthew

ordwords，“Speedup！”“Slowdown！”“TurningTurnleft！”Iwassomuch＼nervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslatelater，

theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlysuddenstopjustinthemiddleonoftheroad.B(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr.andMrs.Zha

ngallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Int

heirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwatert

hevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummerca

me,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!答案：Mr.andMrs.Zhang/allbothall＼workinourschool.Th

eylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutaan/onehourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginterestedinp

lantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatwhichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierearlyandwaterthevegetablestogether.

Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.BesideBesides，theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsinformationfromtheInternet

.Whensummercamecomes，theywillinvitetheirstudents∧topickthefreshvegetables!C(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies

.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredm

ysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimp

ortantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes，playingpopmusic，andcollectingthela

temusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.答案：WhenIlookatthispictureofmy

self,Irealizeof＼howfasttimeflies.Ihadhavegrownnotonlyphysically,andbutalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowasto

oktaken，Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomebecameanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmein∧this/thepicturearethethingsth

eythat/whichwereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime：carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencedifferentkin

dsofcarsandplanes，playingpopmusic，andcollectingthelatelatestmusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourmyhighs

chooldays.名词单复数的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)可数名词单复数的错用：一般考查错把复数用作单数，有时也考查错把单数用作复数。(2)不可数名词单复数的错用：不可数名词没有复数形式。(3)可数名词与不可数名词混淆：有些词既可用作可数名词也可用作不可数

名词，应注意具体语境。[来源:学_科_网Z_X_X_K]2．应考策略(1)理清可数与不可数名词之间的区别与联系。(2)记清一些用于固定词组中名词的特殊用法。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthew

ord,“Speedup！”“Slowdown！”“Turnleft！”[解析]word→words考查名词的数。根据下文提示，教练发出了“Speedup！”，“Slowdown！”，“Turnleft！”多个指令，故用word的复数形式words。[示例2](2017·

全国卷Ⅱ)Besides,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.[解析]informations→information考查名词。informati

on为不可数名词，无复数形式，故将informations改为information。[示例3](2016·浙江卷)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslater.[解析]child

ren→child考查名词单复数。由when引导的时间状语从句中主语是I，为单数，且有冠词a，故应用child。[示例4](2016·四川卷)Momhasafull-timejob，butshehastodomostofthehouseworks.[解析]housework

s→housework考查可数名词与不可数名词的混用。housework“家务”，为不可数名词，没有复数。冠词的多用、漏用和误用[来源:Z.xx.k.Com]1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下五个方面：(1)a和an的错用：元音音素前用an，辅音音素前用

a。(2)不定冠词和定冠词的错用：表示特指时用定冠词the；表示泛指时用不定冠词a(n)。注意固定搭配中冠词的使用情况。(3)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失：一般来说，单数可数名词前应有适当的冠词，表示泛指用a(n)，表示特指用the。(4)冠词的多余：可数名词复数或不可数名词表示泛指时不用冠词

。(5)常用固定搭配中冠词的缺失与多余。2．应考策略(1)牢固掌握定冠词、不定冠词和零冠词的使用规律。(2)平时注意冠词的使用，努力培养语感。(3)固定搭配中的冠词是固定的，只有记住才是硬道理。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Inthe

summerholidayfollowingmyeighteenthbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.[解析]first前加the

或my由于序数词first前应该用定冠词the或者用限定词进行修饰，故first前加the或my。[示例2](2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkevery

day.[解析]hour前a→an/onehour是以元音音素开头的单词，前面要用不定冠词an。表示“一个小时”可以用anhour也可以用onehour。所以hour前a改为an/one。[示例3](2016·全国卷Ⅱ)Ifwestayathome,itiscomf

ortableandthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.[解析]world前加the冠词漏用。world是独一无二的事物

，前面要加定冠词the。[示例4](2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsofbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.[解析]the→a考查冠词错用。inashortperiodoftime“在短时间内”为固定搭

配，故the改为a。代词的错用、缺失与多余1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下五个方面：(1)前后代词指代不一致代词主要是用来代替其他实义词或上下文意义的，因此代词应与其指代的对象相符。否则就会出现代词指代错误。(2)代词数的错用人称代词、物主代词以及反身代词等都有单复数之分，要

根据上下文确定单复数。(3)物主代词的错用①形容词性物主代词相当于形容词，不能单独使用，常用来修饰名词；②名词性物主代词相当于名词，常单独使用，不能修饰名词。(4)不定代词或反身代词的误用。(5)代词的多余：主要是定语从句中代词的多余。在定语从句中

，若引导词在从句中作宾语，此时就不能再用it，him或them等作宾语。2．应考策略(1)顺藤摸瓜，理清短文中代词的指代关系，注意联系上下文。(2)系统掌握it的各种用法。(3)准确把握不定代词在文中的正确使用。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinou

rschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutanhourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.[解析]all→both或去掉all词法错误。Mr.andMrs.Zhang是两个人，故

用both。因both在此作同位语，也可以去掉。all指的是三者或三者以上。故将all改为both或去掉all。[示例2](2017·全国卷Ⅲ)Aroundmeinthepicturearethethi

ngstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.[解析]they→that/which句法错误。things是先行词

，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。故将they改为that/which。[示例3](2016·全国卷Ⅲ)Atfirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedec

isionsbyyourself.[解析]yourself→myself句意：起初，我认为我什么都知道，可以自己拿主意。根据主语I可知，应用myself。故将yourself改为myself。[来源:Zxxk.Com][示例4](2015·浙江卷)Clos

etotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.[解析]them→it此处代词them指代前面的park，应是单数，所以用it。故them改为i

t。[示例5](2017·福建普通高中毕业班质检)I’mgoingtoaconferenceinyoutowninMay,from16thto20th.[解析]you→your此处指我要去你/你们的城市去开会，应

把you改为your。[示例6](2017·太原五中模拟)Ineedtotakesomeexerciseeverydayandfindwaystorelaxme.[解析]me→myself句意：我需要每天锻炼，并想法放松自己。与主语I相对应的反身代词是myself。故将me改为myself。非

谓语动词的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下五个方面：(1)不定式符号to的多余：在感官动词和使役动词(get除外)后面跟不带to的不定式作宾补。(2)不定式符号to的缺失：有些动词，如want，decide，plan等后应接带to的不定式作宾语。(3)误把非谓语

动词用作谓语动词：句中已有谓语动词，且另一动词不作并列谓语，则只能用非谓语动词。(4)现在分词与过去分词的错用：现在分词表主动、进行；过去分词表被动、完成；现在分词转化的形容词表示“令人„„的”，常修饰物；而过去分词转化的形容词表示“感到„

„的”，常修饰人。(5)介词to与不定式符号to的用法区别：不定式符号to后接动词原形，而介词to后需跟动词的－ing形式。2．应考策略(1)纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词所作的句子成分。(2)系统掌握非谓语动词的句法功能

。(3)前后联系，整体把握。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Whensummercomes,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables![解析]pick前加to考查非谓语动词。invitesb.todosth.“邀请某人做某事”，故应在p

ick前加to。[示例2](2016·全国卷Ⅱ)Wecanchoosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.[解析]take→takingbetween...and...“在„„和„„之间”，是固定结构。and前后连接的是并列成分。and前用了动名词s

taying，and后也应用动名词，故把take改为taking。[示例3](2016·四川卷)Momwasgratefulandmoving.[解析]moving→movedmoving表示“令人感动的”，而moved表示“感动的”。故将m

oving改为moved。[示例4](2015·浙江卷)Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.[解析]sit→sittingenjoy后跟动名词作宾语。故sit改为sitting。[示例5](2014·辽宁卷)Itisdifficu

lttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside.[解析]understanding→understandIt’sdifficulttodosth.“做某事有困难”。it为形式主语，不定式为真正的主语。故将understanding

改为understand。动词的时态和语态的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)上下文时态不一致：当上下文叙述的是同一件事情时，时态应保持一致。(2)并列句中的谓语动词时态不一致：并列连词所连接的动词时态

应保持一致；并列句中的谓语动词时态也应保持一致。(3)主动语态和被动语态的混用。2．应考策略(1)通读全文，搞清文中动词的主体时态。(2)结合语境，灵活掌握各种时态的用法。(3)认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅲ)

Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.[解析]took→taken；bec

ome→became考查时态和语态。photo与take为被动关系，故应用被动语态，所以应把took改为taken;主句时态为一般过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became，所以应把become改为became。[

示例2](2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.[解析]using→used考查动词的被动语态。主语freshvegetablesandhighquali

tyoil和use之间为被动关系，故需用被动语态。[示例3](2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.[

解析]had→have由前面的句子可知，这里吃饭时总是涌满了顾客，用的是一般现在时，根据时态的一致性，后面的句子也应用一般现在时。故将had改为have。[示例4](2016·全国卷Ⅲ)However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinkso.They

alwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.[解析]tell→told由前句的didn’t可判断用一般过去时。故将tell改为told。[示例5](2015·全国卷Ⅱ)Awomansawhimc

ryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsidetheshop.[解析]telling→told此处and后的动词应与其前的saw并列，故将telling改为told。主谓不一致的错误1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下四个方面：(1)主谓在人称或单复数上不一致。(2)在含有定

语从句或强调结构中的主谓不一致方面的错误。(3)非谓语动词短语作主语或主语从句作主语时主谓不一致方面的错误。(4)“就近”与“就远”原则的错用：就近原则常见的有：either...or...，neither...nor...,notonly...butalso...等；就远原

则常见的有：togetherwith,aswellas,but,except等。2．应考策略(1)做题时要有全局观念，前后联系。(2)搞清句子结构，分析句子成分。(3)全面掌握有关主谓一致方面的规则。[示例1](2016·浙江卷)Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendn

ottoknowus.[解析]was→werewhowewas是作ask的宾语且宾语从句中的主语是we，故应把谓语was改为were。[示例2](2014·全国卷Ⅱ)Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.[解析]look→looks主语Mydreamscho

ol是单数，谓语应用第三人称单数。故将look改为looks。[示例3](2014·辽宁卷)Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenup

allnightwiththebaby.[解析]have→has主语Theearlymorningbarking为单数，故把have改为has。[示例4](2017·银川一中二模)Whatyouhave

gainedaretheresultofyourhardwork.[解析]are→is主语从句为单数，故are改为is。[示例5](2017·沈阳二中模拟)Lastmonth,I,togetherwithmyparents,wereinvitedtomyuncle’sinthe

U．S.A.[解析]were→was本句的主语是I而不是myparents，故将were改为was。形容词和副词的混用及其比较等级的误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下五个方面：(1)意近引起的错用：例如many和much都表示“很多”，但many修饰可数名词，much修饰不可数名词。

(2)意思重复：例如so和very表达同一含义，故不能同时使用。(3)形容词与副词的错用：一般来说，作定语和表语时用形容词；作状语修饰动词、形容词、副词或修饰整个句子时用副词。(4)比较级和最高级的混用或误用

。(5)比较级和最高级修饰语的误用。2．应考策略(1)熟知形容词和副词的句法功能。[来源:学科网](2)理清短文中形容词和副词比较等级的关系。(3)结合短文内容，准确使用形容词和副词。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅰ)IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldha

rdlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.[解析]去掉much句法错误，意义重复。这句话中含有so...that...(如此„„以至于„„)结构，so和much表达的意思重复。故much在此处是多余

的，去掉much。[示例2](2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,whichisontherooftopoftheirhouse.[解析]interesting→inter

ested词法错误。interesting意为“有趣的”，多指事物；interested意为“感兴趣的”，多指人。因为是描述主语they的心理状态，所以应把interesting改为interested。beinterest

edin...意为“对„„感兴趣”。[示例3](2015·全国卷Ⅰ)Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.[解析]Much→Manymuch修饰不可数名词，rareanimals为复数形式，故把Much改为Many。[示例4](2015·全国卷Ⅱ)Helikeditsov

erymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.[解析]去掉very此处为so...that...句式，so和very表达的意思重复，故应去掉very。[示例5](2016

·全国卷Ⅲ)Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.[解析]worse→worstand之前用了best，与之并列也应用最高级，故将worse改为worst表示“最糟的”。[示例6](2016·四川卷)ThedishesthatIcookedwer

eMom’sfavoritest.[解析]favoritest→favoritefavorite本身含有最高级意义，故不再有最高级形式。故将favoritest改为favorite。介词的多余与误用1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下三个方面：(1)在一些固定短语中介词的误用。(2)介词与连词

或副词的混用。(3)及物动词之后介词的多余或不及物动词之后介词的漏用。2．应考策略(1)在平时的学习中注意积累语言知识，特别是一些固定搭配的记忆。(2)强化语法训练，分清连词、副词和介词之间的区别和句法功能。(3)把语法知识的记忆和语感的培养结合起来。[示例1](2017·全国卷Ⅰ)

ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenstopjustinthemiddleontheroad.[解析]on→of词法错误。inthemiddleof...“在„„的中间”，是固定搭配，故把on改为of。

[示例2](2017·全国卷Ⅱ)Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.[解析]去掉for词法错误，介词的误用。表示“买某物”直接用buysth.。buy还可用于buysb.sth.或buysth.forsb.，表示“为某人买某物”。

故应去掉for。[示例3](2016·全国卷Ⅲ)NowIamleavinghometocollege.[解析]to→forleave...for“离开„„去„„”为固定结构。[示例4](2016·四川卷)Dadcleanedthehouse，andthen

wentonshopping.[解析]去掉ongoshopping为固定短语，意为“去购物”，goonshopping意为“继续购物”。故去掉on。[示例5](2014·全国卷Ⅱ)Wecanlieonthegrassfor

arest，orsitbythelakelisteningmusic.[解析]listening后加tolisten是不及物动词，后接宾语时要跟介词to，故listening后加to。连词1．此类题的错误设置一般包括以下两个方面：(1)并列连词错用：常见的并列连词有：and

表示顺承，but表示转折，or表示选择，so表示因果。应根据逻辑关系选择适当的连词。(2)并列连词多余：although/though和but，because和so不能连用，一般去掉but或so；另外，一个从句只能有一个引导

词。2．应考策略(1)依据短文中的逻辑关系，准确把握词与词，句与句或段与段之间的关系。(2)分析句子结构，确定句子的类型(简单句、并列句、复合句)。(3)排除汉语影响，识别although...but或because...so等错误。[示例1](2

017·全国卷Ⅰ)Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindwentblank.[解析]so→but/yet行文逻辑

错误。根据前后句意思可知这里表示转折概念，并非因果，所以把so改为but或yet。[示例2](2017·全国卷Ⅲ)Ihavegrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.[解析]and→but行文逻辑错误。notonly...but

also...不仅„„而且„„，连接并列成分，故把and改为but。[示例3](2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Thoughnotverybig，buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.[解析]去掉butthough和but不

能放在同一个句子里。故去掉but。[示例4](2015·全国卷Ⅰ)Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.[解析]or→and前后句为并列关系而非选择关系，故把or改为and。[示例5](2015·四川卷)Infact，Idon’tlike

togoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.[解析]so→but前后句为转折关系而非因果关系，应用but连接。故将so改为but。,[学生用书P11])A(2017·南昌十校二模)Itisclearshownthatmanymiddlescho

olstudentshavephysicalandmentalproblems.68%ofthestudentssurveyinghavestudyinganxietyaswellaspooreyesighttoo.Andalargerpercen

tagelackssleep.52%areshortofphysicalexercise.42%ofthestudentswon’tobeyourparentsorteachers.Personally，Ithinkwestu

dentshouldbalanceourphysicalexerciseandstudies.Withoutsoundbody，onecan’tachieveanything.However，toomuchattentionhasbee

npaidonlyonstudies.Asaresult,Isuggestwearegivenlesshomeworkormoretimeforout－of－classroomactivities.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveahappyandhealthylif

e.答案：Itisclearclearlyshownthatmanymiddleschoolstudentshavephysicalandmentalproblems.68%ofthestudentssurveyings

urveyedhavestudyinganxietyaswellaspooreyesighttoo＼.Andalargerpercentagelackslacksleep.52%areshortofphysicalexercise.42%

ofthestudentswon’tobeyourtheirparentsorteachers.Personally,Ithinkwestudentstudentsshouldbalanceourphysicalexerciseandstud

ies.Without∧asoundbody，onecan’tachieveanything.However，toomuchattentionhasbeenpaidonlyontostudies.Asaresult,Isuggestwearebegivenlesshomeworkorandmore

timeforout－of－classroomactivities.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveahappyandhealthylife.B(2017·济南模拟)StudyingintheUKhavebeena

goodexperienceforme.WhenIfirstarrived,IfindlifeveryhardasIdidn’tknowanybodyhere，butIsoongottoknowotherChinesestuden

tattheuniversity.LaterIbecameinterestingincommunicatingwithpeoplefromvariouscultures，andImadefewerfriends.Duringmyst

udy，Ichosetoliveinwithmyclassmatesinthedormitory.Ithinkit’sbetterthanlivinginBritishfamilybecauseIcanmeetpeoplefromdifferentcountrieseas

y.Thecourseshereareexcellent.Ienjoythewaytheteachersgivelessons.Weareencouragedtothinkforyourselves，whichisquitedifferentfromthatIhaveexperienced

before.答案：StudyingintheUKhavehasbeenagoodexperienceforme.WhenIfirstarrived，IfindfoundlifeveryhardasIdidn’tknowany

bodyhere，butIsoongottoknowotherChinesestudentstudentsattheuniversity.LaterIbecameinterestinginterestedincommunicatingwithp

eoplefromvariouscultures，andImadefewermorefriends.Duringmystudy，Ichosetolivein＼withmyclassmatesinthedormitory.Ithink

it’sbetterthanlivingin∧aBritishfamilybecauseIcanmeetpeoplefromdifferentcountrieseasyeasily.Thecourseshereareexcellent.Ienjoythewaytheteachersgiveless

ons.Weareencouragedtothinkforyourselvesourselves，whichisquitedifferentfromthatwhatIhaveexperiencedbefore.C(20

17·山东六校联考)ThedaybeforeMother’sDay,everybodyaroundmewastalkingaboutwhatwasmostsuitablegifttheywouldbuyfortheirmothers.Buyingflowerswer

ewhatmoststudentswoulddo.However，Iwantedtodosomethingdifferently.AsthenIlivedinschoolandcouldn’tgobackhomeonMother’sDay,soIdecidedtocallherandsenther

mybestwishes.IsearchedtheInternetforsuggestions,whatwereveryuseful，andIreaditcarefully.WhenIcalledmymother，however，Ihadthefeelthatsomeoneelse’sword

swouldhavenomeaningtoher.SoIgaveinandjusttoldmymotherIlovedherandthankedhertoallshehaddoneforme.答案：Thedaybefo

reMother’sDay,everybodyaroundmewastalkingaboutwhatwas∧themostsuitablegifttheywouldbuyfortheirmothers.Buyingflowerswerewaswhatmoststudentswoulddo

.However，Iwantedtodosomethingdifferentlydifferent.AsthenIlivedinschoolandcouldn’tgobackhomeonMother’sDay，so＼Idecide

dtocallherandsentsendhermybestwishes.IsearchedtheInternetforsuggestions,whatwhichwereveryuseful，andIreaditthemcarefully.WhenIcalledmymother，h

owever，Ihadthefeelfeelingthatsomeoneelse’swordswouldhavenomeaningtoher.SoIgaveinupandjusttoldmymotherI

lovedherandthankedhertoforallshehaddoneforme.D(2017·太原二模)Hereisafunnystory.Onedaythreemousessaidproudlytoeachotherthatthey

eachcoulddrinkmorewine，sotheydecidedtohaveadrinkingcontest.Atlasttheybothfeltdizzy.Onesuggested，“Willanybodygotothewinecellartof

etchanotherbottleofwine？”Thefirststoodupanddownthenfelltotheground.Theothertwolaughedandsaid，“Hewasdrinkingandcouldn’twalk.”Th

esecondstoodup.Hejustmadeseveralstepsandcouldn’thelpthrownup.Thethirdlaughedhardlyandthenitwastheirturn.Hestoodupandmadeonestep,

twosteps...Nothingiswrong.Hewentstraighttothewinecellarbuttookabottleofwine.Hestoodthereforwhile,turnedbacka

ndsaidexcitedly，“Haha,whereisthecatnow？”答案：Hereisafunnystory.Onedaythreemousesmicesaidproudlytoeachotherthattheyeachcoulddrinkmorewine，

sotheydecidedtohaveadrinkingcontest.Atlasttheybothallfeltdizzy.Onesuggested，“Willanybodygotothewinecellartofetchanotherb

ottleofwine？”Thefirststoodupanddown＼thenfelltotheground.Theothertwolaughedandsaid，“Hewasdrinkingdrunkandcouldn’twalk.”Thesecondstoodup.Hejustmadesev

eralstepsandcouldn’thelpthrownthrowingup.Thethirdlaughedhardlyhardandthenitwastheirhisturn.Hestoodupandmadeonestep,twostep

s...Nothingiswaswrong.Hewentstraighttothewinecellarbutandtookabottleofwine.Hestoodtherefor∧awhile,turnedbackandsaidexcitedly，“Haha，whereisthec

atnow？”专题强化训练5短文改错(一)[学生用书P89(单独成册)]A(2017·河南河北七所名校联考)Smartphoneshadbecomepartofourdailylife.Nomatterwhoweare，wecanseepeoplebusyplaywith

theirsmartphones.Smartphonesbenefitthem.Theyhelpusescapethepressuresoflifeandgetinformations.However，i

fwespendtoomuchtimeonthem,wewon’thavetimetocontactfacetofaceourfriendsandfamily.Andourlife,studyandworkwillhur

t.Inmyview,weshouldlimittoourusingsmartphonesexceptforapurposeoflearning.Meanwhileit’sabsolutenecessaryforustotakepar

tinmoreoutdoorsactivities.答案：Smartphoneshadhavebecomepartofourdailylife.Nomatterwhowhereweare，wecanseepeoplebusy

playplayingwiththeirsmartphones.Smartphonesbenefitthemus.Theyhelpusescapethepressuresoflifeandgetinformationsinfo

rmation.However，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonthem,wewon’thavetimetocontactfacetofaceourfriendsandfamily.Andourlife,st

udyandworkwill∧behurt.Inmyview,weshouldlimitto＼ourusingsmartphonesexceptforathepurposeoflearning.Meanwhileit’sabsol

uteabsolutelynecessaryforustotakepartinmoreoutdoorsoutdooractivities.B(2017·大连双基测试)WithTeachers’Daydrawnear,

IwouldliketoexpressmythankstoMs.Li，whotaughtmeEnglishlastyear.Atthattime,IwashavingatroublestudyingEngli

shandmyscoresfell.Ms.Liencouragedmeandtellmeherstorythatshenevergaveupbeforeherstudiesdidn’tgowell.Shealsosaidtha

titwasnecessarytomakeeffortssothatIwouldnotregretwastetime.Herwordswerethebestmedicinebecauseshestood

inhershoestodealwithproblemsandgavemesincereadvices.Shedidn’tsimplecomfortme.Herteachingmethodsalsocount

ed.IthadneveroccurredmethatstudyingcouldbesointeresteduntilImetMs.Li.答案：WithTeachers’Daydrawdrawingnear,Iwouldliketoexpressmythank

stoMs.Li，whotaughtmeEnglishlastyear.Atthattime,Iwashavinga＼troublestudyingEnglishandmyscoresfell.Ms.L

iencouragedmeandtelltoldmeherstorythatshenevergaveupbeforewhenherstudiesdidn’tgowell.Shealsosaidthati

twasnecessarytomakeeffortssothatIwouldnotregretwastewastingtime.Herwordswerethebestmedicinebecauseshestoodinhermyshoestodealwithproblemsan

dgavemesincereadvicesadvice.Shedidn’tsimplesimplycomfortme.Herteachingmethodsalsocounted.Ithadneveroccurred∧tom

ethatstudyingcouldbesointerestedinterestinguntilImetMs.Li.C(2017·长春七市第一次联考)Boysandgirls，MayIhaveyourfullyattention，please

?Ihaveannouncementtomake.TowelcomeourfriendsintheUnitedStates，theStudentUnionwasgoingtoholdapartyonSaturdayevening,February20.Asneve

r，thepartywillbeheldinthelecturehalloftheMainBuilding.Theywillbeginat7p．m.Therewillbemusic，dancing，singingorexchangeofgifts.Willever

yonepleasetobringalongasmallgiftforthispurpose？Remembertopackitup,signyournameandwritingafewwordsofgoodwishes.Do

n’tmisstheparty,whereIbelievewewillhavealotoffuns.Everyoneiswelcome.That’sall.Thankyou.答案：Boysandgirls，MayIhaveyourfullyfullattention，plea

se?Ihave∧anannouncementtomake.TowelcomeourfriendsinfromtheUnitedStates，theStudentUnionwasisgoingtoholdapartyonSatu

rdayevening,February20.Asneverever，thepartywillbeheldinthelecturehalloftheMainBuilding.TheyItwillbeginat7p．m.Ther

ewillbemusic，dancing，singingorandexchangeofgifts.Willeveryonepleaseto＼bringalongasmallgiftforthispurpose？Remembertopackitup,signyour

nameandwritingwriteafewwordsofgoodwishes.Don’tmisstheparty,whereIbelievewewillhavealotoffunsfun.Everyoneiswelcome.That’sall.Thankyo

u.D(2017·西宁检测一)Myfavoritesportisplayingbasketball.Inthemiddleschool,Ijoinedinthebasketballteam.Alltheteammatepractisedhardafterschool.Onceourte

amhadmatchagainstanotherschool’s.Attheverybeginning，weweresonervouswhichwecouldn’tcooperateverygood.Becausethiswas

thefirsttimeforustocompetewiththeschoolhonor.Inthehalfmatchtheyfellbehind.Ourteamleadercallsustogetherandsaidthatwemustgetunitinginorde

rtobeatthem.Thenwetriedourbestandwonthegameatlast.Playbasketballmakesmerealizetheimportanceofunionandte

amwork.答案：Myfavoritesportisplayingbasketball.Inthemiddleschool,Ijoinedin＼thebasketballteam.Alltheteammateteammatespractisedhardafter

school.Onceourteamhad∧amatchagainstanotherschool’s.Attheverybeginning，weweresonervouswhichthatwecouldn’tcooperateverygoodwell.Becaus

ethiswasthefirsttimeforustocompetewithfortheschoolhonor.Inthehalfmatchtheywefellbehind.Ourteamleadercallscalledustogetherands

aidthatwemustgetunitingunitedinordertobeatthem.Thenwetriedourbestandwonthegameatlast.PlayPlayingbasketballmakesmereal

izetheimportanceofunionandteamwork.专题强化训练6短文改错(二)[学生用书P90(单独成册)]A(2017·呼和浩特第一次调研)Dearmanager，Iamwritingtoexpressmyin

terestinyourrecentlyadvertisedpositionsasasecretaryofEnglish.HereIwouldliketointroducemebriefly.Iama25－year－oldyoungmangraduatedfromtheForeignLangu

agesDepartmentofJilinUniversity.IhavebeenaEnglishguidefortwoyearsaftergraduation.Asaresult,myoralEnglishisprettywell.

Ihavegreatinterestthejob.Ihadmuchconfidenceinmyself.IfIamgiventothejob，IcanassureyouIwilldomybesttodoitwell.I’dliketomeetyouatyo

urconvenienttodiscussthepossibilityofworkinginyourcompany.Anearlyreplytomyapplicationwillbehighappreciated.Yoursrespectfully，WangYong答案：

Dearmanager，IamwritingtoexpressmyinterestinyourrecentlyadvertisedpositionspositionasasecretaryofEnglish.HereIwouldliketointrod

ucememyselfbriefly.Iama25－year－oldyoungman∧who/that或graduatedgraduatingfromtheForeignLanguagesDepartmentofJilinUniversity.

IhavebeenaanEnglishguidefortwoyearsaftergraduation.Asaresult,myoralEnglishisprettywellgood.Ihavegreatinterest∧,in)thejob.Ihadhavemuchco

nfidenceinmyself.IfIamgivento＼thejob，IcanassureyouIwilldomybesttodoitwell.I’dliketomeetyouatyourconvenientconveniencetodi

scussthepossibilityofworkinginyourcompany.Anearlyreplytomyapplicationwillbehighhighlyappreciated.Your

srespectfully，WangYongB(2017·东北三校二模)IwillneverforgetamilitarytraininginCaliforniaSummerCampthatAugust.Thebigsunwasoverhead,burnedhot.Thedrillmaster

wasverystrictandwewereallafraidofhim.Ifoneofusmadeamistake,allofuswillgetsuchpunishmentdelayingameal,standingfor10minutesor

whatever.Therefore,aftertraining,itwasnodoubtthatourdrillmasterwasenergeticandagreeable.Hisstronglocalaccentkeptuslaughmadly.Moreinteresting,

hesangoutoftune,frombeginningtoend.Everytimewhenhesang,wecouldhelplaughingtotears.答案：Iwillneverforgetathemilitarytrai

ninginCaliforniaSummerCampthatAugust.Thebigsunwasoverhead,burnedburninghot.Thedrillmasterwasverystrictandwewereallafraidofhim.Ifoneofusmadeami

stake,allofuswillwouldgetsuchpunishment∧asdelayingameal,standingfor10minutesorwhatever.ThereforeHowever，aftertraining,ittherewasnodoubtthatour

drillmasterwasenergeticandagreeable.Hisstronglocalaccentkeptuslaughlaughingmadly.Moreinterestinginterestingly，hesangoutoftune,frombeginningtoend.E

verytimewhenhesang,wecouldcouldn’t或∧nothelplaughingtotears.C(2017·广州检测二)DearChris,Areyouinterestedincomingwithmetoseeafamousopera？Itwillperf

ormedattheGuangzhouOperaHouseat2p．m.inMayDay.IknowyoutookgreatinterestinChineseculture,especiallylocalo

pera.Ithinktheperformwillnotonlyleaveyouwithanunforgettablyimpression,butsatisfyyourinterestinChineseOperaaswell.Ifyoucancome,

IsuggestusshouldvisittheGuangdongMuseumneartheOperaHousebeforeandaftertheopera.Youdecide.Themuseumishos

tingaexhibitiononCantoneseopera.Ifwego,IbelieveyoucanlearnmanyaboutChineseoperainthere.Yours，LiHua答案：DearChris,Areyouinterestedincomingwithmetose

eafamousopera？Itwill∧beperformedattheGuangzhouOperaHouseat2p．m.inonMayDay.IknowyoutooktakegreatinterestinChineseculture,espe

ciallylocalopera.Ithinktheperformperformancewillnotonlyleaveyouwithanunforgettablyunforgettableimpression,butsatisfyyourinterestinChines

eOperaaswell.Ifyoucancome,IsuggestusweshouldvisittheGuangdongMuseumneartheOperaHousebeforeandoraftertheoper

a.Youdecide.ThemuseumishostingaanexhibitiononCantoneseopera.Ifwego,IbelieveyoucanlearnmanymuchaboutChineseoperain＼there.You

rs，LiHuaD(2017·重庆调研抽测二)ThanksforyourconcerninyourletteraboutthesmogwhichfrequentstrikessomeareasofChin

a.I’malsoveryworryingaboutsuchaterribleweather.Ithasbroughtmuchinconvenienceorratherharmtopeople’shealthsuchasroadacci

dent,badcoughsandevenlungcancersandsoon.Itisknowntoall,goodenvironmentcomesfromcarefulprotection.Butweshoulddowhat

wecanprotectit.Ibelieveasmallstepcanmakeadifferent.Trytodrivelessandchooseair－friendlyproducts.Onlywheneveryonehadtheenvi

ronmentalawarenesscanwehaveabluesky.Hopetohearfromyouandsharemygoodideas.答案：Thanksforyourconcerninyourletteraboutthe

smogwhichfrequentfrequentlystrikessomeareasofChina.I’malsoveryworryingworriedaboutsucha＼terribleweather.Ithasbroughtmuchincon

venienceorratherharmtopeople’shealthsuchasroadaccidentaccidents，badcoughsandevenlungcancersandsoon.ItAsisknowntoall,

goodenvironmentcomesfromcarefulprotection.ButSoweshoulddowhatwecan∧toprotectit.Ibelieveasmallstepcanmakeadifferentdifference.Tr

ytodrivelessandchooseair－friendlyproducts.Onlywheneveryonehadhastheenvironmentalawarenesscanwehaveabluesky.H

opetohearfromyouandsharemyyourgoodideas.专题强化训练7短文改错(三)[学生用书P91(单独成册)]A(2017·云南第二次检测)Mydadisenthusiasticrunner.Influencingbyhim，I

wasverysportybeforetheageof15.However，afterIwenttohighschool，Istoppedtakephysicalexercisebecauseofmybusyschoolwork.Onemorning，Iranfor

lessthanoneminutetocatchabus，butIamquiteoutofbreath.ThismademetorealizethatIwasoverweight.ThenImadeadecisionwhichIwou

ldtakeupasporttohelpmyselfgetinshapeagain.Afriendofmerecommendedaswimmingpoolnotfarfrommyhouse.NowIgoswimmingseveraltimeaweekandhavestartedtofe

elthebenefitsofregularlyexercise.Swimmingmakesmerelaxingandenergetic!答案：Mydadis∧anenthusiasticrunner.InfluencingInfluencedbyhim，Iwasve

rysportybeforetheageof15.However，afterIwenttohighschool，Istoppedtaketakingphysicalexercisebecauseofmybusyschoolwo

rk.Onemorning，Iranforlessthanoneminutetocatchabus，butIamwasquiteoutofbreath.Thismademeto＼realizethatIwasoverweight.ThenImadeadecisionwhichthatIw

ouldtakeupasporttohelpmyselfgetinshapeagain.Afriendofmeminerecommendedaswimmingpoolnotfarfrommyhouse.NowIgoswimmingseveraltimetimesaweekandhavesta

rtedtofeelthebenefitsofregularlyregularexercise.Swimmingmakesmerelaxingrelaxedandenergetic!B(2017·海口调研)

Sportisthesourceofalllife.Whentalkedaboutsport，Ialwaysfeelveryexcited，becauseIlikethemsomuch.Iloveplayingtennis，butitismyfavoritesport.Oneday

，whenIcamehomeafterschool，IturnonTVandwatchedatennismatch.Atfirst，Iwasattractedbythetwobeautifultennisplayer.Wh

enIwatchedthematchfortenminutesIfounditwaswonderful.Fromnowon,Istartedtowatchtennismatches.Ihavelearn

edtoplaytennis，andIofteninvitemyfriendsplaywithme.MylovetotennisaremorethanIcouldexpress.Iamsolucktohavesomefriendswhosha

rethesameofinterestwithme.答案：Sportisthesourceofalllife.Whentalkedtalkingaboutsport，Ialwaysfeelveryexcited，becauseIlikethemitsom

uch.Iloveplayingtennis，butanditismyfavoritesport.Oneday，whenIcamehomeafterschool，IturnturnedonTVandwatchedatennismatch.Atfirst，Iwasattra

ctedbythetwobeautifultennisplayerplayers.WhenIwatchedthematchfortenminutesIfounditwaswonderful.Fromnowtheno

n,Istartedtowatchtennismatches.Ihavelearnedtoplaytennis，andIofteninvitemyfriendsto∧playwithme.MylovetotennisareismorethanIcouldexpr

ess.Iamsoluckluckytohavesomefriendswhosharethesameof＼interestwithme.C(2017·唐山一模)Beingateacherisalwaysbelievedtobe

oneofgreatestoccupations，becauseteachersmakegreatcontributionsfortheworld.Lastweek，Igotachancetoexperienceteachingstudents.Ourschoolaskedustot

eachsomekidsliveinthecountryside.Thekidswassohappythattheygavemeawarmwelcome.IteachthemEnglishandaftercla

ss，weplayedgameshappily.Wehadalotoffunstogether.WhenIreturnedbacktoschool，Imissedthestudentssomuch.Theylikemebutsomeofthemhavekeptintouc

hwithmeeversince.Ifeltsoproudlyofbeingateacher.答案：Beingateacherisalwaysbelievedtobeoneof∧thegreatestoccupations，becauseteachersmak

egreatcontributionsfortotheworld.Lastweek，Igotachancetoexperienceteachingstudents.Ourschoolaskedusmetoteachsomekidslivelivi

nginthecountryside.Thekidswasweresohappythattheygavemeawarmwelcome.IteachtaughtthemEnglishandafterclass，weplayedgameshappily.Wehadalotoffunsfuntoget

her.WhenIreturnedback＼toschool，Imissedthestudentssomuch.Theylikemebutandsomeofthemhavekeptintouchwithmeeversince.Ifeltso

proudlyproudofbeingateacher.D(2017·安徽江南十校联考)DuringtheNationalDayholiday，Ipaidavisitmygrandmainthecountrysi

de.IthasbeenalmosttwoyearssinceIlastsawher.Inmymemory，mygrandmawasahardworkingbutstrongwomanfullofenergy.Whenevershesawme，shealw

ayshuggedmedeep.ButwhenIgaveherahugthistime，Ifoundthatshewasmuchshortandthinnerthanbefore.Herbackwasbecomebentandherhairsturnedwhite.But

luckily，shewasstillhealth.Shecouldlaughlikeachild.Tomyhappy,shecouldcooksomedeliciousfoodforme.Ilovemygrandma.Iknowhewillalwaysbethere,helpi

ngmeandlovingme.答案：DuringtheNationalDayholiday，Ipaidavisitto∧mygrandmainthecountryside.Ithashadbeenalmosttwoyears

sinceIlastsawher.Inmymemory，mygrandmawasahardworkingbutandstrongwomanfullofenergy.Whenevershesawme，shealwayshuggedmedeepdeeply.ButwhenIgaveherahu

gthistime，Ifoundthatshewasmuchshortshorterandthinnerthanbefore.Herbackwasbecome＼bentandherhairshairturnedwhite.Butluckily，shewasstillhealthhealthy.S

hecouldlaughlikeachild.Tomyhappyhappiness，shecouldcooksomedeliciousfoodforme.Ilovemygrandma.Iknowheshewillalwaysbethere,helpingmeandlovingme.专题强化训练

8短文改错(四)[学生用书P92(单独成册)]AIprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtonlyinEnglish.Asweareallknow,agoodlearningenvironmentisvitalunlesswew

anttostudyEnglishwell.ClassesteachinginEnglishprovidestudentswithgoodenvironment.However,therearealsosomeprobl

emwiththisteachingmethod.Aswehadn’tmasteredenoughEnglishwords,sometimeswemayfindthatdifficulttofollowtheteacher.Slowlearnersmayevenloseinteres

tonEnglish.Practicemakesperfect.TolearnEnglishwellrequirealotofpractice.Therefore,IlikemyEnglishclassestobetaughtcomple

teinEnglish.答案：IprefermyEnglishclassestobetaughtonlyinEnglish.Asweare＼allknow,agoodlearningenvironmentisvital

unlessifwewanttostudyEnglishwell.ClassesteachingtaughtinEnglishprovidestudentswith∧agoodenvironment.Ho

wever,therearealsosomeproblemproblemswiththisteachingmethod.Aswehadn’thaven’tmasteredenoughEnglishwords,sometimeswe

mayfindthatitdifficulttofollowtheteacher.SlowlearnersmayevenloseinterestoninEnglish.Practicemakesperfect.TolearnEnglishwellrequirerequi

resalotofpractice.Therefore,IlikemyEnglishclassestobetaughtcompletecompletelyinEnglish.B(2017·山西考前适应性测试)Thepersonwhotouchedmemostisanunknow

nlady.Istudyinacityschoolbutlivesinavillage15kilometersaway.Oneafternoon,Ireceiveacallfrommyfamilysayi

ngmymomwasseriousill.Ihurriedtothebusstation,onlyfindthelastbushadleft.Feelanxious,Idecidedtowalkhome.Onthewayacarstop

pedandthedriveraskedmethatIneededhelp.Worriedaboutbeingcheated,Isaidanything.ButshewassuchsincerethatIfinallyacceptedheroffer.When

wereachedmyvillage,itwasdark.Seeinghercaroutofthesight,Iwasintear.WheneverIthinkofher,Ialwaysfeelgrateful.答案：Thepersonwhotouche

dmemostisanunknownlady.Istudyinacityschoolbutlivesliveinavillage15kilometersaway.Oneafternoon,Ireceivereceivedacallfrommyfami

lysayingmymomwasseriousseriouslyill.Ihurriedtothebusstation,onlyto∧findthelastbushadleft.FeelFeelinganxious,I

decidedtowalkhome.Onthewayacarstoppedandthedriveraskedmethatif/whetherIneededhelp.Worriedaboutbeingcheated,Isaidanythingnothing.But

shewassuchsosincerethatIfinallyacceptedheroffer.Whenwereachedmyvillage,itwasdark.Seeinghercaroutofthe＼sight,Iwasinteartears.WheneverIthinkofher,

Ialwaysfeelgrateful.C(2017·山东省实验中学第二次诊断)Lastweekend,IhelpedmygrandparentspreparingtheirtriptoBeijing.OnSaturdaymorning,togetherwi

thmygrandparents,IsearchedfortheInternetforthetrainschedule,theweatherinBeijing,andsomehotelinformations.Intheafternoon,Igotothetrainsta

tionandmanagedtobuytwoticketsformygrandparentsalthoughtherewaslongqueue.Afterdinner,Iputintothesuitcasetheth

ingmygrandparentswouldneed,suchasclothes,glasses，anumbrella,oramap.Thenextmorning,Iwenttothestationtoseehimof

f.Wavinggoodbyewiththemontheplatform,Ifelthappilyforthemandwishedthemasafejourney.答案：Lastweekend,Ihelpedmygrandparentspreparingpreparetheirtript

oBeijing.OnSaturdaymorning,togetherwithmygrandparents,Isearchedfor＼theInternetforthetrainschedule,theweatherinBeijin

g,andsomehotelinformationsinformation.Intheafternoon,Igowenttothetrainstationandmanagedtobuytwoticketsformygrandparentsalth

oughtherewas∧alongqueue.Afterdinner,Iputintothesuitcasethethingthingsmygrandparentswouldneed,suchasclothes,glasses，

anumbrella,orandamap.Thenextmorning,Iwenttothestationtoseehimthemoff.Wavinggoodbyewithto/atthemontheplatf

orm,Ifelthappilyhappyforthemandwishedthemasafejourney.D(2017·长春监测二)BorninAmerica,ThomasEdisonwasagreatscien

tistandaninventor.Hewasoncethoughttobeaboywhomwasnotwortheducating.Infact,hewasamanfullofimaginations.IadmireEdis

onalotbecausehisgreatcontributionstotheworld.Heissaidtohavingmorethan1，000inventions.Inhislifetime,hewerealwayseagertoknowhowt

hingsworked.Hewasalsoverydiligentandworkdayandnight.Andthisexplainedwhyhehadsomuchgreatinventions.Successcannev

erbeeasyachieved.ProbablyIcan’tbeanotherEdisonhimself,butIwillworkhardtobeaworthyperson.答案：BorninAmerica,ThomasEdisonwasagr

eatscientistandan＼inventor.Hewasoncethoughttobeaboywhomwhowasnotwortheducating.Infact,hewasamanfullofimaginationsimaginati

on.IadmireEdisonalotbecause∧ofhisgreatcontributionstotheworld.Heissaidtohavinghavemorethan1，000inventions.Inhislifetime,h

ewerewasalwayseagertoknowhowthingsworked.Hewasalsoverydiligentandworkworkeddayandnight.Andthisexplainedwhyhehadsomuch

manygreatinventions.Successcanneverbeeasyeasilyachieved.ProbablyIcan’tbeanotherEdisonhimselfmyself，butIwillworkhardtobeaworthyperson.