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高分作文“抢眼”表达法知识梳理23课堂练习4课堂小结5课后作业6CONTENTS目录典型例题课堂导入1写作秘诀六个好，让阅卷老师“无话可说”卷面整洁——好印象明确分段——好形式要点全面——好给分虎头凤尾——好内容巧用连接——好逻辑(

本节课内容）好词好句——好语言(本节课内容）：高级词汇和复杂句式要点分档，语言给分一.十大必用句型1.我认为…（Low）Ithink…/Inmyopinion,…高考十大必用句型1.我认为…（Low）Ithink…/Inmyopinion,…Frommypointofview,…Asfaras

I’mconcerned,…Onapersonallevel,…2.感谢你…（Low）Thankyoufor…2.感谢你…（Low）Thankyoufor…makesincerethanksandgratitudetosb.并列结构表达法：形成震撼力worthyandwealthy有价

值的pleasantandprecious珍贵的safeandsound非常安全的memorableandmeaningful有意义的honorableandrespectable值得尊敬的colorfulandwonderful美好的3.越来越多的…（Low）Morea

ndmore…3.越来越多的…（Low）Moreandmore…Sth.isinincreasingnumberagrowingnumberofsth.are…例：现在，有越来越多的人使用互联网。Inrecentdecades,agrowi

ngnumberofpeopleareusingInternet.4.有机会…（Low）haveachancetodosth.4.有机会…（Low）haveachancetodosth.own/possessanopportunityt

odosth.beinpossessionoftheopportunitythat…例：很高兴有机会给您写信。Iappreciatebeinginpossessionoftheopportunitytowriteto

you.5.我们将尽最大努力…（Low）Wewilltryourbestto…5.我们将尽最大努力…（Low）Wewilltryourbestto…Wewillmakeeveryeffortto…Wewillspar

enoeffortto…不遗余力例：我们将尽最大努力来保护环境。Wewillsparenoefforttoprotecttheenvironment.6.做…是很重要的（Low）Doingsth.isimportant6.做…是很重要的（Low）Doingsth.isimpor

tantItisimportantforsb.todosth.=itisofimportaceforsb.todosth可替换的形容词：important(重要的);necessary(必要的);diffic

ult(困难的);vital(极重要的);useful(有用的);helpful(有帮助的);essential(基本的);valuable(有价值的);indispensable(非常必要的);challengin

g(有挑战的);beneficial(有益的);convenient(方便的)7.我希望所有人…（Low）Ihopeallthepeople…7.我希望所有人…（Low）Ihopeallthepeople…Mysincereexpectationis

thatindividuals…8.如果…（Low）If…8.如果…（Low）If…Providedthat…Assumingthat…Giventhat…Onconditionthat…9.形容词：男：handsome,responsible,aggressive（有进取心的+）,tough（硬

汉）humorous=asenseofhumor,strong-willed（意志顽强）女：beautiful,charming,good-looking,brilliant,lovely,sexy,at

tractive物：valuable,fantastic(极好的）,wonderful,vivid,lovely,interesting,imaginary（有想象力的）,realistic（真实的，现实主义题材的）10

.高考“四大金刚”（历年高考中出现频率高）和谐社会环境污染生活便利不良现象10.高考“四大金刚”（历年高考中出现频率高）和谐社会harmonioussociety环境污染environmentalpolluti

on生活便利convenientlife不良现象harmfulphenomenon二.高级句式：1.Thereisnodenying/doubtthat…不可否认…2.Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectin

goureyestoomuch.再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。3.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.众所周知…Asisknowntoall,…4.Onnoacco

untcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.我们绝对不能...undernocircumstance5.Whenitcomestoplayingcomputergames,hewi

llbeveryexcited.当一谈到…时，…就…6.Given/Concernedherqualifications,Ithinksheissuitedtothejob.考虑到…7.动词不定式做连接

词tobefrank;tobehonest;totellthetruth;tobesafe;tobeshort;tomakethingsworse=unfortunately;tostartwith8.ThatisthereasonwhyIdon’tli

keyou.那就是...的原因Thereasonisthat...9.Itisthroughreadingthatwegetourknowledge.强调句型10.Agoodideasuddenlyoccurredt

omethatIcouldusemypocketmoneytobuyapresentformymother.Itoccurredtomethat…某人突然想到…strike（struck）、hit11.NosoonerhadIa

rrivedhomethanIstartedtoread.Hardly…when…一…就…on/upon+doing,theminute/second/moment,instantly+从句，主句Onhearingthenoise,Iopenedthedoo

r三.名人名言：1.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。2.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。3.Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难。4.Whenthereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。5

.Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。6.Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.吃一堑，长一智。7.Experienceisthemotherofwis

dom.实践出真知。8.Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。9.Morehasty,lessspeed.欲速则不达。10.It’snevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。11.Ajourne

yofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行始于足下。12.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.伟业非一日之功。13.Greatmindsthinkalike.英雄所见略同。14.Wellbegun,halfdone.好

的开始等于成功的一半。15.Factsspeakplainerthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。16.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。17.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言。18.I

t'snotthegaycoatthatmakesthegentleman.君子在德不在衣。19.DoasRomansdoinRome.入乡随俗。20.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。21.Toliveistolearn,tolearnisto

betterlive.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。四.各地作文必考内容起：描述现象故事承：表达感情好恶/阐述观点态度转：解释说明原因合：升华主题思想【例1】(2014北京)你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划

7月份一同去云南旅游；起2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；承3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。转合五.各个部分的高频词句.我得知..Iknowthat…（low）(湖北)我从网上得知你们学校提供食宿。(天津)我从老师那儿得知你将来我校交换。(安徽)我从你的来信中得知你近日容易发脾

气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。1.我(从…)得知Iknowthat…（low）Iwasinformedby…that…Iwaskeptuptodateon…sb./sth.keepmeuptodateon…2.随着…的发展，…Withthedevelopm

entofoursociety,...(low)(湖南)随着科技的发展，创新精神越来越重要了。(辽宁)随着校园生活的极大丰富，创意无处不在。(浙江)随着学生们对图书的需求增加，我们应该为他们提供更多有意义的书籍。2.随着社会的发展，…Withthedev

elopmentofoursociety,...(low)高大空Withthedevelopmentofoureducation/economy/culture,…Theeducation/economy/culturedeve

loping,…独立主格3.因为…(现象)，人们…Because…/Becauseof…(重庆)因为手机的出现，人们的生活发生了很大变化。北京)因为自行车太多，人们不得不排队等待。(福建)因为众多草根精英的出现，人们对成功有了不同定义。Owingtotheph

enomenonthat…（同位语从句）,individuals…Ourlivingconditionsarefacedwithanumberofchangesdueto…不能置于句首Thanksto…,ourlifeareexperiencinghugechanges,which…4.

xxx非常喜欢做某事sb.likes/loves/prefers…（low）(山东)我非常喜欢这样一句谚语。(湖北)在我小时候，我很喜欢收集邮票。(广东)McCarty女士热衷于捐款，帮助别人。清晰明确，

感情丰富才会吸引阅卷老师4.xxx非常喜欢做某事sb.isfascinatedwith…sb.isimmersedin…sb.isinlovewith…sb.iscrazyabout…sb.isaddictedto…（贬义）sb.isde

votedto…5.我们在…中应该高度重视这个问题。Weshouldpayattentionto…（low）(辽宁)我们在校园生活中，应该高度重视创新。(江西)我们应该高度重视高中阶段。(江苏)我们在学习英语的过程中应该高度重视(缩写)这个现象。5.我

们应该高度重视这个问题。Thisphenomenon/issueissupposedtodrawourattention.Wearesupposedtobearthisissueinourmind.W

earesupposedtobeconcernedaboutthisphenomenontothegreatextent.6.我们将尽最大努力…Wewilltryourbestto…(low)(四川)我们将尽最大努力在高考中发挥出最

好水平。(湖南)我们将尽最大努力利用好生活中的废弃物品。(广东)McCarty女士将尽最大努力帮助身边的人。6.我们将尽最大努力…Wewilldevoteourselvesto…Wewillbededicatedto.

..WewillmakeeveryefforttodoWewillsparenoeffortsto…六.好词好句是“换”出来的1.给2.想3.想要4.感谢5.希望6.应该7.真实的好词好句是“换”出来的1.给giv

e2.想think3.想要want4.感谢thanks5.希望hope6.应该should7.真实的true好词好句是“换”出来的1.给giveoffer/hand2.想thinkemphasize/insist(虚拟语气）3.想要wantbeeager

to/longfor4.感谢thanksappreciation/gratitude5.希望hopeexpect6.应该shouldbesupposedto7.真实的trueinthecase8.好的good?9.开心的happy?10.重要的important?11.困难的dif

ficult?12.必要的necessary?13.有用的useful?14.基本的basic?8.好的goodremarkable/outstanding/splendid/fabulous...9.开心的happycheerful/delighted/befullofcheer/

joy10.重要的importantvital(必修一到选修八，越后面出现的词汇越高级）11.困难的difficultchallenging/tough12.必要的necessaryindispensable13

.有用的usefulcontributetosth/beneficial14.基本的basicessential15.现在nowadays16.机会chance17.人们people/persons18.一…就assoonas19.想出thin

kof20.节约save21.提到mention15.现在nowadaysinrecentdecades16.机会chanceopportunity17.人们people/personsindividuals18.一…就assoonasondoing/hardly...when/the

minute/instantly19.想出thinkofsbcomeupwith20.节约savesetaside21.提到mentionrefertoSomestudentsthinkthattheyshould

setasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.22.非常very23.一点alittle/bit24.有时sometimes25.如果if26.不得不做havetodo22.非常

verymorethan23.一点alittle/bitahandfulof(把抽象的东西具体化作文就能得到高分）24.有时sometimesoccasionally25.如果ifonconditionthat/assumingthat

/giventhat/consideringthat26.不得不做havetodocan’thelpbut①I’mveryhappytolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.①I’mveryhappytolearnthat

youarecominginSeptember.→I’mmorethancheerfultobeinformedthatyouarecominginSeptember.27.对…感兴趣beintere

stedin28.忙于做某事bebusydoing29.在…期间during30.大多数mostof31.只要aslongas32.例如forexample33.事实上infact27.对…感兴趣beinterestedi

nbeabsorbedin/becaughtupin28.忙于做某事bebusydoingberushedoffone’sfeet29.在…期间duringinthecourseof30.大多数mostofthemajori

tyof31.只要aslongasgiventhat/consideringthat/consideredthat32.例如forexampleforinstance33.事实上infactasamatteroffact七.高考作文

常考话题【校内】教学相长；互帮互助；课外丰富【校外】郊游参观；爱心志愿；环保能源；生活百科八.“5步检查法”挽救你的“烂”作文1查：时态、语态、主谓一致2查：句子结构3查：句式重复4查：词汇拼写、词数5查：Chinese-English

1查：时态、语态、主谓一致纠错:WhenIwerealittleboy,IalwaysthinkthatonceIgrowup,itwillbemuchbetter.①时态：WhenIwerealittleboy,Ialwaysthink

thatonceIgrowup,itwillbemuchbetter.②主谓不一致：WhenIwerealittleboy③句式冗余，主语不明朗：WhenIwerealittleboy,IalwaysthinkthatonceIgrowup,itwillbemuchbetter.2查：句子结

构陈述不如倒装好，状从不如分词好，肯定不如否定好，主动不如被动好。陈述不如倒装好例:我们学校坐落在一条河边。Ourschoolliesbythesideofariver.陈述不如倒装好例:我们学校坐落在一条河边。Ourschoolliesbythesideofariver.→Bythes

idesofariverliesourschool.例:我一回到家就开始看书。IstartedtoreadassoonasIarrivedhome.例:他一听到呼救，就跑去救那个小男孩。IstartedtoreadassoonasIarrivedhome.NosoonerhadIarriv

edhomethanIstartedtoread.HardlyhadIarrivedhomewhenIstartedtoread.状从不如分词好例:因为我是一个学生，所以我应该努力学习，尽力成为一个对国家有用的人。BecauseIamastudent,Ishouldstudyhardandtrym

ybesttobecomeausefulpersonforourcountry.状从不如分词好例:因为我是一个学生，所以我应该努力学习，尽力成为一个对国家有用的人。BecauseIamastudent,Ishouldstudyhardandtrymyb

esttobecomeausefulpersonforourcountry.→Beingastudent,Ishouldstudyhardandtrymybesttobecomeausefulpersonforourcountry.肯定不如否定好例1：每个人都在或多或少得影响着别人，也

受着别人的影响。Everyoneisaffectingothersmoreorless,andatthesametimeaffectedbyothers.肯定不如否定好例1：每个人都在或多或少得影响着别人，也受着别人的影响。Everyoneisaffectingothersmoreorless,

andatthesametimeaffectedbyothers.→Thereishardlyamanorawomanwhoisnotaffectingoraffectedbyothers.例2：老师每天都准时来Theteachercome

sontimeeveryday例3：他们总是工作Theyalwayswork.例2：老师每天都准时来Theteachercomesontimeeveryday→Theteacherneverfailstocomeontime例3：他们总是工作Theyalway

swork→Theyhardlyhavetimetorest主动不如被动好例:当今社会，我们也可以用手机来拍照或当电脑使用。Nowadays,wecanalsousecell-phonesascamerasandlaptops.主动不如被动好例:当

今社会，我们也可以用手机来拍照或当电脑使用。Nowadays,wecanalsousecell-phonesascamerasandlaptops.→Nowadays,cell-phonescanalsobeus

edascamerasandlaptops.3查：句式重复纠错:Iknowthat….Ilearnthat….Itwillbethat….Shethinksthat…Andfinallyshedecidedthat…突破主谓宾，用上倒装、强调、定语从句等4查：词汇拼写、词

数5查：Chinese-English连接词的巧妙选择低级连接词：按照时间顺序and,but中级连接词：按照逻辑顺序firstly,secondly,besides,moreover高级连接词：非谓语动词tobehonesthavingcons

idered...,...havingdone主动已完成done被动已完成好作文中必须出现的几个句式(必写的标配）1.分词的使用2.With结构3.It句式4.倒装5.定语从句1.分词的使用1）分词表时间先后：Hearingthis,a

fewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.(辽宁)2）分词写景物：Bathedinthesunshineanddelightedbyfantasticscenery,weheadedfo

r…3)分词写逻辑关系：Encouragedbythefactthat…,wemadeeveryefforttodo…2.With结构（独立主格）①描写人物：Hewascarryingabedrollandalargebagonhisshoulder,withalarge

suitcaseinhislefthand.②描写景物：Withthebrilliantsunshinecarpetingthewayhome,Irushedtothedestination,energeticandexcited.③描写事件：Aterribleaccident

happenedyesterday,withninepeoplekilledandalmosteightyinjured.3.It句式①Itis+adj./n.+forsb.todosth.Itisvitalforustolearncompu

terwell,becauseithaschangedourlifesomuch.②Itis+被强调部分+that…ItisthroughtheInternetthatwecanlearnmore.③It做

形式主语Itwouldmeanagreatdealtometolistentothetapeandlearnwhatiscoveredinthetalk.（全国卷）4.倒装①Only/Notonly位于句首Onlyinthiswaycanwe

…Onlybythismeanscanwe…Onlyvia/throughthismeanscanwe…Merelyviathismeanscanwe…②地点状语位于句首Onthewallhangsapictureofourfamil

y.③As引导的前置结构althoughthepictureseemsridiculousRidiculousasthepictureseems,itstillrepresentsaphenomenon/tendency/trendthat……5.定语从句.新事物新人物出场时用于介绍①两句并一句

：TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.→主语一样时，两句可并一句②which指代前一句话：Itw

asquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.(北京卷)5.定语从句①两句并一句：TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStre

et.ItisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.→TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.(全国卷)②which指代前一

句话：Itwasquiteanexperienceforusboth,whichI’llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.(北京卷)一、好词好句是“换”出来的二、高考作文常考话题三、“5步检查

法”挽救你的“烂”作文四、连接词的巧妙选择五、好作文中必须出现的几个句式