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Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?——中考写作指导课basicstructure(基本结构的安排)DearMr.Know，I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.Iwantto

tellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing

.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglis

hstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbefo

reinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultt

hingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyo

uverymuch.Writetomesoon.LET’SGOFORIT!Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody（正文）basicrules(写作考试规则)search（审）list（列）add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautif

Y(美：谚语/例子)健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大

家进行假日休闲。审(SEARCH)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根

据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Af

ewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.（thebeginni

ng）•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendso

rparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.（theending）加(add)•加首尾，使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子

应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurf

theInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingski

lls（“写”的技巧）方法一:善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldpro

tecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills（“写”的技巧）她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan

’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtoca

rrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills（“写”的技巧）1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,al

though\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:inste

ad,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:

tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:all

inall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)LET’STRY•_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkin

gtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.•Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hes

toodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast•Howdopeoplespend

theirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurf

theInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhore

laxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(BEAUTIFY)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltoget

awayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternetto

haveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewho

relaxwellworkwell.美(BEAUTIFY)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringthehol

idays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Asthesayinggoes,“Allwo

rkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.”Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(BEAUTIFY)Andtovis

itfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.Proverb（谚语）/saying集中注意力于学习Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies.Asthesayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains.”Weshouldc

oncentrateonourstudies...加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joiningth

eEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.Asthesayinggoes,“Practicemakesperfect.”SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish.加谚语(Proverb/sayin

g)可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。加谚语(Proverb/saying)可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。Enjoysomeproverbs1.Practicemakesperfect.2.Thinktwicebefor

eyoudo.4.DoastheRomansdo.三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。5.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.3.Wherethereisawill,ther

eisaway.6.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Enjoysomeproverbs7.Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.8.Anappleadayk

eepsthedoctoraway.9.AllroadsleadtoRome.10.Nevertoooldtolearn.覆水难收。一天一苹果，医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。活到老，学到老。方法四:妙用谚语和例子（多用于“thebody”）Writingski

lls（“写”的技巧）青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample,wecan

useclothbagsinsteadofplasticbags,stopusingnapkins,plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy.加例子加例子在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。Ioftenhelpmyp

arentsdohousework,suchaswashingdishes,foldingtheclothes,takingoutthetrashandsoon.Let’s…Doitnow!/Don’tdoitagain!Asstu

dents,weshouldstartfromourselves.Don’twait.Joinusnow!Starttojoinusnow!Don’tputitoff!Becomeavolunteertoday!Howamazing!Ican’twait!Saveanimal

s!SaveOurselves!Saveourplanet!Itwillbegreatfun!结尾：提出倡议或号召First，someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.Wethinkstudyin

gEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepup

Englishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’

tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weof

tenusewrongwordsandsentences.LET’SGOFORIT!123465DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadvicefo

ryou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEng

lishclubtopracticeEnglish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorni

ng.Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpful

foryou.YOURTURNTOGOFORIT!（试填一填）DearMary,Iheardyoudidn’tdowellinEnglish.Hereissomeadviceforyou.Yours…________________,IthinkreadingEnglisheve

rydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant._______,youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEn

glish.Youknow,“Practicemakesperfect.”______________,itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning.Itcanimproveyourli

steningskill._________,EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou.TobeginwithOfcourseInfactThenYOU

RTURNTOGOFORIT!（CHECK）123Duringthewinterholidays,Ithappenedalotofthings.Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermothe

r.Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall,wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner.Weaskedwhathappenedonher.Shesaidshecuond’tfoundhermother.Sowestartedtohel

ptshetofoundhermother.Luckily,wefoundhermother,theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy,too.Ithinkitwasthemostunforget

tablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers.ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays.Checka

ndcorrectthisarticle.alotofthingshappened.helpingIwereshoppingcryinghappenedtocouldn’tfindhelpherfind.Theycouldalso

,so满分作文标准：第一档：（17~20分）•完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全，立意高。•句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，结构合理，具有逻辑性。•卷面书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏

密合适，书写美观。标点，大小写正确。•最好能有一两个亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）规范三写：大小写,拼写,书写随着人口的增多，人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住，而且需要越来越多的食物。人类把森林变成了耕地；新的城市

和道路占据了动物的栖息地；许多动物遭到猎杀······所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝。然而动物是我们人类的朋友，我们有责任去保护他们，而不是伤害或猎杀它们。请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：1.语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整；2.提

示的内容要全部用上。It’syourturn!(练练笔)Let’sHelpOurFriends（满分作文赏析）Withtheincreasingpopulation,humanneedsmoreplacesto

liveinandmorefoodtoeat.Asaresult,wechangetheforestsintofarmland.Ifeelpityfortheanimals.Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanima

ls’habitat.Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur.Thereusedtobelotsofanimals,butno

wmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior.Forexample,thereareonly2500manat

eesintheUSAnow.Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear?Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture?Don

’tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends?Iknowyouransweris“No”.Soit’sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillin

gthem.Don’tputitoff！Let’stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday!Thankyou!Goodbye!•Agoodpassage=Arighttitle+Ahealthybody+Aniceconcl

usion/endHOMEWORK:书面表达（共20分）根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英文文段。注意：1．字数60一80。2．所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信息必须都用上。（可适当发挥）3．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要抄写在答

题卡上）假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。name,ZhangBin,fifteenyearsold,liveinBeijing,favoritesubject,biology…InterestFreeTimeActi

vitiesFutureJobHopedrawinggocamping,drawpicturesofplants,enjoythesingingofbridsinnature.biologist,growupgoodfriends,doone'sbest,maketh

eearth…Dearfriends,I'mverygladtointroducemyselftoyou.That'sall.Thankyouforlistening.Dearfriends,I’mverygladtointroduce（介绍

）myselftoyou.MynameisZhangBin.I’mfifteenyearsold.IliveinBeijing.Oneofmyfavoritesubjectsisbiology.I’minterestedindrawing.

Inmyfreetime,Ioftengocamping（野营）,drawsomepicturesofplants,andenjoythesingingofbirdsinnature.Iwanttobeabiologist（生物学家）whenIgrowup.Ifeelluck

ytojoinyou.Ihopewecanbegoodfriendsanddoourbesttomakeourearthmorebeautifulandmuchgreener.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.Ilikemanysports,s

uchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesa

tschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutals

ostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybrin

gsstrongertobe/IwillbehappinessplayinggrowTheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies!NowI’minGradeNine.ActuallyIfeelthelifeis

quitedifferentfromitusedtobe.NowI’masbusyasabee.There’salotofhomeworkandexams.TheonlyfeelingIhaveis:Th

elifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging!!There’sanoldsaying:Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail.Idon’twanttofail,soIcreateaplanfort

hefollowingdays.SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit,IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow.I’l

lspendtheresttimeefficiently.Asthere’snoelevatortosuccess,I’lltrymybesttodoeverythingstepbystep!IbelievethatIcandoit!It’syourturn!（满分作文赏析）Findoutthem

istakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.1.Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried.2.Ithinkitisanunforgetablethingbeca

useIhelpedsb.climbedtiredunforgettablesomebody3.Onafridayafternoon,Iwentshoppingwithmymother.Spelling（拼写）（others)Friday4.Ica

n’tforgetthatday.Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether.Ican’tforgetthatdaybecause5.Whatacrazydayitwas,Iwillremem

beritforever.!Capitalletter（大小写）Punctuation（标点符号）6.Iwillrememberedthatdayforever.remember7.Ithoughtitishungry.was8.Mygrandmotheralwaystidyu

pmyroom.tidies9.Howunforgettablethisthingsis!thingFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Tense（时态）Verbagreement(主谓一致)Wordform(词形）10.

Inmyfather’shelp,Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore.Withmyfather’shelp,11.Tocutalongstorytoshort,….Tocutalongstoryshort,…12.IwenttoShihuabyabuswit

hmymother.bybus13.Mymothertoldmedon’tgiveitup.toldmenottogiveitupFindoutthemistakesinthefollowingsenten

cesandcorrectthem.Phrases(短语和固定搭配）14.Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad.sawanoldladylying…16.Weplayeds

nowinfrontofhouse.playedwith15.Isatonaseat,listeningmusic.listeningto17.Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow.Weallwereafraid.wereallFindoutthemis

takesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem.Missingwords（漏词）18.Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands.withthehouse19.Itistiredwork.tiringWords’

order（词序）Usingwrongword（选词错误）22.Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart.carefully21.OneSundaymorning,IwenttoSh

ihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl.IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme.Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsent

encesandcorrectthem.ChineseEnglish（中式英语）Inmylife,manythingshappened.20.Inmylifehavemanythingshappened.