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Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考写作指导课basicstructure(基本结构的安排)DearMr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.Iwan

ttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishi

ssuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfide

ncetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinth

epassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemo

stdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeuseful

advice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.LET’SGOFORIT!Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicrules(写作考试规则)sear

ch（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautifY(美：谚语/例子)健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查

结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(SEARCH)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriends

orparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplev

isitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourre

port.（thebeginning）•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisi

tfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取

总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.And

somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewho

relaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedas

earlyastheycould.我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskil

ls（“写”的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan

’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenot

only…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表

示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,tot

ellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especial

ly,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)LET’STRY

•_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.•Welikedoingkindsofsport

s_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Thou

gh\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisour

report.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpe

oplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(BEAUTIFY)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendt

hevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeop

leliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeopleha

vetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(BEAUTIFY)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotrav

eltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohave

agoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwel

l.美(BEAUTIFY)Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.Proverb（谚语）/saying集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonours

tudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可

用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”Sojoinin

gtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Pr

acticemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theea

rlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Enjoysomeproverbs7.Itisnousecryingoverspil

tmilk.8.Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.覆水难收。一天一苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用谚语和例子（多用于“thebo

dy”）Writingskills（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.F

orexample,wecanuseclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮

助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstudents,

weshouldstartfromourselves.Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Savean

imals!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!结尾：提出倡议或号召First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthi

ng.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojoin

thegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemain

idea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.LET’SGOFORIT!123465DearMary,Ihear

dyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethem

ostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutoli

stentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhaves

aidishelpfulforyou.YOURTURNTOGOFORIT!（试填一填）DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,It

hinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEngl

ish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill.___

______,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYOURTURNTOGOFORIT!（CHECK）123Duringthewinterho

lidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedi

nacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,the

ywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalso

canhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checkandcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappene

d.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso,so满分作文标准：第一档：（17~20分）•完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。•句式多样

，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。•卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。•最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写随着人口的增多，

人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀······所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友

，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.提示的内容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(练练笔)Let’sHelpOurFriends（满分

作文赏析）Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.I

feelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseofth

eirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexam

ple,thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanim

alsinthefuture?Don’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem.Don’

tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!Thankyou!Goodbye!•Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+A

niceconclusion/endHOMEWORK:书面表达（共20分）根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意：1．字数60一80。2．所给的英文提示词语及表格所

提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写在答题卡上）假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold

,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActivitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,drawpicturesofplant

s,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketheearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemy

selftoyou.That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce（介绍）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfifteenyearsold.Iliv

einBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野营）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingin

gofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物学家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluckytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeo

urearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyf

avoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.Im

akealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Ilovepl

aybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/IwillbehappinessplayinggrowTheLifea

saGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkand

exams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon

’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,Iwillchangemyattitudet

owardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’llspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybesttodoeverythingstepbyst

ep!IbelievethatIcandoit!It’syourturn!（满分作文赏析）Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.Ithink

itisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others

)Friday4.Ican’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas

,Iwillrememberitforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungr

y.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsen

tencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）10.Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalo

ngstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogivei

tupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawa

noldladylying…16.Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.W

eallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddo

thingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefu

lly21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollow

ingsentencesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.