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1得分要点1、字迹清晰。每段首尾的字迹必须非常清楚。其实阅卷老师无论看什么作文，他的重点一般都是放在每段的首尾，首尾必须吸睛。2、前后呼应，主题升华。有些乱七八糟八竿子打不着的就不要乱说，读后续写一般都划出了提示词

，这些提示词其实都是续写的线索，必须串联使文章紧凑。但最重要的就是主题升华，弘扬人性的真善美。3、高级词汇怎么放？读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外，最重要的是高级动词！因为续写侧重叙事，

里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的，比如cry，这就过于简单，要侧重细节描写，toshow,nottotell,高分作文一般就会写，Withshouldersshivering,hertearscannothelpstreamingdownherface.她

的双肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，都要事先做好准备（注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级词汇都要是最好的，熟记于心，一直用即可），侧重刻画描写

，脸，手，眼睛都可以描写。4、关于情节，提倡一波两折。虽说读后续写没有字数限制，但是考虑到字的大小与整体篇幅限制，一般两个波折即可，如事态变坏一个转折，最后事态好转一个转折即可。侧重人物矛盾与心理冲突，比如两

人之间的猜忌，后重归于好，类似小学生作文。2写作技巧1.从原文中整理出3～5个小的情节，从中推理出续写的主要情节。情节不能自己读后凭空想象，按自己看过的小说、电视剧情节适当推理。2.根据两个段首语来推理情节。段首语往往决定着这一整段话的走向，不可衔接不当。3.根据关键词

来推理情节发展。原文中关键词一般会在十个左右，也并不是都能用上的。有一部分关键词对于预测下面的情节是很有导向意义的，因而会在后文中用的到。关键词中，有关于情感的连接的有关于时间的指向的，有关键句线索反复出现

的，要做的，是串联前面的伏笔后面是否有所体现，前文的人物关系是否把握，以及把握后是否在续写中使矛盾凸现既而解决，这些都是决定了分数高低的因素。一般答案是可以体现这些伏笔与连接的，如果严重偏题，首先要考虑是否读懂文章，其次，杜绝天马行空的续写，需要回归文本，不需要与标准答案一致，但要体现前文的伏

笔，线索，转折关系，这方面考察的是理解能力与阅读预判能力，需多练习以提升，加分项是主题升华，鸡汤加持无需多言。4.根据故事需要，合理地丰富、有条理地增加一些次要的情节。比如人物的表情、动作、心理活动，细节描写等。5.根据生活常

识或者社会经验，丰富文章的细节。不可闹出不合常理的笑话。成为改卷老师紧张改卷期间的谈资。6.平时多练习续写微作文，找到自己所能掌控的语句长度。7句*20词=140词，8句*20词=160词，10句*15词=150词。其实续写并不是很可怕，一篇读后续写10～15句，就可以达到字数。然后

分开两段，每段也就5～8句话。7.多种句型反复练习、尝试，找到自己能够驾驭的句子类型。这样的好句可以加分不少。简单句、并列句、复合句。当然建议复合句也只是基础的复合句，无需过于复杂，有时候牵强用上反而碍事。8.平时注意多积累记叙文、故事方面的词汇、句型和句段、丰富自己的记叙文类英语语言的材料库。

考试中用出地道的英语句子，老师一定会很欣赏。脑中先成文，落笔就一气呵成。相对简单部分，直接书写在答卷上；重点部分可以先在草稿纸上写一下，斟酌一下词句的使用，然后誊抄上去。3表达分享脚部动作：1.ThenLisastoodupandmadeherwaythroughthecrowdtow

ardme.2.Lisaplantedherfeetfirmlyinfrontofme.3.Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedpatiently.4.Reubenran/rusheddo

wnWaterStreet,tremblingwithgreatpanic.5.TheshadowswerelengtheningwhenReubenarrivedat（动作）thefactory.6.Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop.7.Rac

inghome,Reubenburstthroughthefrontdoor.8.Disappointedandfrustrated,thepoormanmadehiswaybacktohisfamily.9.Suddenly,thewomanstoodupandent

eredthehouseintears.10.Andyet,theyalljuststoodtherestaringatme,motionless.11.BelleRingernoddedthoughtfully,andFranniehurriedo

fftowaitontherestofhertables.12.Iledthemtowardalargecornerbooth.Icouldfeeltherestofthestafffollowingbehindaswemarchedthroughthediningroo

m.13.Idraggedmyselfthroughdailychores,feelingexhausted.14.Theelderlymanfledawaywithgreatpanic.15.Themansteppedback/stepped

ontotheplatformtotakeagoodlookatthepaintings.16.Heleapttohisfeetandrushedoutofthelivingroom.17.Hesprungfromhischairandrushedtop

ickupthetelephone.18.Hejumpedupandrushedoutofthelivingroom.19.Shejustsattherestaringintospace20.Thekidssataroundacampfire21.Pleaseremainseateduntily

ournameiscalled.22.Heseatedhimselfcomfortablyatthefootofthebed.23.Hetookhisusualseatatthefrontoftheclassroom.24.Thatmanis

hurt,he'slimping.25.Hewassodrunkthathestaggeredallthewayhome.26.Shestumbledupstairsandintobed.27.Shetiptoedtothebedsoasnottowakethebab

y.28.Theystrolledaroundthepark.29.Theyenjoywanderingthroughthecountryside.30.Hepacedupanddowntheplatform,wai

tingforthetrain.31.Demonstratorsmarchedthroughthestreetsofthecity.32.Ababycrawlsbeforehecanwalk.33.Pauldecidedtoedgeawa

yfromthecrowd.34.Thecatcreptsilentlytowardsthebird.35.Theboysneakedinwithoutpaying.36.ImustdashorI'llmissthetrain.37.Shegoesjoggingeveryday.38.Hetri

ppedoverthestepandfell.39.Thegrouphikeduptothetopofthehill.40.AsIwassittinginthepark,Iwatchedascouplesseemedtomeander

aroundhappily.手上动作：1.Stunned,Istoodupandgaveheranawkwardhug/huggedherinanawwardway.2.Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintohera

rms.3.Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblousewildly.4.Themantookthesacks,reachedintohispocketandplacedfourco

insinReuben'shand.5.Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop.6.HeparkeddownthestreetfromBobby'shouse,andrushedtohisfrontdoor,tremblingwithexcite

ment.7.ThemangentlywrappedthegiftinbrownpaperandplacedtheparcelinReuben'shands.8.Doraliftedthelid,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.9.Seei

ngnootherpeoplenoticeus,IplacedtheChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.10.Shedidn'tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandtightly.11.A

sweshookhandswiththenewowners,Itoldthemhowfortunatetheywere.12.Hepattedmyhead,andinquired:“Isthereanythingparticularyouwant?

”13.Hewassqueezingmywristsohardthatitached.14.Shestrokedherfingersthroughmyhair,andsaid:“OfcoursethereisaSantaClause.”15

.Shehandedthenapkintome,andthree$20billsfellontomydeskwhenIopenedit.16.Stevielookedatme,andthenathismother,thenpu

lledoutoneofthenapkins.17.TheclassclappedwarmlyasMr.Leepresentedmewiththereward.18.Hereachedintohispocketand

withdrewanote.19.Mrs.DamonpointedtothequotationfromAlbertEinsteinhangingonthewall.20.Calmlyhepickedupthebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash

.21.Shenervouslyfingeredhercollar.22.Hestrokedthecatandpattedthedog23.Shetappedhimontheshoulder.24.Hegraspedmyhandandweran25.Shegrabbedhe

rbriefcaseandrantothebusstop26.Thethiefsnatchedthehandbaganddisappearedintothecrowd.27.Pressthebutto

n.28.Pleasehandlethegoodswithgreatcare。29.Georgestoodsilentlywithhisarmsfolded.情感描写：1.喜乐①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上

的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。④

Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。⑥Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyest

hatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。⑨Iwaspleasedbeyondde

scription.我高兴得难以形容。⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。⑪Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。⑫Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。⑬Hereyeswere

sparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。⑭Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢着幸福。⑮Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激动得满脸通红。⑯Joywelledupinsi

deher.她心中涌起喜悦。⑰Iwasfloatingonair.我漂浮在空中。⑱Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。2.愤怒：①Iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。②Hewasfuming

withrage.他气得大发雷霆。③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。⑥Hisvoic

etrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。⑨Heflaredupatthew

ord.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。3.悲伤烦恼①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。②If

eellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颤抖。她

快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。⑤Sheburstintotear

sandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪

。/我的眼里充满了泪水。⑧Afrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一

层阴影。⑪Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他满是悲伤……⑫Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。⑬Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.这些日子他情绪低落。4.害怕：①Heturnedtome,with

hiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感到恐惧……④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因恐惧而窒息。⑤

Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedove

rhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了他。⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonp

insandneedles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。5.感动：①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感动，我们……②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltg

ratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，……