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高中英语二轮复习短文改错（1）1、假定英语课.上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏

字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.Welco

metotheGreatWall.Measuredmorethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelongwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmor

ethan2,000years.ThatisamazingabouttheGreatWallisthatitismainmadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.Thoughitwasusedtoprotect

thecountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,assymbolofChina,theGreatWallwillbecome

oneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulthattheGreatWallattracthundredsofthousandsofforeigntouristsevery

year.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulation．Youwonthefirstprizein

theChineseChessNetworkChallenge．Asyourfriend，IjustwantyoutoknowhowgladlyIamatyoursuccess．Inlastfewyears，youhadshowngreatinterestinChinesechess．Y

oukeeponpracticingthemeveryday．NotonlyhaveyoureadmuchbooksaboutChinesechessstrategies，butalsoyouhavecompetedonallkindsofChinesechesscontests．F

inally，yousucceededinwintheonlinecompetition!IwassoveryhappythatIcouldn’tgotosleeplastnight．I’meagerto

playChinesechesswithyouatthecommunityclub，whichwe’11enjoyourselves．3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或

修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起

)不计分。DearLaura,Thanksforlettingustostayatyourseasidehouse.Now,youmighthaveheardfromyourneighborsaboutwhi

chhappenedonSaturdayevening.WhenIwasoutawalk,myyoungerson,Tom,playedfootballbeforeyourhouse.Hemadeso

manynoisethattheneighborsgotquiteangrily.Evenworse,TombrokeoneofthewindowofMr.Wilson’shouse.TomandIapologizedtoalltheneighborsfortheunhappyhappe

nings,butpromisedtohavethebrokenwindowrepairsoon.Tomsaidthatwewouldnotdosuchsillythingsanymore.Iamgladthatyourneighborshadforgivenus.Theyarereal

lynicepeople.Yours,Betty4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线

(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。WhenIwas12,ImetMary.Shec

ametoChinawithherparents,whomtaughtEnglishinanuniversity.Wesoonbecamegoodfriends.ShewasfluentlyinChinesew

hileIhaddifficultywithmyspeakingEnglish.InordertohelpmewithmyEnglish,wespokeasmuchEnglishaswecanwhenweweretogether.B

eforelong,IcouldspeakEnglishwellbutatthesametimeIalsomadegreatprogressesinmywrittenEnglish.Luckily,ayearlater,shehad

toreturnbacktohercountrywithherparents.Andwehaveoutoftouchwitheachothereversince.HowImissher!5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作

文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该

词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Lastsummer,LiHuaandhisclassmatesmadeatriptoLondon.Onhisarrivalattheairport,itwasraini

ngheavy.Sotheytookabustothehotel,wherewasnotfarfromtheairport.Thenextday,theycan’twaittoseethewonderfulplaceofinterestin

London.TheyfirstwenttotheElizabethTower,asymbolofUnitedKingdom.Theguidetoldthemthetowerhadbeenappearedinmanyfilms.Thentheyvisitth

eBritishMuseum.Totheirgreatsurprise,theyfoundmanyChineseartworksdisplayedthere.Feltveryproud,theytookalotofphotosbutthey

reallyhadgreatfun.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用

斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Thetimewehaveisusuallim

ited.However,evenanhourisofmuchvaluable.Weshouldmakefulluseofyourtimetodousefulthings.Asstudents,wemu

stn'tstudyhardsoastoserveforoursocietyandournationinthefuture.Butitispitythattherearealotofpeoplewhodidn’tknowtheimportanceoftime.Theyspendtheirv

aluabletimesmokeanddrinking.Theydon’trealizethatwastingtimeisthesameaswastingapartoftheirlife.Remember,don'tput

offwhichyoucandotodayuntiltomorrow.7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加

一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分MyvillagelieinthemountainsinsouthwestCh

ina.Althoughtheclimateandlandscapearepleased,peopleleadatoughlifethere.Atthebeginningofthe21stcentury,thegovern

mentbegantoattachgreatimportancetoitsdevelopment,undertheinfluenceofthat,people’slivingconditionbegantoimprove.Alotofroadswereb

uiltandplentyoftradecenterswerenewlyfound,whichmadethemconvenienttodevelopeconomy.What’smore,greatmanys

tudentswereadmittedintofamousuniversities.Inaword,thanktothegovernment’ssupport,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceint

hepastfewyears.Myvillagetakesupanewlooknow.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、

删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Travelling

abroad,youshouldfollowthecustomsofthecountryyouwerevisiting.Whenyouareinvited,thatisgoodmannerstorefuseoraccepttheinvitationeitherbywritingandbytele

phoning.Ifyougotoaparty,itispolitetoarriveonthetime.Itisgoodmannerstoshakehandswithourhost.Youcantakeapresentifyoulik

e,possibleabottleofwine,aboxofchocolatesoranyflowers.However,itisnotbadmannerstotakenothing.Itisnotpolitestaytoolateaftertheotherguestshavegone.Also

,ithassuggestedtowriteortelephoneadayortwolatetothankyourhost.答案以及解析1答案及解析：答案：WelcometotheGreatWall.MeasuredMeasuringmorethan6,000kilomet

ersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelonglongestwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.tha

twhatisamazingabouttheGreatWallisthatitismainmainlymadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.T

houghAsitwasusedtoprotectthecountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,asˆasymbol

ofChina,theGreatWallwillhasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulwonderthattheGreatWallattractattra

ctshundredsofthousandsofforeigntouristseveryyear.解析：1.Measured改成Measuring.考查非谓语.theGreatWall与measure之间是主谓关系,所以用现在分词在句中做状语.2.long改成

longest.考查最高级.长城是世界上最长的墙,所以用最高级.3.That改成what.考查名词性从句.本句是主语从句。从句中缺少主语,所以用what引导.4.main改为mainly.考查副词.此处用副词修饰动词made,mainly是副词"主要地".5.Though改为As.考查连

词.本句是表示原因,所以用as引导.6.去掉with.考查介词.沿着长城用介词along,所以去掉with.7.加a.考查冠词.根据句意是作为一个中国的象征,所以用不定冠词a.8.will改为has.考查时态.根据句意长城已经成为世界上最著名的

旅游景点之一,所以用现在完成时.9.wonderful改为wonder.考查名词.它是世界奇迹,所以用名词wonder"奇迹".10.attract改为attracts.考查时态.主语是长城为第三人称单数形式,所以用attracts.2答案及解析：答案

：Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationcongratulations．YouwonthefirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkChallenge．Asyourfriend，Ijustwantyoutoknowhowglad

lygladIamatyoursuccess．Inthelastfewyears，youhadhaveshowngreatinterestinChinesechess．Youkeeponpracticingthemiteveryda

y．NotonlyhaveyoureadmuchmanybooksaboutChinesechessstrategies，butalsoyouhavecompetedoninallkindsofChinesechesscontests．Finally，yous

ucceededinwinwinningtheonlinecompetition!IwassoveryhappythatIcouldn’tgotosleeplastnight．I’meagertoplayChinesechesswithyouatthecommunityclub，whichwhe

rewe’11enjoyourselves．解析：3答案及解析：答案：DearLaura,Thanksforlettingustostayatyourseasidehouse.Now,youmighthaveheardfromyourneighborsaboutwhich

whathappenedonSaturdayevening.WhenIwasoutforawalk,myyoungerson,Tom,playedfootballbeforeyourhouse.Hemadesomanymuchnoisethatthenei

ghborsgotquiteangrilyangry.Evenworse,TombrokeoneofthewindowwindowsofMr.Wilson’shouse.TomandIapologizedtoalltheneighborsfortheunhappyhappe

nings,butandpromisedtohavethebrokenwindowrepairrepairedsoon.Tomsaidthatwehewouldnotdosuchsillythingsanymore.Iamgladthatyourneighborsha

dhaveforgivenus.Theyarereallynicepeople.Yours,Betty解析：4答案及解析：答案：WhenIwas12,ImetMary.ShecametoChinawithherparents,homww

hotaughtEnglishinanauniversity.Wesoonbecamegoodfriends.ShewasfluentlyfluentinChinesewhileIhaddifficultywit

hmyspeakingspokenEnglish.InordertohelpmewithmyEnglish,wespokeasmuchEnglishaswecancouldwhenweweretogether.Beforelong,IcouldspeakEnglishwellbutand

atthesametimeIalsomadegreatprogressesprogressinmywrittenEnglish.LuckilyUnluckily,ayearlater,shehadtoreturnbacktohercountrywithherparents.Andwehaveb

eenoutoftouchwitheachothereversince.HowImissher!解析：1.此处为定语从句,先行词为parents,所以要用who引导。故把whom改为who。2.University首字

母为辅音所以应该用a,不用an。故把an改为a。3.此处表达地汉语很流利,所以用形容词fluent。故把fluently改为fluent。4.口语应该为spokenEnglish。故把speaking改为spoken。5.根据整句的时态可以知道应该用一般过去时。故把can改为could

。6.此处表达我能说英语很好了,而且我的书面语也有了极大地提高。此处是并列关系,所以用and。故把but改为and。7.Progress不可数,不能用复数。故把progresses改为progress。

8.根据语境可知一年后她要回国了,所以应该是不幸的是。故把Luckily改为Unluckily。9.Return就是回去,不能再与back连用。10.eversince通常与现在完成时连用。故在out前加been。5答案及解析：答案：Lastsummer,LiHuaandhisclassmates

madeatriptoLondon.Onhistheirarrivalattheairport,itwasrainingheavyheavily.Sotheytookabustothehotel,wherewhichwasnotfarfromthe

airport.Thenextday,they''cantcouldntwaittoseethewonderfulplaceplacesofinterestinLondon.TheyfirstwenttotheElizabethTower,asymboloftheUnit

edKingdom.Theguidetoldthemthetowerhadbeenappearedinmanyfilms.ThentheyvisitvisitedtheBritishMuseum.Totheirgreatsurprise,theyfoundmanyChineseartwor

ksdisplayedthere.FeltFeelingveryproud,theytookalotofphotosbutandtheyreallyhadgreatfun.解析：第一处：his→their【解析】根据文章开头的LiHuaandhisc

lassmates以及文章上下文的人你可知，此处代指李华和他的同学们，为复数概念。故将his改为their。第二处：heavy→heavily【解析】rainheavily为固定短语，意为“雨下得很大”，此处用副词修饰动词。故

将heavy改为heavily第三处:where→which【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处为非限制性定语从句，先行词为hotel,指物，关系词在从句中作主语，应用which引导。故将where改为which。第四处：can’t→c

ouldn’t【解析】根据开头的时间状语Lastsummer及文中的时态可知，此处应该用一般过去时。故将can’t改为couldn’t。第五处：place→places【解析】根据常识可知，伦敦有很多的名胜古迹，且下文也提到了不止一处，故应用复数表示。placeofinterest意为"

名胜古迹”，为固定搭配，此处为其复数形式。故将place改为places。第六处：在United前加the【解析】theUnitedKingdom为专有名词，意为“英国”。故在United前加the。第七处：删除been【解析】appear为不及物动词，没有被动语态。故删除been。第八处

：visit→visited【解析】根据文章开头的时间状语Lastsummer以及全文时态可知，此处应该用一般过去时。故将visit改为visited。第九处：Felt→Feeling【解析】分析句子结构可知，此处考查

非谓语动词作状语。主语they与feel之间为逻辑上的主动关系，故将Felt改为Feeling。第十处:but→and【解析】根据句意可知，此处前后句表示并列或顺承关系，而非转折关系，故将but改为and。6答案及解析

：答案：Thetimewehaveisusualusuallylimited.HoweverTherefore,evenanhourisofmuchvaluablevalue.Weshouldmakefulluseofyourourti

metodousefulthings.Asstudents,we'mustntmuststudyhardsoastoserveforoursocietyandournationinthefuture.Butitisˆapitytha

ttherearealotofpeoplewho''didntdontknowtheimportanceoftime.Theyspendtheirvaluabletimesmokesmokinganddrinking.Theydon’trea

lizethatwastingtimeisthesameaswastingapartoftheirlife.Remember,don'tputoffwhichwhatyoucandotodayuntiltomorro

w.解析：1.句意:我们拥有的时间通常是有限的。修饰形容词limited用副词,故把usual改为usually。2.上下文之间是因果关系,故把However改为Therefore。3.beofvalue

有价值,故把valuable改为value。4.与前文的We保持人称一致,故把your改为our。5.我们必须要努力学习是常识,故把mustn’t改为must。6.serve是及物动词,不需要介词,故#除for。7.Itisapitythat..."……是

很可惜的。”,pity是可数名词,故在前面加a。8.本文使用现在时态,先行词是people,故把didn’t改为don’t。9.spendtimedoingsth.花时间做某事,故把smoke改为smoking。10.

句意:记住,不要把今天能做的拖延到明天。此处表示“……的东西或事情”,而且在宾语从句中作宾语,故把which改为what。7答案及解析：答案：MyvillagelieliesinthemountainsinsouthwestChina.Althoughtheclima

teandlandscapearepleasedpleasant,peopleleadatoughlifethere.Atthebeginningofthe21stcentury,thegovernmentbegantoattachgreatimportanc

etoitsdevelopment,undertheinfluenceofthatwhich,people’slivingconditionconditionsbegantoimprove.Alotofroadswerebuiltandplentyoftrad

ecenterswerenewlyfoundfounded,whichmadethemitconvenienttodevelopeconomy.What’smore,ˆagreatmanystudentswereadmittedintofamous

universities.Inaword,thankthankstothegovernment’ssupport,greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthepastfewyears.Myvillagetakesuponanewlooknow

.解析：8答案及解析：答案：Travellingabroad,youshouldfollowthecustomsofthecountryyouwerearevisiting.Whenyouareinvited,thatitisgoodmannerstorefuseoracc

epttheinvitationeitherbywritingandorbytelephoning.Ifyougotoaparty,itispolitetoarriveonthetime.Itisgoodmannerstoshakehandswithouryourhost.Youcantakeap

resentifyoulike,possiblepossiblyabottleofwine,aboxofchocolatesoranysomeflowers.However,itisnotbadmannerstotakenothing.Itisnot

politetostaytoolateaftertheotherguestshavegone.Also,ithasissuggestedtowriteortelephoneadayortwolatelatertothankyou

rhost.解析：