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Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考写作指导课basicstructure(基本结构的安排)DearMr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.Iwanttotellyousom

eproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit

’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstud

y.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthep

assage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdi

fficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Write

tomesoon.LET’SGOFORIT!Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicrules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautifY(美：谚语/例子)健康很重要。在学习和

工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(SEARCH)travelstayathomevisit

friendsorparentswork•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句

子列出文章的要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)•Howdopeoplespend

theirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginning）•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinter

net.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。

•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,al

otofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comean

denjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheya

rrivedasearlyastheycould.我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskil

ls（“写”的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoun

gthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,bo

th…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,sin

ce,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample

,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sinceth

en,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,genera

llyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)LET’STRY•_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewentto

theconcert______.•Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,h

ewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Ac

cordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfrien

dsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(BEAUTIFY)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospen

dthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensome

peopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxe

d.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(BEAUTIFY)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayf

romthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayin

ggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(BEAUTIFY)Andtovisitfr

iendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.Proverb（谚语）/saying集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateon

ourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joiningt

heEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/say

ing)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebef

oreyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemothe

rofsuccess.Enjoysomeproverbs7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoR

ome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.覆水难收。一天一苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用谚语和例子（多用于“thebody”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）青少

年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopu

singnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswas

hingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,weshouldstartfrom

ourselves.Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Save

animals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!结尾：提出倡议或号召First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.Wethinkstudy

ingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughcon

fidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordsweha

ven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestion

saboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.LET’SGOFORIT!123465DearMary,Ih

eardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteach

ercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicema

kesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,Englishisnotdifficultto

learnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.YOURTURNTOGOFORIT!（试填一填）DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Y

ours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportan

t._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentot

heEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulfory

ou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYOURTURNTOGOFORIT!（CHECK）123Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotoft

hings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedina

corner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryha

ppyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.Themostu

nforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedto

couldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so满分作文标准：第一档：（17~20分）•完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。•句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。•

卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。•最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地

；许多动物遭到猎杀······所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.提示的内

容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(练练笔)Let’sHelpOurFriends（满分作文赏析）Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveina

ndmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimal

s’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbe

comeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseetheseg

entleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?I

knowyouransweris“No”.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don’tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!Thankyou!Go

odbye!•Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+Aniceconclusion/endHOMEWORK:书面表达（共20分）根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的

英文文段。注意：1．字数60一80。2．所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写在答题卡上）假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言

稿。name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActivitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,dr

awpicturesofplants,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketheearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemysel

ftoyou.That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce（介绍）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfiftee

nyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野营）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenj

oythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物学家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttoma

keourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.But

ofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.Imakealo

tofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabask

etballplayerinthefuture.Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/IwillbehappinessplayinggrowTheLifeasaGrade

9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’sa

lotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewho

failstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,Iwillchan

gemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybe

sttodoeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!It’syourturn!（满分作文赏析）Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1

.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshop

pingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatd

aybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithou

ghtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemist

akesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）10.Inmyfather’shel

p,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithm

ymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorr

ectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith

15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowings

entencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）U

singwrongword（选词错误）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesid

emewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorr

ectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.